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Snapshots – Ch. 3 – Nerves
Their movements began to blur together, a flurry of skin against skin until Shane felt Carmens hand, very soft, very warm, and very high up between her thighs, pushing them apart roughly.
A second hand cupped her chin and held her head up and still while Carmens lips caressed her temple, then her cheek, and then the angular line of her jaw as she whispered, Tell me you dont want this.
The words hung between them. Carmen heard, or rather felt, Shane swallow, right before their eyes met, and she received a look so raw, so open and obvious in its need, that she knew all she needed to know.
Then let me, baby She said, keeping herself pressed into Shane, her lips hovering over her ear. Let me
Shane nodded and breathed deeply, struggling to relax herself but finding her legs still tense against Carmens hand. Ever observant, Carmen began teasingly stroking her inner thigh, making sure to keep her legs pushed apart all while barely brushing against her center.
Every stroke coaxed from Shane a series of mewls and cries, becoming more insistent by the minute, building up an entirely different kind of tension.
Please…
It was spoken so quietly that if Carmen hadnt been inches from Shane, she wouldnt have heard it. If Shane had been the kind for tears, she would have wept with relief upon feeling Carmens hand move under her briefs, through the wiry hair that covered her mound and down lower, exploring, as if to assure herself that Shane was ready for her. A small, strained groan fell from Shanes lips as those fingers began to caress her lower lips, finding them wet with arousal and practically pulsing with heat. The way Carmen touched her there was feather light and fleeting, there and gone and there again, soft fingertips smoothing across her throbbing need and alternately pulling away until she was squirming against the arms that encircled her, whimpering quietly.
God…Carmen
Shane tossed her head back, not even feeling the wall behind her and only dimly aware of her briefs being drawn down and off her body. She moaned at the feel of Carmens tongue and teeth grazing her neck as those torturing fingers worked in between her swollen lips and into her, gentle at first, stroking her until Carmen felt her ***** clench wantonly and replaced the gentle pressure with hard, ruthless thrusts. Shane felt heat rise in her, causing the room to blur, and as Carmen moved to kneel in between her legs, pressing her thigh behind her thrusting hand, Shane couldnt help but move hard against her until their bodies moved together in a rhythm narrated by gasps, groans, and the wet clicking of Carmen’s unyielding fingers.
Shanes body went rigid as she felt a thumb brush her *****, and her body shook with hard tremors as Carmen held her down, continuing to caress her through the *****.
Seconds, minutes, hours later, all that existed in her world was the long line of Carmens body, unobstructed by clothing, tight and warm against her own. She was on her back and couldnt remember quite how she got there. Shane smiled softly when she felt Carmens hand still between her legs, cupping her possessively.
If it had been anyone else…Shane sighed…but it was Carmen, and it was perfect.
Hey. Carmen’s voice and the feel of her lover nuzzled her neck brought her back to reality.
Hey yourself. Carmen smiled at how husky Shanes voice became after *****. Shane wracked her brain for words, but none came. Nothing was appropriate. Carmen already knew, and so she basked in the afterglow with Carmens warm body wrapped around her, willing the heat wave to never end.
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(64 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
hey, please write more, this is getting to be one of my favourites on this archive!
Amazingly HOT.Please keep writing,I’m checking out this archive just because of your fanfic AWESOME!!!!!!!
Glad you continued that scene. The way you describe their emotions is amazing! More Carmen and Shane…HOT!
Will you please continue this story please it’s phenomenal.
Years later and I still love this story, every single chapter of Snapshots.