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Scent (2)
"Hey Dana," I responded, Bette looked nervous so I put a comforting hand on her knee. That was a mistake. Both of our breaths immediately picked up though she looked completely confused.
Thank God for Dana who came into the room and said, "how was your…night?"
"Hey Dane," I said standing up, Bette stood up as well backing away.
Dana looked at Bette then looked at me, then blushed a wild shade a pink, "oh shit, I’m sorry! Did I interrupt something?"
"No, no," I said laughing, "Dana, this is my fledging Bette."
"Fledging?" Bette repeated confused.
"Holy shit! You converted someone?" Dana said her blue eyes widening.
"That’s a fledging?" Bette confirmed.
"Yes, it means a piece of myself," I said.
"What the hell? W-why did you do that?" Dana asked looking at Bette.
"She was in a burning car, she was dying," I explained.
"B-but you’ve seen people die before and you didn’t convert them," Dana said.
"This is different," I said stepping closer to her to say in her ear, "she has the scent."
Dana gasped and said, "oh well that explains it."
"Wait, what did she say?" Bette asked.
"Nothing important, did you feed yet?" Dana asked.
Bette rubbed her throat again and said, "no."
"Try not to let her kill anyone," Dana said. I gave Dana a sad smile. The transition into vampire was such a hard one for her. She was converted during world war II while she was in England by a selfish vampire named Lara. Lara kept her as a sex slave and let her run wild with her instincts. Dana killed so many people including her younger brother, and then I saved her.
That involved a giant fight with Lara in which I ended up killing her with one of her silver knives. That didn’t end too well because, as in the nature, Dana attacked me to try to protect Lara.
It had to bite her to gain control over her and then we started our journey together. I trained her and we became really close. Completely platonic though, no sex.
"Tina," Dana said breaking me out of my trance, "you okay?"
"Um yeah, I should go huh?" I said motioning to Bette, "follow me."
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I’ve had a crap day at work and i come home to this amazing story THANK YOU! i love it.
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Kinda really like this story! Really really!:)) PPS
They seem to be in trouble now… It’ll be interesting to see how they get out of it. Thanks for the post. :)
god even dead jenny stirs up shit…grr lol love it please continue
Interesting chapter,Jenny’s a witch, that suits her! Dana under the spell of Lara and Tina her superhero is fun.Shane and Carmen as volunteers is rather odd but cool especially for Shane. Will they be converted at some point? Don’t tell me Alice is a witch? post soon.
This is better than Twilight and True Blood! Love this story!
so shane and carmen get it on after being bitten by vampires… hmmm… whatever works for sex life dude! lolgreat story so far!
Jenny always means trouble.AMAZING story.PPS
That was awesome and damn jenny, still give peoples trouble after she deat. Hope Bette and Tina gonna be ok, please post more, thanks!
Yuck no I don’t like Edward or Bill either! I love Pam haha and Eric well anyway GREAT chapter can’t wait for more!
LoL … See what I meant?! Even dead Jenny still brings trouble :-( … Sometimes I kinda “understand” why IC do it at S6 :-p … Anyway your vampire version is fun to read, looking forward to your next chapter :-)
Excellent update. thank you love this story.