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She will be loved
Once they were done Bette thanked Juan for his assistance and offered him a ride home, but of course he refused.
“Nahh I just came to bring you the car… I have to go pick up María… you remember her right?” A bright smile appeared on the young man’s face.
“Ohhh… I see… ok… good for you… say hi to her from me and I’ll see you around” Bette said with a wink and then hugged her friend one more time before getting in the car.
The ride to the house was made in silence. The girls were just staring at the windows, admiring the landscape. For Bette it was a familiar view but still she could not cease to admire it every single time she had the opportunity to visit. She loved the beach and the ocean, but it wasn’t until they arrived to the “little house by the beach” that the girls jaw’s dropped open.
Bette parked the car and opened the trunk, she got out and immediately started to download the damn suitcases completely unaware that neither of the girls had even attempted to move for they were unable to snap out of their trance.
It wasn’t until the brunette was half way through with what she was doing that her friends noticed her absence and were able to hear the noises coming from the back of the car. They all jumped out of the vehicle in a hurry.
Bette handled each of them their single suitcase and left Alice’s pile resting on the floor.
“Ok… let’s go girls… I’ll show you where we’re gonna sleep… I’m sure we all want to freshen up a bit before brunch” Bette said very exited.
The “little house by the beach” turned out to be a big lie. It wasn’t little and it wasn’t by the beach, it had its own private one so that made the house be “on” the beach instead of “by”.
The house was colonial style and it had an upper floor. Inside it was decorated with the most exquisite taste one could possibly imagine with paintings hanging in almost every wall and sculptures delicately placed on several spots. The furniture was dark brown and handmade carpets were found on the floors almost everywhere.
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Hey – you’re back – this was a great chapter and a great story! I can’t wait to see where it’s going. PPS or when you can
I have missed this one LOTS…thank you for coming back. Not need for apologies…I can’t wait for more and can’t wait to see what the morning brings. pps
Happy to see your back!!! Great Chapter!!! Thanks PPWYC
I am so glad you found time to post I love this story. I hope life and circumstance allow you to post soon and often.
Enjoyed that chapter. Keep posting please. Thanks.
Hey!!! Welcome Back :) So glad to see your update. Alice and her bags… too funny!
Good to see you back my friend. That was good and hope u post more, thanks!
Welcome back. Thank you for continuing this story. I love the interaction of the girls.
WELCOME BACK! You were missed, don’t worry about the break, important thing is thay you’re here now LOL. I’m dying to hear the talk in the morning as well as the backstory explored more to understand how they got to that point. PPS ;)
Sweet! Keep it up, thanks.
its been too long on this one. .
we’ve missed you and this story but we do understand that life gets in the way. but please do continue when we can. wonderful update!
nice u r back…
Oooo… any interesting stuff happening between B&T at the beach house? :D I’m still wondering why they were not together at the first place? Until Bette almost gotten married with Julia?
GREAT U R BACK! and they faced and voiced their love.
Enjoying, the story and this may be a trivial matter, but when was Tina and Alice introduced to one another and come to hang out in a comfortable setting that they all travel together.