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She Gets Me — Chapter 5
Tina just looked at the guys and looked back at Bette. Bette leaned over and winked at Tina to help relax her.
All the guys started moving their bags and fishing poles out of the car.
“Mom said I could have the cabin for the weekend,” said Tina.
“Well, we heard you were here and wanted to go fishing, where’s Eric, besides we hadn’t seen you in so long. And we know how you like to fish,” said one blonde brother, “not like sissy Sarah,” he added under his breath as everyone chuckled.
Tina shrugged and turned to Bette, she bit her bottom lip a little, “Okay boys, one night here and fishing tomorrow and then you’re going home. No ifs ands or buts or I’m gonna tell Mama who exactly you used to visit across the lake at the girls camp,” all the guys stared at her.
“***** Tina, it’s not like we’re still 16, I’m married,” said one of the guys unpacking the bags. He turned and winked at Bette.
“I don’t care, you’re leaving tomorrow,” She took a deep breathe, “Bette these are my older brothers Dylan, Sean and Cole. And these are my two younger brothers, “Ben and Trip.” She gestured to the guys, “I guess the only sibling that you haven’t met is our older sister Sarah.
“Now Tina, you’re making us all look like a bunch of hicks, yessirree ma’m and Sarah’s pregnant and barefoot on the porch,” said Cole and he lifted his hat and did a little jig, “Bette, Dylan is married and works as a software designer, Sean is a soccer coach at our neighboring university, I’m an attorney and those two little rugrats are still in school. We all love fishing. And our not so girly little sister, Teena Beena loves it too,” he smiled and threw his bag at Tina. He swept off his baseball cap as any young gentleman would, “We humbly apologize for interrupting your dear sweet girls weekend, and beg your forgiveness from the bottom of our humble cold manly hearts but now that we’re here,” he turned back to tina, “make us some grub woman!” He threw another bag at Tina.
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(44 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
Loved this chapter! 2 funny!
That was funny!!!!!!!!!! post soon
Great story, i love this chapter it was hot. post soon.
Bette has a strap-on on? Is that what shocked her, Bette standing there in the middle of the room with a strap-on? Cool, still loving it. And you should drink some cough syrup for that nasty cough Teel, either that or stop having sex in awkward places, like being naked in opened areas LOL. Be hearing from you soon.
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Just caught up, love it. I hope Tina’s fam supports her.
Tina has a huge family. Ben seems cool. Tina didn’t tell him not to tell the others…maybe in the morning her brothers will surprise her & Bette. LOL. Hmmm, just what did Tina see as she opened the door? LOL. Please continue.
That was so great! Considering that Tina loves Kissing Jessica Stein, she should have been expecting what Bette did at the table. Well maybe not cuz Bette went much further but it’s kinda like the movie. I loved it! Can’t wait for more!!
Just fabulous . and I have to agree with
CROO – your story is very funny – i caught myself LOL several times. Can’t wait, but i guess i will have to, for the next chapter!
I want to see what she saw in front of her, and I can’t see it if you don’t write it. If you leave it up to my imagination, things could get ugly. Please post soon.
aww Ben is all sweet and Bette is all hot so now B&T need some alone time–can’t wait
I am getting a thrill out of the fact that every chapter has been NC-17 and funny as all hell!
Cant wait for the update….this story is da bomb!
What did she see?!! This story cracks me up! THe “fight” in the bedroom was so funny! LMAO! Thanks!
Tina’s favorite movie…..Kissing Jessica Stein?
tina’s brothers seem cool, especially Ben!! Hope you update soon!
damm that is a huge family
your story is fucking funny
I see you keep throwing in those cliffys.Great job.
I believe that Tina brothers loves evough that if she is happy they will be also, like Ben. Now lets see how the fishing goesCan’t you see Bette with a worm or minnow trying to pot it on the hook, The only thing she will catch is one of the boys hats with her hook, Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks
Good chapter. Damn Tina have alot of brothers, and they seem cold. Post soon , thanks!
WOW…page 2 was the best.
Was that line form KISSING JESSICA STEIN?
Best chapter ever.
this was a sweet funny chapter. I like how cool Tina’s brothers are. I hope the rest of them are as cool as ben. post soon please, I like it.
your fun! ;)
I intend to go back and read from the beginning. I don’t usually start in the middle. But I’m intrigued. So far very cute. Can’t wait to see what’s next!