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Scent
"Thank you," I said hanging up the phone. I squint my eyes again into the car. I can’t just leave this, something is telling me to stay. There’s someone in there. I just know it. A desperate cough gives me my answer and I jump into action.
I rush through the flames knowing it could not damage me and I latch one hand to the door. When I realize the door is stuck I simply yank the door out of its hinges and throw it onto the street.
That’s when I gasped loudly. I smelled it before I even saw who it was. The scent. This was the scent, this was my one true love. Desperation started to fill my lungs when I heard the desperate gasps from my mate.
I snapped the seat belt in half and carried her limp, bleeding body out onto the street, far away from the car that was seconds away from exploding.
I ran as fast as I could, clutching her to me, hearing the loud explosion of the car as I disappeared from the naked eye radar. Running faster than the speed of light I ran until I reached the thick woods that was home to my small, secluded cabin.
I laid her down on my bed so gently and looked at her for the first time. There was no one more beautiful. She had soft caramel skin, thick dark curls on her head, a long slender neck, smooth skinny legs and arms. There was so much blood but that didn’t bother me like it usually did, I didn’t desire her for that purpose.
I moved my hand to her wrist I felt the light pulse slowly dwindling. She was dying.
I let out a whimper of desperation, I couldn’t lose her as soon as I found her! I just couldn’t! I didn’t wanna have to do this. I made sure not to over the centuries that I have been alive, and it broke my heart to have to do it now and because of my selfish need. My need and my desire to have her. Her scent intoxicates me and I am lost. She is mine and I am hers.
I lean over her almost lifeless body and lower my face down to her throat. I release my fangs and pierce them into her neck moaning when the rush of human blood enters my system. It’s been a long time since I’ve tasted it since there’s not many humans who volunteer their blood to creatures like us.
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Great start.Please continue.Looking forward to the next 100 chapters.
LOVE IT!!! Love love love it! PPS
This is interesting and please post more, thanks!
Why didn’t the vampire just “glamour” Jenny and one other human? That way there wouldn’t have had to be a death and the victims would have had no memory of it. Oh well. Good start anyway… Thanks for the post.
Interesting story. Please continue. Thank you.
really hope u continue this one im loving it..
OMG PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I love Tibette and I love vampires so this is just perfect! And this chapter was just amazing!
Wow, strange but very cool. want to know what happens next. vampires are like pirates very cool!
Interesting storyline. Hope Tina killed Jenny and not turned her into a vampire. Is the rest of the gang showing up? In what form?
It’s so funny thanks ! I love it great pls . Post soon.
Please please continue. Ty :)
There shouldn’t even be any question marks at the end of that TBC. You gotta continue this, now I’m gonna be at work thinking about this story. Your writing is beyond awesome. Please don’t stop. ;o}
Please continue
TBC!!!! no doubt about it!! :-) why put “?” hehe.. Nice twisting on making Tina the converter! :-) oh, I hope she didn’t converting Jenny!! If so… Its really a simple recipe of craziness for eternity!! >_
Vampire Tibette, soo cool. Please continue.
Tibette, Vampire & Jenny dead. Please please continue. Thanks for sharing.
I so love this story. l have lost count how many times I’ve read, but every time I find some small details that just makes it even better!
Tibetter24, you have an amazing talent with words: “I made sure not to over the centuries that I have been alive, and it broke my heart to have to do it now and because of my selfish need” -just great!
I’ve read all your story, and you are really talented writer, I hope you come back soon!