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Scorpio Rising 6
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Scorpio Rising 6
Ch 8
Two of kind no one home.
“The house is empty…?”
“There is a note…”
‘What’s it say?”
“Dear love birds…have you ever seen anything more beautiful than miniature golf at night? Figured you wanted some alone time took the kid and the wife for a couple of games and ice cream…..have fun…John.”
“Well we are….alone….….um now what?”
“Shane….I guess this is our honeymoon?”
“Um yeah….uh should I carry you or something?”
We laugh at that one for like 3 minutes…
“You can’t carry me…your uh not strong enough…”
“Are you kidding I am a machine baby….look at these…”
“Very nice…you look very sexy today….how’s your hand?”
“It’s good how’s yours?”
“Better…because it’s from you….”
“Carmen…..I keep forgetting what I was gonna say…”
“Maybe it’s not true….”
“Oh no it’s true….I just …I just get distracted by you sometimes.”
“So……let’s go for a drive…..I don’t wanna be here….”
“Ok….let me put the food away I’ll meet you in the car….”
So we drive around some more finding a nice park to talk in. She gets out walks over the swings and sits on one. I join her. She seems sad. She shouldn’t be. This should be a happy moment for her.
‘Hey….you seem sad…what’s up?’
“Nothing. I don’t know….I feel like there is not enough time. Like something is just waiting to take from us again…..”
I get up from my swing and go and kneel in front of her. She was staring at the bandage on her hand. I got where she was coming from. How to reassure her…..?
“Hey look at me….look at me. We can’t worry like that. It’s a waste of time. We have been wasting time for a while…ok…let’s stop….it’s love, our kid, our life…nothing else. That means no sitting around waiting almost wishing for something bad to happen ok?’
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loved it, the last part with shane adn carmen talking about marina was really funny, great update i love this story please keep it up.
I like the fluff amongst the intense drama and sex… you write so well… I am so in love.
Shane: “Carmen… Jesus, he can hear you” Carmen: “Who Jesus?” That was fricken hilarious. And who said “Shit” and now got Marco saying it? (that was awesome too. “Shiiiiiit”) I wonder if the ol’ ball ‘n’ chain will make Shane sleep on the couch. She shouldn’t. It’s not Shane’s fault she ran into an “old flame.”
love it but u would love to see more of Marco lol i love that kid.
I also enjoyed the dialogue between Shane and Carmen concerning Marina. Can’t wait to see how Carmen deals!
Can’t wait for them to start working on PI stuff it should make for some great drama. Love your writing and I am looking forward to more of this story!