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    Something so right – chapter 27

    Story written on February 27, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Inside the club

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter 27

    Helena walked to the bar with Shane – she looked around at the club goers

     

     

    “Have you been here before ?” Shane asked her

     

    “I have been here a few times with dates – saw Bette in action once “

     

    Helena sniffed

     

    “You didn’t approve ?”

    “Its up to her how she lives her life “

    “But you didn’t like that she was dating your friend ?”

     

    Bette had told Shane that Helena was being ultra protective about Tina. Bette didn’t dislike the fact – she was rather amused when she told Shane about Helena. Shane remembered Bette’s words “ a case of pot and kettle calling “ .It was amusing that Bette could see how like Helena she was and clearly Helena could not.

     

    Helena grinned

     

    “No – no I did not and this is hard for me to say but – well I think I might have been wrong – I saw them together the other day “

     

    “And ?”

     

    Helena laughed “ Totally and utterly in love “

     

     

    Shane nodded at a woman who was checking her out. In truth she had no intention of fixing her attentions on any woman tonight. She wanted to be a front seat witness to seeing Bette and Tina together for the first time as a couple . If Bette could settle down so suddenly maybe it was a warning as well as a sign of hope for herself.

     

    “Bette had been missing for weeks – and Alice was making up all sorts of explanations about where Bette was. Finally she called the two of us to meet her at lunchtime and she told us “ Shane smiled showing Helena for the first time why she was so popular with so many women “ And when she told us – she was just floating – she is so into Tina “

     

    “I don’t doubt you for a second Shane – but I saw them the next day after you had met Tina and I also saw them the other day and – well you are in for a treat – not sure the majority of women are going to be as happy as we are for them “

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    1. Sorry you’re not feeling well just when my internet and I are back among the living. Still very tired but almost caught up-with school that is. I may not get around to catching up on all the stories. Really, I don’t understand why this is so traumatic for Bette. She’s a big girl, so is Tina. As Nancy Reagan used to say “just say no”. No need to be rude (unless someone refuses to take no for an answer) and just carry on.

    4. *waves at funnyone* glad to see you up and running. ill call this weekend. im working. will be bored to fucking tears. ally, sorry your sick. thx for the update.

    5. Allye-hope you feel better soon. Thanks for the update. Hopefully, Bette will figure out she can still put on a happy face to the girls in the bar and tell them at the same time she’s spoken for!!!

    10. Hope you feel better soon. OK let Bette step up she has always taken or not any woman she wanted so she needs to be as smooth and cool as ever and turn them down with you are not what I am looking for tonight or any time soon, so step off B. Post as soon as you can.

    11. Ally – Hope you feel better soon great chapter, can’t believe you can write when you are under the weather. I’m sure Bette can learn to say no graciously – she’s so cute in her besotted state.

    12. I hope you feel better soon, thanks for this chapter, Bette really doesn’t know how to handle these women well, she should just chill. Thanks honey. Post as soon.

    13. I agree with Helena, Bette needs to step up. She needs to be all Alpha and drag Tina onto the dance floor and have her way with her in the middle of the place…make her mark. And it would be helpful if she didn’t let go of Tina’s hand and did lots of smiling…like she was having a good time…

    14. Sorry you aren’t feeling well. Thanks for the chapter. I’ve been waiting on it because I’m such a fan of the story. I hope Bette grows some balls.. so that she stands up to her harem. All she really has to do is be firm a few times and people will get the drift. Love how in love our couple is.. feel better and I’ll be looking forward to the next one.

    16. Awww u poor thg. Hope u’ll get better soon. Thank you thank you thank you for getting out of bed to grace us with this wonderful story. Dont really like Bette being a wimp. Tina loves Bette for who she is and not for being all awkward coz she’s surrounded by woman. Hope she’ll step up soon and get it up and show Tina that she can handle being in love. Thanks again for the update. Hope that the next time u post, which is soon (fingers crossed), u’ve recovered. Take care.

    18. Ally feel better and thanks for the update!!:) why is bette so wishy washy? she needs to speak up and lay down the law. gosh tina is assertive and most certainly the one in charge… bette really needs to be her equal… i wonder if there will more drama before the night is over??? love alice she is so freakin funny,lol…

    21. Hey AllyE, Hope you feel better soon. This story is absolutely adorable. Seeing Bette suddenly so in love so precious. She really is overwhelmed by her feelings for Tina. Loved seeing the strong and dominant Tin defend her relationship and protect her woman. I really can’t imagine Bette sitting on the sidelines as her past meets her head. Now I wanna see the real Alpha Bette appear. She needs to remember that she is protecting Tina and their relationship by warding off the competion. Please continue this enchanting story soon. Many, many thanks for writing about the reality of life; Good times and bad; Funny and sad. You just rock my world. Your Loyal Fan.

    23. Feel better my dear,Bette needs to show a few that she is taken. Tina and Bette needs to dance and show all the ladies that she has found her missing half. thanks

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