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Something so right – chapter 138
“I come with news “ Bette said
She could see that Sarah had picked up the tone in her voice
“What’s happened ?”
“Mom – why are you so damn pessimistic – why should something have happened ?”
“Something has “ Bette said
“What – it can’t be Tina – I just spent the day with her – she was fine”
“Its not Tina – Its Niall “
“Dad !! “
Sarah didn’t speak
“He turned up at the house a few hours ago “
“He’s here – in LA ? “
“It was a shock to open the door and find him there “ Bette said dryly
“I imagine it was – what’s happened ?” Finn asked
Bette was looking at Sarah – she was pretty sure that she would be able to read the older woman’s true feelings
“He’s been ditched and told that Adam isn’t his son “
Finn reacted by laughing “The silly old fool – I told him that would happen – I even said to him that she would turn around and say that the baby isn’t his “
“Sarah ?”
“I don’t know what to say – I have imagined him getting his comeuppance but he must be devastated “
“He is “ Bette said “He is in pieces “
“Is Tina with him now ?”
“Yeah – I thought it best if he talked to her and they could mend some bridges that the whole row burnt. He wants you back Sarah”
“No freaking way “ Finn said “That’s right isn’t it mom ?”
Sarah didn’t speak – Bette looked at Finn – she wanted to tell him to pipe down. This was a shock to Sarah and it would take some time for it to sink it and for the whole implications of it to sink in.
“What else do you know ?”
“They have been having problems for a while – he admitted that the whole happy family thing was a sham – – a front. From the start her mother had a downer on him and that started to work – especially when he didn’t get you to roll over about the farm and he didn’t find a job. Apparently Gemma lined him up a job at a local bakery and he refused to take it because he was an farmer and an organic farmer – she went ape and really started to get at him and tell him he was lazy”
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so so glad you have brought this story back! It’s one of my absolute favorites!
I love this story. Thanks for posting Ally.
I feel for Nial..Bette is right Nial is Finn’s “The only ass of a dad he had.” ..He’s been good of a Father throughout of their childhood life,the only bad thing he had done. [as if Sarah didn’t do the same while they are in their marriage].. ..Is Gemma..Guess they have to remember that and don’t put all the blame to their dad…
Wonderful update. thank you I have missed this story.
Wonderful update. thank you I have missed this story.
Such a treat to have this story back! Thank you!
Thank you so much ally. Your stories are so exceptional.
Thanks for the update Ally!! :-) glad that you’re going to write more on this story!! :-)
Thanks for posting this story again, missed it a lot. Have a great weekend.
Not their job to fix him. He is a grown ass man who makes his own stupid choices. Please don’t have her take his ass back. She deserves better. Thanks for the post.
I agree with Journey1962.He is a silly old fool ,like Finn said.Now he is crying and whants his family back,a…I missed this story.Thank you for the update.
Two posts – you rock! Thanks
So glad you came back to this story. Loved the updated and many thanks for posting two.
Niall deserves everything his getting. One thing, didn’t you post this chapter before.
Finally this story is back…yippy!