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Soft Spoken Secrets # 19
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Tina was exultant. She had called to the girls and they were on their way. Only Helena would arrive in the next morning.
An hour later, when the doctor got out from her room, he couldn’t avoid the smile when he reached for Tina’s face.
“She needs to rest, Christina, but…she’s ok…”
The blonde embraced him. She needed to embrace anybody. She was soaked with happiness.
“When I could see her?” The childish eyes sparking need.
“Just give the nurses some time, ok? Give some minutes to Bette… She needs some time to prepare herself…”
Tina grinned.
Five minutes, however, took an eternity.
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Tina couldn’t move. To the view of her lover: she melted. More, she stopped. She felt like a child. The blonde didn’t know what to do. How or what she should say? And should she say something? Interrogations blocked her body.
The blonde couldn’t move, however, her eyes captured everything that belonged to her lover. She reached the fragile pair of brown eyes that wetted the second Bette watched her stepped inside. Tina recorded her face, detailed her expression and stored inside her heart. It would be her combustive during the winter days of her life.
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To give birth to words Bette had to think profoundly in one woman. To bring life to her muscles she had to visualize her. To color her blood with red again, she need to drink the liquors from her lips. And that’s what she preview while she expected her entrance. She needed Tina.
When the blonde was allowed to get inside the room, nothing happen and everything began. Words didn’t move; Bette’s blood boiled inside her veins and her muscles allowed just one move: the brunette extended her arms to receive the spark that could always set fire at her existence.
Tina sobbed to the view of Bette’s opened arms. She embraced the mocha to never let her go. Senses of infinite missing invade her cells. Tears gained her face and her alerted senses tried to absorb everything that emanates from the one she loves. She felt open to receive. She felt alive and saved.
Bette couldn’t say a word because she irradiated feelings.
She felt alive like never before. She felt each grain of her skin was attentive, just like her cells and her pores that cried out loud, energized by the touch of the woman she waited for so long. Her own body amused her with its hunger and electricity.
Inside those arms Bette felt cured. The heart beat she felt thundering against her chest, the muscle from the one that always had determined the rhythms of her life told her about despair and sadness and emptiness. The beats from Tina’s heart also brought her the immense love she wanted to address only to the mocha.
They remain embraced comfortably for seconds, minutes, hours, nobody could precise it. However, the brunette felt the arid days of her life claiming for rain. She wanted to give an end to her dulled years and Bette reached for the only thing she knew would killed the dryness of her soul, what would forever be her aqua vitae: Tina’s lips.
And Tina received her miracle with the soul shining.
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Oi Braz!!!Fiquei feliz com seu novo capÃtulo! Ainda bem que vc não matou a Bette… menina eu tava com medo!!! kkkkkEspero que esteja tudo bem por aÃ… beijão!
AWWWW but of course I enjoyed it, seing that there is hope for the two ladies:-)
Braz this was a chapter that brought both women back to life,,,,,,and it was perfect my dear Braz!!!!!
I just read every chapter today..what a great story and I hope it continues now that I have found it. pps
and again you have me crying…I am such a sapp!!!!! PPS
You have a way with words Braz, you always have. I’m not sure just what I found more endearing, this chapter or your tender and gentle communication with the small wings of nature. Either way, you are a beautiful and creative soul. xoxo We will catch up soon. I know the ladies keep you updated for the most part. (HUGS)
WOW….i felt like i was in the room myself watching this whole thing take place! :)PPS
WOW….i felt like i was in the room myself watching this whole thing take place! :)PPS
I assume your native tongue is Portuguese? How I wish I could read this story in your native language, as I imagine it is very poetic, as the poetry shows through even in English. Your imagery is special. Agradeça-o tanto! (courtesy of freetranslation.com)
I am all kinds of happy right now !!!!!!The ABS is jumping up and down pms
Hope springs eternal…I am thrilled that Bette has awakened and found Tina waiting for her return. This chapter was beauifully and magnificently written.
Oh, that was heart felt and beautiful. Tina was finally able to look into the love of her life’s eyes knowing that they both knew that they belonged. Just to have Bette open her eyes and see Tina is amazing.
Salutations to u Braz. Tina really is a lifegiver where Bette is concerned; that woman is never gonna let Bette leave her. Great story. Thx.
I’ve miss u and your poetry story. Thank you for bringing Bette back.
Yaaaay, you posted!!! Just, holy wow, dear Braz! We could feel how Bette felt nurtured by Tina’s love, and coming to life again, bringing every cell to surface and reach out for that well of her existence. Very powerful chapter, dearest friend. Your words described with exactitude the miracle of being reborn thru the love and tenderness of your soul mate. Thanks for the magic that your words bring to us. Receive big hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. PPS Lucero & Marsha (Latin JC’s Salsa Aunties from Mexico City)
Oh poetic master of words that caress my soul… and fill my heart with so much tender love… I thank you for your words… both for me… and the words you share with the world… you weave a tapestry of emotions… of love… hope… passion… a rebirth of words that starts with a tiny spark… and ignites into an inferno of pure emotional rage… you capture love in tiny passages… an all consuming love… an eternal love… thank you for bringing your gift to light… thank you for sharing within the words… thank you for your passion… and your tender embrace… but most of all thank you for you… mucho love and hugs, JC (newly crowned Latin JC… thank you)
That was amazing and so happy for B&T, glad to see Bette awake. Please more, thanks!