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Shoulda – S3.2 – part 2
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Her eyes lost contact with Bette’s for just a moment as she was taking off her top. When she brought it over her head, she immediately looked again for Bette’s eyes, but Bette was now looking hungrily at her breasts. Tina smiled, pleased.
“We’ll work out the money problem,” Tina reassured as she arched her back slightly toward Bette, and Bette sighed but didn’t move.
“OK, baby?” Tina continued.
“OK, what?” Bette whispered, unable to tear her eyes from Tina.
As Bette swallowed and continued to stare at Tina, the blonde reached up and slid Bette’s pajama top from her shoulders so they were both naked from the waist up.
“We’ll work out the money problem,” Tina smiled at her mesmerized partner.
“And we’ll work out ‘us,’” Tina concluded.
“You’re so beautiful.”
“Bette, did you hear me?”
“Yeah, T,” said Bette softly as she leaned down, turned her head slightly to the side and began to suck gently on Tina’s breast.
“We’ll work out the money thing,” Bette said quietly as she moved to the other breast and began move her tongue and lips gently all over it.
“Huh?” groaned Tina.
“The money thing,” repeated Bette to a moaning Tina.
“Ohright.” Tina managed. “Take me to bed.”
Bette put her arm around Tina and with the other hand pulled down the bed spread. She carefully lay Tina down and removed her shorts while Tina lifted her hips to help. Bette stood up by the side of the bed with the shorts still in her hand and looked at Tina’s naked body as if she wanted to learn every inch of itagain.
Tina watched her with fascination and desire.
“Baby, come to bed.”
This broke Bette’s reverie. She dropped Tina’s shorts on the floor and pulled her pajama bottoms over her hips and down her legs.
As she looked up at her naked lover, Tina thought about how she never tired of this sight. It was the most incredible body she had ever seen or imagined. One time, early in their relationship, she had tried to imagine the perfect body and she always saw Bette.
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Ahhh. That’s nice. But I have to disagree-I have on rare occassion seen breasts so large as to be life threatening. Avalanche! Run for your lives!
“My breasts are too big.” Um no, for you they are just right. ;) Now, I wasn’t there, but I wouldn’t exactly say Tina got a good fuck. It was more than that. And thank god Angie decided to be good and stay quiet. LOL But to be aerious for a moment and touch the topic of Showtime, The L Word is the only reason I even have Showtime (well, that and that particular movie tier lets me have LOGO, but anyway). There’s no other reason to watch Showtime because I’m not into Weeds or any of those other shows, and the movies usually suck balls.
that was unbelieably sweet. thank you. this makes me feel a lil bit better about da sad parts dat are sure to follow in season 3. please post soon PEACE.
aerious??? Yess, i r a gud spelerr. That’s supposed to be “SERIOUS.” And funnyone, I’m close to being part of the dangerous crowd so yeah I have to agree with you there.
tks, and your correct about the showtime guys…so anyone know of an email address as outside of the US we can’t get on their site….let’s get mail’n
Well, Lamentamini, all I can manage is a solid “B” so I’ll tell you what. Let’s split the difference and we can each have a pleasingly ample pair.
BEE-YOO-TI-FUL!
i have 5 showtimes and really didnt start really getting into until thel word came on,so if thers’s no s4 illlive i may be sad but i will live.anyway great chapter i hope bette andtina try to work it out on the show 2.
As always that was an amazingly beautiful chapter. As for ShowTime…of course, it’s about MONEY. Everything is about MONEY, quality and viewership are the least of their concerns…it’s just business. That really sucks, but unfortunately that’s a reality with practically everything. Thanks for the update.
that was nice, really nice. : )
Just great. These stories are great additions to the episodes.
The only reason I have showtime is because of the L-Word. I would spend my money on the Sports Channel.Which I do I could by one of the writer a case of beer with what I pay for Showtime. If the L= word goes so does Show time/ Love that Bette and Tina are trying thanks
Very nice …I am new reader of your’s “Shoulda” caught my attention …I love it.As far as Showtime…I have it as well, and TLW is the only thing I watch sometimes QAF re-runs. I purchased the DVD’s. But, I agree that what do the ones outside the US do?
That was beautiful and sweet.
thank you
Woulda, shoulda, coulda…Please join me in adding SHO to your monthly cable bill. It’s the right thing to do! And who among us could deny Jennifer Beals anything?? Who? Raise your hand, you lying fool! Support TLW. Support the site! Thank$ Pancha!
to Jennifer Beals i can’t deny anything, i got showtime just for the l word…wonderful part 2 pancha, love it…we need more shouldas ;)
Great chapter, but going onto the Showtime issue if the ratings have dropped like somebody mentioned, then whats wrong with trying to get more people to watch it, who know’s Ms Beals might have some insight Information that it might get the plug pulled if they dont get x amount of viewers, so this is her way of trying to save the show that we all love
That totally should happened. Thanks for the great post–we can all dream right…..
You know Pancha I totally agree with you and if I lived in the States I would probably have showtime in support of the wonderful cast. For the rest IC & Co leaves me cold and despondent. She has openly stated in the Advocate that she does not know how many fans her show is pulling in and she can’t be bothered to understand the fans wishes. Freak her she’s worse than Joss Whedon. I can only imagine what a meeting between her and showtime exec’s would be like. She is not interested in the viewers and all they want are viewers that pay. pay. and pay some more. Viewers are becoming more and more disgruntled by the direction IC is taking in the show. I say give the viewers what they want and the viewers will give them what they want; MONEY. If I were JB and showtime exec’s I would be worried about the message the show’s producer is sending out. Viewers don’t want IC to damage her artistic merits but there has to be some form of give and take. The majority of the fans while appreciative of all the characters are fans of Bette & Tina and would like to see this relationship that she has been promoting since day 1 in the press and different interviews survive. If these fans don’t feel like thats going to happen they will find it hard press to spend their hard earned money on being frustrated every week. The quality of the show is lacking, mostly people show up every week to see that this couple, characters will be ok. So far fanfic is doing a better job at it than IC, she can’t even be bothered to sugar coat the destruction of this couple. And what I mean by this is give me insight into both characters, give me writing that does not leave me shaking my head in disbelief. Well I live in Holland and we will be getting season 2 this year. I’ll encourage my friends to watch it and support the show abroad but I don’t know how long this support will last; especially if she keeps taking this couple along this contrived path. Her actors are complaining, they are openly making snark comments about her new producer/saviour. Whateva IC, if the show ends it ends life goes on. I will still be a proud lesbian.
Just what I needed….a little bonding between them, so nice :o)) More please…
Pancha–love all of your stories.Things to help TLW: buy the DVDs, preferably from Showtime’s store even though they are more expensive at their store, buy the other TLW products Showtime sells (I bought the book), sign up for all of their cross-promotions (I am now going to get text messages on my phone–icky), buy the perfume when it comes out, write blogs and respond to blogs, create Myspace pages and promote the show, and so on. It seems to me that Showtime is using TLW as an experiment in alternate promotion methods and want to see if a small rabid fanbase can expand viewership or generate alternate revenue sources. Maybe we can run a pledge drive for a Betty/Ezgirl free episode!!! LOL
Great chapter Pancha and i have had showtime since season 1 and will continue to support it for the show and have also purchased season 1 and 2 dvd’s
pancha…that was perfect!! I am all for the letter writing campaign to Showtime..how many lesbians do you think we could get?hmmmmmm