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“Look, I promise I’ll keep it short.” Alice’s words sprang into the conversation long before Bette had a chance to do anything about it.
“I mean it Al, now’s not a good time.”
Bette finally stopped walking back and forth and promptly collapsed onto the bed. She felt like screaming. Today had been very, very long and the truth was: she was exhausted. Her patience has been tried The weather wasn’t agreeing with her for weeks suddenly the world was closing in But for one brief moment, everything melted away
She finally got what she wanted- or did she?
Just a few minutes ago it hit Bette how truly tired she was of acting of keeping things bottled up inside, of not letting anyone in yet for a few glorious seconds she actually felt like she was letting herself open up, but Eric had to step in and take that away from her.
Right now all she was was frustrated, even mad at herself, what was she thinking? Why did she just let Tina go? Now there was no telling what was going to happen.
A cold rush of wind drifted around the room and by this time Bette just turned towards the door, staring at it for what seemed like forever. She gave a frustrated sigh as she stretched out her hand and turned her wrist ever so slightly, gazing at her watch and observing as its small mechanical hands ticked away to tell the time
5:30 PM … Just as she thought!
It was now officially: later and still, no sign of Tina anywhere
What was taking her so long? How much time could it possibly take someone to find sugar and get rid of Eric?
“It’s only gonna take a while Bette” Alice’s voice whined, suddenly cutting into her thoughts. Then and there Bette half-wondered whether or not her assistant actually had the power to read minds but then again if she did, she would have hung up by now.
“What?” Bette asked unintelligibly.
Soon enough a frustrated sigh came from the other line as Alice took a while to catch her breath then repeated what she said all over again. Bette on the other hand patiently let her finish; not really having the heart to tell Alice that she wasn’t listening at all
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Thanks for that chapter. Odd formatting, I was hoping for 11 loooong pages! Did Bette lose track of time when getting Tina undressed then?
Thank you for writing back I missed your Story it’s been awhile that you posted Anyway Still Wonderful Story I Love it Please post soon.
WOW, this is a terrifically sexy story, I love it very funny and creative. Long awaited, I was thrilled to see a new chapter. Looking forward with much anticipation to the next…
Hey there gorgeous, yes this story was long awaited, it’s been so long since we had something from you… But this chapter was, in one word: AMAZING! Not to mention so very addictive, now make up for lost time babe and post more. Can’t wait for what’s next xoxHugsoxo
OMG!! i just started reading this story from the beginning and im not even half way done. but i couldnt take it nemore and i had to comment on how well the story is written and how u keep us on the edge at certain parts thinking its certain ppl and then its not them ill comment again once ive read the whole thing i just couldnt help myself lmao keep writing vant wait 4 the next post!!!
Tks for updating this story I was missing it…It sounds as if this Bette has bit more edge to her?? or am I just wrong, I was left thinking about Bette undressing Tina only to know that Alice was on her way over and they wouldn’t be able to continue…seemed different…but good, Pls continue and soon….tks
CMC,
Great to see another installment to this brilliant story.
Bette is quite the tease and totally in control in this version of events.
I love the subtle way she just slipped in the fact that Alice was on her way to the trailer after Tina was almost completely undressed and full of desire. Your skill and experience shine through in this scene as your readers are carried along on this marvellous journey.
After finally getting rid of Eric then Alice and Shane joined the fray; no wonder Tina is confused and frustrated. I am sure that she will make Bette pay for this misdemeanor.
Thank you for creating and developing this unique and fantastic fan fic. I will be waiting for your next post to see where you take these characters next.
Your Loyal Fan.
what a tease Bette is.
I just love this story. I wish you would post more often. You have me and I’m sure, everyone else hooked!
Where have you been? alice has great timing lol weird formatting though please post soon
Good to see you again. Good chapter. Damn man Eric is such an ass, just want to kick him out of their way. Bette and Tina are hot and can’t wait to see some more hot of Bette and Tina. Alice is funny, and the water is so funny, love it. Post soon please, thanks!