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Showtime: Chapter 9
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“So is it true?” Tina’s words floated through the elevator.
“Hmm?”
“That you’re staying in the room beside mine” she supplied.
“Oh yeah, room 306 I had no idea you were so close.”
They both smiled at each other and just when Tina thought the awkwardness between them had elapsed Bette asked something she wasn’t exactly expecting.
“Any plans on going down?”
“What-”
“I need to know the floor you’re headed ” Bette finally spit out, her focus now fully centered towards the ever blinking lights of the elevator’s floor buttons, indicating where they should be headed. Another embarrasing moment and she would be done for.
“Oh just the ground floor.” Tina smiled slightly, watching as Bette manipulated the elevator’s controls to head towards the main floor.
Just when they thought there wasn’t anything left to say, Bette’s words finally sneaked in
“I’m sorry” she said, almost inaudibly, though it was clear enough to reach Tina’s hearing in the end a reply never came
Instead they just stood there side by side, staring at the elevator doors blankly, as they traveled from floor to floor. Then, when the elevator finally came to a stop on the main floor, Tina turned and gave Bette a quick kiss, directly on the lips. It was so quick the lovely brunette barely had time to react. Then, without skipping a beat, the doors opened and Tina rushed out, letting the doors close again and leaving one Miss Porter baffled and alone inside.
The next morning, Tina awoke to the sound of falling water coming from just across the hall; someone was taking a shower. Yawning, she sat up from the sheets, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes as she listened to the faint sound of people running around and probably having fun outside.
Then, just as she was getting ready to get up, the phone started ringing nearby. The initial loudness of it startled her as she looked around, expecting someone to come rushing out of nowhere just to answer it. But nothing of the sort happened. Instead, the phone just kept on ringing as Tina stood and listened, still half asleep. After a few more rings she eventually squinted her eyes and started walking towards the sound.
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That is just evil to leave us hanging like that. Loved it.
You are way too cruel….First we have to wait forever for an update, then you go ahead and leave us hanging like that…totally not fair, but then again I’m sure it’s what you wanted (she says chuckling)…Do love it thanks
That was just too cruel. I’m glad your back and for the update, but to just leave us hanging like that, sheer torture. But I like it.
This is too short and why are you leaving us like this. Post soon please, thanks!
AAAAHHHH!! Where have you been?? I have been going crazy looking up here every five minutes and not seeing an update by you. But I’m okay now and I am greatly appricitative of this post!! PLEASE post soon! I’m absolutely loving this! bye girl
K
Tease, love it, can’t wait for more, don’t stay away so long.
Yhanks for the up date. Left us in a bad way
i agree with oaron lol but excellent pleaase post soon!!! thanx byeness<332389752389759
OK, the room is just next door, sooooo…shouldn’t be too long then right???? So, I guess we’ll be hearing from you in just a couple of minutes, right? lol! Please hurry! I can’t believe that you’ve left us right there!
I agree this story should continue…it’s been over a year…we need more.
Haha even though you left us hanging, it was still a great chapter. Can’t wait to read more!
I’m been waiting about your Story WHOA! it’s about time Welcome back been wait for So long LOL! Hey Thanks for coming back I Love it Please continue Post soon.
This teasing has got to STOP!! CMC…
Thank you for the update, love it.
You´re such a teasor and so cruel to leave us hanging like this…we have waitet so long and then you cut is like this…but glad you´re badk CMC..we have missed you.
k,
I like your story and I am curious to see your next update. pls don’t keep us waiting too long.
YEAH! You go Bette.Way to get things rolling! (I hope)
k. i just got caught up. now listen missy. get yourself on a writing schedule. i like posts everyday. and none of the cliffy stuff. lol. this was really great. im really enjoying this storyline. please post soon.
so so so so so good ! Holding breath ! Thank you !
Just wanted to say that this story is amazing! I was so dissappointed to see that it hasn’t been updated since August! I hope you haven’t forgot about it…because it is wonderful
What a fun story!!!! pps