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Soft Spoken Secrets (Gudang Garam) # 8
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Previously:
Madison watched astonished her mother’s breakdown.
She sat by her side and let her arms covered her back s. Madison let her embrace told her mother how much she loved her, told her that everything would be fine, no matter what.
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“Mad…We needed to talk…” Tina’s voice was decided.
Madison let her arms embrace her mother’s and they went to the backyard.
Tina lay down on the lounged chair. She was tired. The tears made her company all night long. The coldness of her sheets was never so frozen.
Madison sat beside her.
“First I would like to ask you to forgive me… I should have said this before, but I thought it was buried in my past.” Tina left the words died. It was not only for that she needed to apologize.
“And I also want you to forgive me for my absence of trust on you, at the education that I gave you…”
Tina looked to the face of her daughter, still serene.
“Mom, what is buried should be dead. And that…that was not dead! That’s why I believe so strongly about living with the truth. Face what you’re and what the other can be, truthfully. I don’t want any ghosts haunting my life. Now, dear mother, you have, at least that was what seemed to me, a ghost knocking on your door. It’s a hell of a ghost… But still…as far as I can understand… a ghost.”
Sometimes Tina was amazed with the maturity of her daughter’s thoughts. She caressed her arm. “Yes, I see, dear… I know…” Her hazel eyes telling Madison about the love she had for her.
But Tina began to prepare herself for what would come after the question she was formulating. She faced the floor.
“Sweetheart… Do you love Bette? Are you in love with her? Are you serious about her? Is Bette in love with you?”
Tina shot the questions. She didn’t know if she would have the courage to say it, one by one and again.
Madison was silent.
Silence filled the place.
“Yeah, I guess so… No, I’m not. In what sense? No, we already talked about it.”
Tina was confused. But the fact was that she only heard the first sentence and before she could show any emotion, she wouldn’t let herself fall apart in front of her daughter. Not because of Bette. She didn’t want to hurt her baby. Tina invested herself with all the abnegation that she carried in her heart.
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Hi2u!
This Bette and Madison thing reminds me of ancient times where teachers fucked their students. Or maybe I dreamed that up somewhere along the way. Though I can’t really call it fucking if they have a connection that is more than just two people who jump in bed together. Hopefully Madison won’t have a spaz attack when she hears Tina’s story.
:-))))))))))) “We would be impossible together… Too much beauty and personality together! It would be a waste of virtues, we, as a couple, instead of made two people or hundred happier!”…… such a waste of virtues, especially “modesty” !!! Indeed…… LMAOOO but Bette is not reknowned for her modesty, is she ? and Madison doesn’t seem to be either… well, don’t EVER be sorry Dear, as long as you write such beautiful stories like that for us :-) — like usually, you posted just before I go to sleep… and, like usually, I cannot resist you ;-) you so speak to my heart, Dear ! and I just can’t wait to read Tina’s story… but also Bette’s story, because she’s so much in pain here… so much that she couldn’t “pretend” and try to be “civil” like Tina did… she just had to run away, and I really want to know why… —- Thank YOU, my Dear, for this story, and the others too, that are sooo different, and at the same time, a little bit “the same”, because they all deal with love, and hurt, and the necessity to open to the other, open your heart, but also your mind, your thoughts, and truely communicate, share your inner self if you want a relationship (any relationship, not only love) to flourish and last… I read your wisdom, your philosophy of life, your love of alterity, your tolerance for difference (and also your INtolerance for… intolerance) in these stories… and I just LOVE THEM — good night, Dear, hope to read you again soon :-*
Braz!!! You’re back!!! Thank God!!!I loved this chapter as always dear… Divirta-se por aà que eu me divirto por aqui… Até mais! beijos
Brazilian Babe, this had me on the edge, as usual, and it wasn’t even one of your NC17’s!!! LOL. Yeah, you know EXACTLY what I am referring to…edges and all. * wink * Got your email, and you are overly generous with your flattery my friend. Love you too, and LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!! Sensational-Sassy_Sensual and most of all Superlicious!!!! Now hurry back and let us know all about what Tina is going to say…. xoxoxo
That was great. Good that Tina and Mad talk and hope she’ll understand afternow Tina tell her hers story, and now let heard Tinas story please. Please post soon, thanks!
Well, that does clear up Madison’s feelings towards Bette and of course Bette’s feelings towards Madison. What is ironic is that Madison is decribing what a parent would be in a child’s eyes. I can’t wait to read what Tina has to say about the love of her life Bette, and how their daughter fits into their lives.
WOW!!!! That was great!!! Thanks PPS
Hey, Braz, you’re back! Never mind if Marsha is my cure for pain. I’m not ashamed of admitting it.- As for the story, interesting and honest chat between mother and daughter. Now, let’s hear what Tina has to say about her past with Bette. Big hs & ks – Lucero & Marsha
this is really intense. i was once in a weird situation when i dated an woman in her forties (marvellous woman) and when i met her niece i was frozen to the ground where i stood: the niece was my first love at high school. thanks for sharing this with us.