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Scorpio Rising 8
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Fuck……
“I don’t know what I want Shane. I am just as messed up about all this as you are. Shane….you have a lot of things around you. Things that you are not being truthful about. Can you honestly tell me that you can keep this life up?”
“I ……I don’t know…You are right about everything. I can’t pinpoint things that are wrong with me. My life has always been fucked up. I don’t know how else to be. I saw my father shoot my mother, I killed a guy when I was 19. I slept with hundreds of women as a hobby; I slept with more as a job. I stole things; I beat the shit out of people with my friends. I drink a lot, I did drugs, man I did a lot of fucked up shit just to survive…..then I met you. I didn’t think it was possible to live and feel. I didn’t think it was possible to feel love or feel loved. I knew it you know as soon as we met. I knew that I was in love with you. Did I ever tell you that?”
“No I don’t think so.”
That’s right I told the way she use to be in a dream of all things…..
“Carmen I don’t how to be happy. I am trying. Really I am.”
“I know baby. I know. We have to stop this. We are destroying each other.”
I knew destruction well. I was born and raised and fed destruction. Destruction in the morning, destruction in the evening, destruction at supper time……
“You know my parents use to fight like this all the time. They use to have these intense arguments that always ended with one of them bleeding and the other crying. I would wake up in the middle of the night and I would hear that sound….and I knew they where fighting again.”
“What sound?” She asks, curious, scared of the answer.
“It was…..this sound of rapid movement, like feet scuffing the floor. I remember one night my mother woke me up….telling me everything was gonna be alright. I could see her lips bruised and the blood….Then I heard these cops telling pop to put his hands behind his back…..I saw the cops cuffing him, saw the look on his face like he was letting me down….”
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I had totally forgot about the manly looking Carly :} I wonder if Carmen really wants Marina or just wants her because Shane wanted her. There relationship is so complicated, yet so intense! I think Shaen does need to feel that familiarity of the Carmen she initially fell in love with, and maybe it will do Carmen some good just as well. Yet I have to agree with John also, is still is about the little boy.
ok wow great update but my carmen wanting someone not shane uhhhh nooooo please nooo hopefully its just her being jealous and seeing marina will trigger old feelings for shane. great update love this story
Carmen wants to know abt Shane from someone else for a change. and i guess thats how shez interested in Marina. well its just an assumption but then again with our dear NDF here our assumptions are mostly proved wrong. she cant stop surprising us! but oh well, luv her for that! :D
how can you leave it like that update like noww!!!… shit carmen liking marina..something bad is going to happened, i mean shane’s mental health its really bad soo more drama is going to kill her
Really great update. I’m really interested in the new twist you just pulled. Camen interested in somebody else that Shane and Shane don’t know how to react to that. It’s just great. I have my very own opinion about those reason. But not gonna tell ya. Gonna wait and see if I’m right first. After I’ll tell you cuz I don’t want to infuence your story. And just for the record I don’t care if Carmen and Shane don’t end up together in the long run. I want caracter developpement and I’m served with your story about evélution of caracter. That’s the main reason I loved all this series.
Oh Shit! Talk about spicin’ up or blowin’ up your relationship. Wonder whats gonna happen, w/ these two it could be anything. Great chap as always.
I honestly have no idea what is going to happen in this story, and I love it. This was a great chapter, you manage to be very detailed about a moment but at the same time move the story forward. What Shane was talking about in the beginning of this chapter reminds me of this poem I wrote about the intense fear that comes from the threat of losing someone you love. Excellent job.
I can think of a few reasons why Marina might pique Carmen’s interest, but I would have expected Shane to be jealous about it. Hmm. I’m sure it’ll be explained all in due time. Great update.
very kind of you NDF!Believe me I have missed you too! 5 stars is definitely not enuff for this story can I request for a 6th star? lol this story just keeps getting better! Carmen interested in Marina and Shane not knowing how to react to it? that is totally awesome!! Shane and Carmen on the road with the bike, no marco, john, miriam or a nice suburban life is great to read once again! reminded me of The Line Begins to Blur. they are starting all over again with all the uncertainity around them, im absolutly loving this new journey!! keep it coming!!
HEY! I like this story.