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Say Nothing Chapter 6
Without saying a word, Bette just nodded. The bill was paid and they went into the darkness themselves. Probably having more to drink than she should have to be driving, they only had a couple of miles to go to pull safely into the drive of Tina’s home.
“Are you alright to drive?” Bette asked with valid concern.
“Yeah, I’m fine. I can go on autopilot from here.” Tina smiled knowing that Bette was sincere.
As they made the drive back, it’s curious to think about who’s mind was where. Tina seemed relaxed but, a bit cautious. Bette on the other hand was a bundle of nerves. She felt as though she knew where this was headed and she wasn’t sure she was willing to go down that road. If they had just met and fell into bed that would be one thing. But, Bette was there to make a business proposal to Tina and at this time it was the most important thing on her mind. Damned if you do, damned if you don’t. Was there any way to win?
As they pulled into the drive beside Tina’s house, Bette decided that it would be best if she made the gesture. “Tina, I can take a cab back to my hotel. I don’t think it’s a good idea…….”
But before she could continue Tina interrupted her. “Stay.” It was said with such longing. “Stay with me tonight Bette, please.”
Bette was trying to say that she didn’t think it was a good idea for Tina to drive her back into the city but she wasn’t quick enough. “Tina, do you think that is wise?”
“I am not sure that I am able to say whether it is wise or not but, I do know that I want you to stay.” Tina never looked at Bette. Maybe because she feared looking into Bette’s eyes knowing that Bette would have extracted herself from this situation if she had had the chance. “Are you not interested?” Tina still never moved her eyes.
“How could I not be interested? You are quite possibly the most beautiful woman I have had laid my eyes upon. But more than that, you are incredibly sexy. I just want to make sure that in the light of the day tomorrow, you will still feel the same way”
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(66 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Have to say…this story is just amazing and wonderful to read…why you chose to stop just there is what promted me to write ths comment. Why? Why did you have to stop when it was getting really interesting? LOL Please, please post real soon. You’re killing me with the suspense. I’m sure it’s going to be scorching. I can’t wait. PPS. Thanks for this excellent chapter.
awesome chapter…
This story is a great read. Pls post soon.
Romance…wine…2 beautiful women…big sigh! How fast can you write????!!! ty
Absolutely love this story and I look forward to each of your posts.
this is such a lovely story, Bette all professional like and Tina the pursuer..now I CAN”T BELIEVE YOU LEFT US HANGING THERE!.. PPS
I can’t believe you left us there either :( (sad puppy eyes)… i was just thinking how strange it will be for Tina when she is in Bette’s territory and Bette gets all the special treatment….PLEASE post soon
Aren’t you missing a couple of pages? PPVS.
Wow! These ladies get right to it . . .Really love this story.
Love your story.. Hope you are going to write many chapters more. PPS!
This story is captivating!
Thanks DJRK, for bringing us such a charming chapter. The way you described Tina’s art work, all the gestures and details of B&T’s delightful dinner, plus Tina’s open invitation to Bette to spend the night with her, everything was just breathtaking for us. We do believe the pacing was extraordinary and the way you left the story was just perfect. It does make us anxious to wait for more to come. PPS Hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)
WOW!!! TEASE!!! Love it!!! I so hope this is not a one time thing. Thank you PPVS
WHAT!? you did not just stop there!! :) thanks for a wondeful chapter – PLEASE post soon!
Casual my ass. Wine, candles, silk pj’s. Now on with it cos I can’t believe you stopped here.
This is one fantastic story. I enjoy every minute of reading it.
Ummmm, the last two chapters (well, really all of them) were amazing. I get the feeling that this is not casual sex for either one of the ladies. Tina is the goddess of seduction in this story. Can’t wait to see what comes next.
wow… i guess i wasn’t too far off my comment on the last chapter… loving this… now babe.. bring it on..PPS
just caught up .great build up. i’m so hooked plz post soon.
arrrrrrr u cant stop there
this is so fascinating.. pls post soon!
Amazing story, my friend! PPS
OMG!! I was just getting warmed up. PPS!!
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HOW COULD U STOP THERE, YOUR KILLING US WOMAN!!!!!!!!
How could you just leave us like that?? I hope you are writing quickly and you can forget shout outs if it helps you post faster. : )
I love this and am looking forward to the next chapter. PS
please don’t make us wait too long for the next one :) great chapter!
PPS!=)
This is awesome!