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    She takes my breath away CH. 3

    Story written on November 26, 2005 by love_girl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57891
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    B&T Beginning, and some drama…


    Bette: “Hey Eric, I didn’t get the chance to speak to you and Tina much this evening.. But would you two like to consider going out for dinner with me sometime? So we can talk about art some more?”

     

    Eric: “Yes, that would be great Bette, I will ask Tina about it, and you’ll hear from me!”

     

    Bette thanks him for coming an gives him her bussinesscart. She stares at Eric as he walks to Tina and places his hand over her shoulders, than she turns around to go to her guests. What she didn’s saw is that Tina pushed his arm away

     

    Chapter 3

     

    Tina pushes Erics arm off of her shoulders, what is he thinking? That he can flirt whit ms. Porter??

     

    Eric says as he raises his voice: “Why are you acting this way?? Why are  you embarrissing me in front of such an important woman??”

     

    Tina: Well, if I embarres you so much, why don’t you ask her to be your girlfriend, I’m sure she would like that!! I saw her talking to you when you got our coates, you didn’t think I would notice, did you?!”

     

    They step into the car. As they drive home, Eric just keeps screaming at her, about how she’s just jealous, acting weird, and that this was an important evening that she ruiint for him.

     

    Tina thinks back to the first time he had an anger attack. It doesn’t happen a lot, but when it happens he explaint, it just gets black for his eyes, and he isn’t in control of what he is doing anymore. Sometimes he even hurts her. The first time that happened she got really mad, and threatend she would leave him. But afterwards he was so sweet, and promised her he’d never do it again. He also told her about his father, and how he used to beat him when he was just a little kid. It wasn’t his fould he said, it was in his genes, he promised he would go to therapy, but ofcourse, that never happened.

     

    When they arrive at their appartment Eric is still screaming. Afraid of what the neighbours would think, she tries to calm him down by telling him to be quiet and that he’s just overreacting. Eric just pauzes and looks at her. Tina can see the anger in his eyes, she knows him, she knows what’s going to happen

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    2. thanks for putting in the earring scene, but what happened to the kiss? i like the twist. tina better get it together and leave that abusing ass eric.

    3. just read all 3 chapters… now eric is an asshole… and tina is a bigger one for putting up with his shit… but i have a feeling she won’t too much longer… enjoying this story… please continue

    4. great chapter! poor tina, how can she let eric hit her like that and then accept his appologies! he’s such an asshole, get rid of him soon! waiting for your next post!

    6. witty – right there with ya. fergz – honey foof up? and this is nothing we tink about?girl – dont like this kind of stuff. really pisses me off. hopefully bette will put on her wonder woman suit and foof eric’s ass. thanks.

    7. Great chapter! I agree with Amanda, how can Tina deal with Eric beating her?? 1 time is more than enough. I hope Bette kick his ass big time!! Post soon!

    10. No one has the right to lay hands on another person in angry. It takes a big person to walk away,and try to control themself. Glad that Tina lost the earring. Also Eric is a asshole big time. thanks

    13. I still like the twist to this story, but why is Tina putting up with Eric’s shit….she has to leave him and soon. Maybe Bette can help, I’m sure she wont mind :o))

    14. ok Love..I am catching up with my friend, albeez, and I am enjoying your story. Kill Eric, and please bring our girls together soon. albeez..honey..i’m done foofing around. I’m trying to catch ya.

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