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    Shoot ‘Em Up: Chapter Four

    “Fuck,” Shane pulled up on Carmen’s street, and it was flooding with police. She kept her distance as she watched the police walking in and out of Carmen and Alice’s house. Detective Dana Fairbanks and Helena Peabody walked into the house. Dana walked over to the body as CSI took pictures.

    “What do we got?” Dana crouched down, and Helena crossed her arms against her chest.

    “A white male, about 30 years of age. He has a gun shot wound to the back.” Helena began to walk around the house as Dana stood up. She stood behind the body.

    “He was standing here and got shot in the back.” She turned around and looked around. She heard glass under her heels and looked down. She leaned down and picked up the glass off the ground with a napkin. She looked up at the window and saw the small bullet hole from the window. “Peabody,” Helena turned around and walked over to Dana, and Dana stood up once again.

    “Was this a hit?” Helena looked at Dana.

    “Burrows,” the young officer walked over to Dana.

    “Yes Detective,” Dana turned towards him.

    “Who is the owner of this house?”

    “Uhh—,” he looked at his notes. “Carmen de la Pica Morales and Alice P-piecki—,” Dana sighed heavily.

    “Pieszecki.” He nodded.

    “Do you know her Dana?” Helena looked at her partner and friend.

    Dana nodded. “Yeah—we dated,” she whispered. “We dated in college, but she’s the past.” She looked up at the young male. “Officer Burrows, where are the two ladies?”

    “We don’t know,” she glanced at him.

    “You don’t know—has anybody gone out to look for them?”

    “I don’t know.” Dana wiped her mouth and sighed.

    “You better start knowing something Burrows. You and a couple of officers go on a search for these two women now.”

    “Yes Detective,” he walked away, and Dana put her hand on her waist.

    “Do you think they might know something about it?”

    Dana shook her head. “I don’t think they have that kind of gun power in this house.”

    “Well let’s take a look around,” Helena and Dana began to take a walk around.

    ———————————–

              Carmen was sitting on the couch, and Alice walked into the area with a blanket wrapped around her.

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    Comments

    1. Hey, AKIRA, we’ve just caught up on this story and it is quite interesting! Marsha & I are truly TiBetters, but you have developed a very unusual plot here and we are hooked. We shall check more on your updates. This is good stuff. Thanks for sharing it. Big hugs.-Lucero & Marsha

    2. wicked update, so you guys got a vaca today and I got work and snow, oh well our Thanksgiving was last month…don’t know why we have it, you got pilgrims and we got French fur traders ah well at least it got us you with a new chap :)

    3. Wow, nice doctor eh? Shane says she killed someone, and outside of spitting some coffee, she does nothing but tell her that her time is up!!! *cringing* OUCH! LOL. Very intriguing story.

    4. well, can not say a word.Actually I said more than a word lol. I hope somehow the group will end up at the good side of the justice. I love them and I want them to be good. PPS

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