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SCREAM 2 CH.9
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Dana nodded. “Like a break”
“A break?”
Dana nodded. Alice freaked out. “What the fuck Dana, you need a break then buy a fucking snickers bar! But don’t treat me like something you can leave and come back to when ever you want”
“No, Al wait you don’t understand I-
“Fine Dana, if that’s what you want then fine” Alice started to walk away but Dana stopped her.
“Alice, please- Dana sighed. “um… listen I’ll move out ok? You won’t have too” Dana said her head hanging low.
“Please, don’t do me any favors you want me out? It’ll be my pleasure”
“Al don’t do –
Alice walked away from Dana and back over to Shane and the others.
“Hey Al you ok?” Shane asked. Alice could only nod.
Tina put her arm around Alice. “So is that guy really Damien’s brother?”
Alice nodded. “yep”
“So there was no Haven after all?” Carmen asked.
Alice shook her head again.
“We really need to get out of L.A” Tina sighed.
“Yeah we really do” Shane looked back at the factory as the cops where bringing out the bodies from inside.
Dwight walked over. “So far we’ve gotten Lara, Damien, Marina and Tim”
“Helena, you found Helena right?” Tina asked.
“Relax Tina, Alice drove that van pretty far in there, so it’s going to take a while to find her body under all the rubble” Dwight nodded.
“WATCH OUT IT’S COMING DOWN!!!” yelled one of the officers. Everyone ran off away as the factory came crashing down.
“Damn it!” Dwight cursed in frustration.
Alice and the others stood next to him. “Well, that doesn’t change anything right? You can still prove to us that her body is under all that right?”
“Well… uh”
Alice sighed. “In other words you’re not going to do shit”
“Look I meant what I said, you are all safe now so don’t worry” Dwight nodded. “And for safety measures I’ll send patrol cars outside of your homes and after we figure this all out I’ll personally stopped by and we’ll talk” Dwight offered.
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nooo. not carmen lol now shane is gonna freak and who ever killed her better run…lol
Oh f*ck!!! Why did you kill of Carmen??? Kill Tina instead please;) I love these kind of cliffhangers, even if it makes me jump in my seat and all nervous. Can’t believe it’s nearly the end of this great fic…makes me really sad. Yeah I have to agree with you, Al is a great character, along with Shane hehehe (so don’t even think about killing them anytime soon). Anyway, another funny and fantastic update. It’s 1.30 am, I should be in bed right now! But could’t sleep without first reading your update. Looking forward to your post! Great work!!!
Oh I forgot to put in my prognosis. The way I see it, Helena managed to escape from under the rumble, or even escaped before that. So there is a possibility that she’s still actively killing our girls. But…I also have another thought on this. Alice was on the phone, in another room. What if she wasn’t calling her editor…but…Carmen’s killer? Probably far fetched of me, but hey, you can never know. As to Dwight, I don’t know about him, but I think he’s ligid, even though I find it weird that he’s acting so calm and reserved towards Damien’s/Havens death. And then there’s the possibility of another character returning….I’m even thinking that Betty could have a part in it hahhaha. I’m going insane here!!! Update soon, can’t wait to find out the finale!!!
omg…you can’t kill Carmen, she’s hot. if anyone should die it should be Tina, she’s old and not hot
Damn this is scary, Dana and Alice fighting and now Carmen is dead. Is sad to see each of them going to die slow, why don’t they just kill all of them so they can be in haven at a sametime, so we don’t have to see the saded when each of them gone. My Bette I miss my Bette, ok I know who is the real killers in this is Bette, Tina and Helena and me Ut lol. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Tina’s old and not hot? WTF??? Mid-thirties isn’t old! Carmen doesn’t do a damn thing for me so hey no big loss. That’s right, not every reader of this story is on the same ‘ship. ;)
oh…not carmen…damn…why not just kill dana! she freakin deserves it!!! oh sorry..i’ll calm down. :)
Damn, I wanted that pretty penny too, but there’s too many twists and turns that I can’t even guess what’s going to happen next. But the most depressing news yet, is that the next chap is the last. *takes tissue and weeps uncontrolably* lol. So you killed Carmen? Or maybe she’s just seriously injured and doubled over in pain. One can still wish right? But honestly this was another effin awsome post! Can’t wait for the next. Oh wait, yes I can *starts to cry again*
UGhhh you and your cliffhangerssss HA!!! Well it was a good update and whats going on with my Danish? I trust you,so i will just sit back and read! You still do Rock sweetness! PPS
How could you kill Carmen.. I’m pissed off now. LOLGreat chapter, can’t wait to read the next.