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Shake- Chapter39.
The laugh hit my nerves like finger nails clawing down a black board, the look of pleasure glinting in the dark eyes was what set apart sanity from reason.
Max took a step back, watching me as if I were an animal she had decided to play with and now the game was over she was looking for her next thrill. I straightened up and walked past her, distance being my biggest necessity at that moment.
Where are you going? she asked, as if it was a surprise that I had decided to end this rather surreal bonding session.
As far away from you as I can. I said, without turning round.
I was joking, come on don’t go I don’t even know your name.
I didn’t bother to stop, I was going to pull some more clothes on and get out of there to see Millie. Whether it was a good job or not to leave Max on her own I didn’t care, there were certain things I could take and being held at knife point was not one of them. The sound of trainers echoing against the wooden floor in haste to catch up followed me to the bedroom. As I turned to shut the door, a hand whipped out to stop me.
Youre being very rude. she said between clenched teeth.
Maybe that’s because you held a knife to my throat, a simple hand shake wouldve been fine you know.
With that the she let the door slam shut, I waited a moment my hand still holding the door handle tightly. I couldn’t hear any movement on the other side, why were crazy people so hard to predict? Right then and there I could feel the anger bubbling up inside my chest, thoughts and feeling crashed into one another to create a destructive combination of frightened fury.
Moving about the bedroom blindly I found some trousers and a more appropriate t-shirt, pulling on Millies trainers I grabbed a hand full of cash and left the room. Max was not waiting outside and I couldn’t hear her presence in the close vicinity. Taking this opportunity to get away from the crazed psycho I moved quickly to the front door. With one last look inside the house I closed the door, the heat of the afternoon sun hitting me instantly. I squinted into the outside world and began walking down the over sized drive which I thought was pretty pointless, but then again I had never been able to afford a house with a garage, let alone a mile long drive way.
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(36 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
Guess who!!!?!
Amazingly written sweetie… Was experiancing “shakes” and other such withdrawl symptoms from u not posting!! LMAO…
Now heres a question I have never asked you.. why is it called “shake”?
Li manco. La speranza tutto è approvazione, il mio amore…
p.s… whos ur close friend? *wink wink*
Hey!
Dont worry abt the delay between chapters, we all know how life can get :D
Ur amazing at writing, I know I dont coment much :$ .. but im here every time. Thank you!
Hello… its so cute how in love these two seem to be! Hope Millie dont have too much of a fit ova Max… she shud have told Trixie earlier thou…
Anywho.. gt Chapter, cant wait for the next one
Missed ur story Dude! plz dont be away so long next time ;-)
Is Incendiary ur personal Cheerleader?? Cos she is doing an awesome job… as u are!
Thanks for the story
Totally psyched to see an update from the talented kat:) Thanks for continuing with this story, i really missed it. I too am anxiously looking forward to seeing how Millie reacts…keep going when you can, i for one will be eagerly waiting for the next one. Thanks mate:)
Cmon Girlies… comment a little. Dont be shy ;-)
Im sure Kat will appreciate reading wot you think :D
Oh Thank god ur back! I was about to drive down (up?) and see wots the dillio!
I love the direction this is taking.. gonna be interesting to see how Millie reacts to this little situation ;-)
How r u kat? and dont say Peachy…
Thank you again for sharing ur amazing talent and brightening my day!
Catch ya soon DX
Glad that you are back. Millie and Trixie must be in the states. Who is Max
kat you never disappoint, and I don’t know why anyone would give you four stars, you are so talented, I just love the way you write.