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Seemingly Lost Chptr. 14
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Present Day, Still
Bette sat at home wondering why the message was so short and vague. Tina wouldn’t do that. Would she? The tiredness that was begging for sleep a short while ago was now gone and replaced with curiosity. Her first thought was to text back asking a dozen and one questions. But she figured that, that response would cheapen the spontaneity of the message. The decision to text back or ignore it were becoming to much to bear. Bette rushed outside and threw herself into her pool. She let her weight sink her down to the bottom. With her eyes closed she sat there, trying to let the water wash free the burden of this text message.
Shane heard the loud bang of Bette’s patio doors fly open when she was out back smoking. She stood up and briefly saw the top of Bette’s head and suddenly she disappeared with a splash of the water. Shane was worried about Bette, so she peered over the fence and saw that Bette still hadn’t surfaced. She rushed over and looked down at the bottom of the pool and saw Bette sitting there with her eyes closed and her cheeks puffed out.
Shane stood back and watched as fewer and smaller bubbles came to the surface. Finally Bette moved to the surface, Shane let out a sigh of relief. Bette still had her eyes closed as she let her body float atop the water she hadn’t even noticed her friend was standing there watching her.
“You know it’s a whole lot easier to swim without jeans and a sweatshirt on.” she said to her friend. Bette pried one eye open and looked over to where Shane stood. She smiled at her, it was so like Shane to not question the reasoning behind some of the most random things, it just flowed with her. Bette swam to the side of the pool and with a little strain she pulled herself out, she patted Shane on the shoulder and proceeded into her house, wet clothes and all. The look on her face wasn’t sullen or tired, she looked almost content about something. It was Shane’s hope that made her sit down and wait for her friend to reemerge.
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Yes an update!! nice to this back again… bette needs to go get her woman.. alice is too funny calling shane fatty,lol.. :)PPS
I am so glad that you have updated this story. PPS
I’m also very happy to see an update. Love your story
Great chapter, I like the process of Tina finding herself, n Alice is too funny:)
Thanks for the update……PPS
What would Bette do with out Alice and Fatty. Loved that. Now Go get your woman Bette. thanks
That was awesome and please post more, thanks!
Whoo-hoo, a new chapter! Marvelous, fantastic, brillant! Where do I begin…I was crackin’ up with Alice beatin’ on Bette and Shane, it was so good to have Bette laughing…so glad that Alice did the Alice-thang and booked Bette a flight and respond short and sweet to the mysterious text…I adore Bobbi more every chapter
Whatever happens, either Bette finding Tina or Tina going back to find Bette please let them find each other.
Netta..I was so excited to see this update!!! answer to your question..my daughter LOVES reading..she is 11 going on 20, of course. My son is 15 months and will grab a book over toy anyday…love of reading is a wonderful thing…and I sure hope you post very, very soon because I love reading this story. : )
I was hopping for an update from you, u really r a great writter. Keep em coming