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Shoot ‘Em Up: Chapter Eight
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“So have you gotten any more leads?” Helena looked over the papers.
Dana shook her head no. “We haven’t gotten anything else except for these two women,” she held up the pictures. “Vanished the night of the man was murdered in their home.”
“Did you check the neighbors?”
Dana nodded. “Yeah, but no leads, either these people don’t want anything to do with this murder, or they don’t know a damn thing.” She sighed and took a seat at her desk. “We have to figure something out before these girls end up dead or continue to be missing.” She rubbed her face with her hand.
“Well whoever wants them dead would be looking for them right?” Helena leaned back in the chair.
“Yes—,” Dana sighed. “but, we don’t know who would.”
“What about that girl McCutcheon?”
“As of now, McCutcheon is a ghost. No one has seen her.”
“Why don’t we go looking for her?” Dana looked at Helena.
“If you want to, go ahead. I have a few things to take care of.” Helena nodded and got up from the chair. She walked away, and Dana’s phone went off. She saw Lara’s name and ignored the call.
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“I did something really stupid.”
Alice looked at Carmen. “What?”
“I kissed her.”
“Who?” Carmen looked at her friend foolishly. “Shane?”
“Yes.”
“Whaaat? Why?”
“I don’t know. I had an urge to move forward and kiss her.”
“Did you like it? Was she a good kisser? How were the lips? Not too soft, not too wet?”
“Al!” Carmen scuffed.
“What? I thought I would ask. Well was she?”
Carmen smiled softly. “Yeah, she was a great kisser. Her lips were perfect.”
“Do you have a crush on a killer?”
“Don’t say that. That sounds creepy.” Carmen wiggled. There was a knock on the door, and they looked up. “Come in.” Shane walked into the bedroom and leaned against the doorway.
“Hey.”
“Hey,” Alice looked at Shane and then Carmen.
“I know both of you have been stuck in the house for the last few days. So I thought that we could go out.”
“Are you sure you want us to do that? Wouldn’t there be people after us?”
“I know a place that you wouldn’t be notice.”
“And where would that be?” Carmen asked.
“You’ll see, just get ready.” With that, Shane walked away from the door.
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omg this is all suspenseful and never know what’s gonna happen next. so many traitors and inside undercover..reminds me of Infernal Affairs and The Departed ha ha..Bette will freak if she knows Shane saved them..
Jeez the web keeps getting bigger…Helena’s dirty, Alice followed Angelica…awesome chap can’t wait for the next one!!!!
Sweet! An update! Thank you! I have been patient yet I yearn for so much more. LOL. Please post again soon. I am looking forward to some drama and action in this story. :)