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    Something so right – chapter 166-170

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    CHAPTER 166

     

    Tina got out of her beautiful and expensive sports car and grabbing her gym bag from the passenger seat she slammed the door shut, pressed the remote that automatically locked the doors and set the security system. She stood for a couple of seconds and looked at the car   – that really was her pride and joy. She loved the car and she loved even more the woman who had given her the car to celebrate her birthday. Tina had spent two hours in the gym  – she had really pushed herself knowing that after a while her  mind  that had been racing with a thousand different thoughts would start to slow down. And long sessions on the tread-mill, the exercise bike and the rowing machine had done the trick – gradually the 100 different thoughts about the wedding had started to fade away. She had pushed her body and slowly her mind had responded to the physical demands and she had started to see things in much better clarity. Bette was so right when she had said that none of these worries would matter in the future – all that would matter was that Bette and her enjoyed their own wedding and it was the celebration of the love they shared.

    Tina didn’t have any doubts about that marrying Bette was the right thing to do – she might be freaking out over the ceremony and as usual her family but there were no last minute doubts about the woman she was going to tell the whole world she was going to spend the rest of her life with.

    Tina went into the house and looked around – she could hear the radio playing in the kitchen. She put her gym bag down and walked to the door between the sitting room and the kitchen. Bette was carefully deseeding a red pepper and singing to herself.

    “Hey there “ Tina said after a few minutes of just admiring Bette’s ass

    Bette looked round “Hello there – I got some fish and I am just doing a salsa to go with the salad I am doing.

    “Do you need a hand ?”

    “I am good thanks – how are you feeling ?”

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    1. Wow Ally!! Thanks for the amazing ride!! :-) kinda sad as I’ll miss the story from you, but I also feel so happy for the wonderful ending! Again, thanks for your generosity of sharing your great talent in writing amazing stories with us! I do appreciate that so much! I hope you and Rocky will have a wonderful time during the break and who knows maybe that will bring you some inspiration for a new story :-D lol my wishful thinking ;-) cheers and enjoy the day!! ^^,

    2. Ally this story was amazing thank u so much for sharing it with us and for all of ur brillant writing.. I love this ending and hope to see more of ur stories when u get back..

    3. Bette is pregnant by Finn?…this is a wonderful ending!…And I loved the vows..”Bette – I want to thank you for everything you have become to me and everything that I know is in our future. You are my destiny and you have made me happier with every fresh day we wake up together. I know that marriage is going to be tough at times but I know that with compromise the two of us can survive anything. What I have realised from living with you is that a great relationship is built on the little things as well as the big stuff. You know – and I hope everyone else knows that I will always be faithful to you and cherish what we share. But I want to tell you in front of so many witnesses that I will not ignore the little things that can be really basic in a great relationship. I promise not to leave wet towels on the bathroom floor – I know that I still do it and I know that you usually pick them up and don’t yell at me that often. I promise not to steal your clothes and then return them with missing buttons and not dry cleaned. I promise not to get sarcastic when you come in with a new pair of boots. It is true that you cannot have too many pairs of boots. If I borrow your ipod I will recharge it and I will give you the fair share of the remote control. I love you so much and I am looking forward to our journey through life together.””I want to thank you for saving me from myself. You are such an amazing person and I know that I have become a better person because of you. I cannot wait to find out what the future holds because I know it will be so much fun with you by my side. I promise to take care of you in sickness and in health – unless you have been out drinking champagne with Helena and don’t get home until 2am – in which case you can sleep on the sofa. I will not complain about you watching the late night movie even if it’s a movie we have seen three weeks earlier – I know how much films mean to you and some of my happiest memories have been with you sitting eating popcorn and watching movie. I promise not to put empty orange juice cartons in the fridge and I will try and not use so much spice when I am cooking. You are my whole world Tina – thank you for all the good times and standing by me in the bad. I know what we have between us is special – thank you “THANK YOU SOO MUCH ..UNTIL YOUR NEXT STORY.

    4. Ally, thank you, thank you as always amazing.—Ally maybe now you could go with “Love and pride” or a new story with Bette and Tina to know each other, just do not leave us without their wonderful stories – please.

    5. Wonderful story. Enjoyed it and so sorry to see it end but all things must end. At some point in time when you come back to us is it possible to have a SEQUEL. We want tio know what the baby is named and how everyone is getting along. Thanks for sharing with us and rub Lord Rockinghams’ ears.

    6. Thanks Ally for sharing this brilliant story with us. It has been the highlight of my week to read your stories and it will be strange not reading a story from you. Hurry back with a new story for us.

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