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Something so right – chapter 30
“It wasn’t nothing – it was sweet and loving and I will not forget it in a hurry – thank you Bette “
Bette smiled “ I don’t know what it is but there is something about you that brings out a side to me that I never thought
existed “
“Well it does and I am very glad about it – I’ll get some plates – do you want to get changed or something ?”
“I’ll put in bag in your room and jump in the shower – get some of the daily grime off me – I’ll be five – ten minutes “
“Okay “Tina kissed Bette “ See you “
When Bette emerged from Tina’s room she had been showered and was wearing the same white shirt she had brought with her the night before. Tina was sitting on the sofa just pouring the wine. Bette walked across and sat next to her lover – Tina looked at Bette who moved in and kissed her on the lips
“You taste good “ Tina said
“So do you “
“Lets eat – I am really hungry “
Tina handed Bette a plate and they quickly started to eat – chatting about their days and telling one another what had happened. Bette topped their wine glasses up and kissed Tina on the lips again
“This is beginning to be one of my favourite parts of the day – just chilling out with you . I don’t know babe – you have just relaxed me – I feel so at ease with you “
“It is good – just being together and knowing that we are going to go to bed and get naked and sweaty “
Bette put down her fork briefly and touched Tina’s face again
“I don’t know what it is but this – what is happening to us in this relationship – this is a one off Tina “
“Meaning ?”
“Meaning – I don’t think it happens many times in a life – that two people connect and get on and are so right together – I cannot get you out of my head Tina. I think about you all of the time – I find myself wondering what you are doing and wondering if you are thinking about me like I am thinking about you “
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ditto to what beachlife said. Great chapter Ally. Any chance we’ll get a third post from you today?? I know, I know…I’m being greedy but…lol. I’ll be watching for your next post!!
all of your stories are so unique and awesome. well done again. you can show the b and t love in any circumstance. it’s a joy! :) oh yes, and I agree about a third post today… teehee. it’s not our fault you are a talented writer!
sounds like they had a good night! thx
I love them in this story. They are both so sweet with each other.. yet so in control and strong at work. Meet the parents? Coming out at work? Meeting Kit? Love what is set up in this chapter. Also, I think after that stuff these two might just start cohabitating..Can’t wait for the next chapter.
We act like vulture, and our prey is Eric. Can,t wait for the black tie party. When Tina and Bette walks in holding hand. Would love to see Bette in her white suit. Would also like to see the fit Eric will have when he finds out that Tina got the promotion. Okay maybe I,m the biggest vulture. thanks
They are so adorable, you can’t help but love them, you are being so generous today, so thank you for that, I hope everything went well with your C.Have a great week dear and post soon.
Is there drama on the horizon with Tina’s promotion announcement to Eric and the impending walk-in of Tina holding Bette’s hand???? Me thinks so! Love all of your stories and I’m greedy like the rest in wanting a third post today!!!
Great chapter update AllyE.Can’t wait for the black-tie dinner. Eric will be struck dumb or maybe he will act an ass, at any rate he certainly will NOT like Tina with Bette. Tough. PPS
Straight from the TLW, I say let the tension boil some more and how B&T are gonna deal with it. But it couldn’t be that bad, its only just Eric :D
Ally have you realized that Tina is seeing her period right??? Or at least you started off that way. I am one that is never against having sex with your period, it’s just you take certain precautions…ya know??!!
They are just adorable. I love how sweet they are to one another and how much they desire to be together. I can’t wait until the black tie event. WHOO-HOO! The HOT newly promoted Tina arrives with her HOT lover Bette. Eric is going to just die. This story is one of my all time favorites.
Great update! They are so loving to each other. Sigh!
can’t wait for ur next post. eric sounds like a dingbat. wonder if he is still going to try to hit on tina. can’t wait for the next turn of events. : )
I love your writing! It always cheers me up. I’m looking forward to the black-tie event.
They’ll be the belles of the ball. But Ally, what’s an E number?
They are so cute together!!! you write them so well… i can’t wait til eric finds out about the promotion and when tina walks in the black tie event holding bette’s hand …:)
Damn that was hot and sweet of B&T. Can’t wait to see B&T walk in black tie together and holding hand, they gonna be hot and sexy. Please post soon, thanks!
beautiful as always. thanks ally.