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Something so right – chapter 30
“Lets get meeting Kit out of the way first “
“If she’s sober she’s lovely “
“And if she isn’t ?”
“That’s another thing altogether “
Bette lent forward and kissed Tina again “It will be fine I promise – she will really like you “
“Alice and Shane really seem to have taken to me – I like them “
“Shane is just in awe that I have fallen in love and well -Alice is Alice – crazy but very sweet. I really am not sure about Alice and Dana – they sound like an accident waiting to happen “
“They are – maybe that’s the attraction “
Tina finished her food and took a long drink of wine
“We seem to have finished this bottle- you want any more ?”
“Not bothered “
“You had enough to eat ?”
“Yes thanks – I’ll clear away “
Bette jumped up and quickly piled all the silver containers and used plates together and disappeared into the kitchen with them – Tina thought it was very sweet how eager Bette was to be helpful and to do as much as she could. Bette returned from the kitchen -Tina had drawn the curtains, lit a couple of candles and put some soft music on.
“Want to dance with me ?”
Bette smiled “That would be good “
Tina held out her hands and Bette accepted them. Bette moved close to Tina and took hold of her lover. Tina and Bette slowly began to move to the music. Tina was just wearing a towel wrapped around her body -Bette could look down and see her soft, creamy breasts. She swallowed – this sight was one that she just loved so much – Tina was very beautiful.
“You checking out my girls ?” Tina asked
“Yeah “
Tina laughed
“What ?”
“Its just funny that you seem so addicted to my body. For you – you’ve seen so many women “
“They pale into nothing – especially compared to you – I am so hooked on how sexy you are. I find how confident you are about your body such a turn on. I mean you are beautiful but – the way you hold yourself – it just still blows my mind “
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(7 votes, average: 4.14 out of 5)
ditto to what beachlife said. Great chapter Ally. Any chance we’ll get a third post from you today?? I know, I know…I’m being greedy but…lol. I’ll be watching for your next post!!
all of your stories are so unique and awesome. well done again. you can show the b and t love in any circumstance. it’s a joy! :) oh yes, and I agree about a third post today… teehee. it’s not our fault you are a talented writer!
sounds like they had a good night! thx
I love them in this story. They are both so sweet with each other.. yet so in control and strong at work. Meet the parents? Coming out at work? Meeting Kit? Love what is set up in this chapter. Also, I think after that stuff these two might just start cohabitating..Can’t wait for the next chapter.
We act like vulture, and our prey is Eric. Can,t wait for the black tie party. When Tina and Bette walks in holding hand. Would love to see Bette in her white suit. Would also like to see the fit Eric will have when he finds out that Tina got the promotion. Okay maybe I,m the biggest vulture. thanks
They are so adorable, you can’t help but love them, you are being so generous today, so thank you for that, I hope everything went well with your C.Have a great week dear and post soon.
Is there drama on the horizon with Tina’s promotion announcement to Eric and the impending walk-in of Tina holding Bette’s hand???? Me thinks so! Love all of your stories and I’m greedy like the rest in wanting a third post today!!!
Great chapter update AllyE.Can’t wait for the black-tie dinner. Eric will be struck dumb or maybe he will act an ass, at any rate he certainly will NOT like Tina with Bette. Tough. PPS
Straight from the TLW, I say let the tension boil some more and how B&T are gonna deal with it. But it couldn’t be that bad, its only just Eric :D
Ally have you realized that Tina is seeing her period right??? Or at least you started off that way. I am one that is never against having sex with your period, it’s just you take certain precautions…ya know??!!
They are just adorable. I love how sweet they are to one another and how much they desire to be together. I can’t wait until the black tie event. WHOO-HOO! The HOT newly promoted Tina arrives with her HOT lover Bette. Eric is going to just die. This story is one of my all time favorites.
Great update! They are so loving to each other. Sigh!
can’t wait for ur next post. eric sounds like a dingbat. wonder if he is still going to try to hit on tina. can’t wait for the next turn of events. : )
I love your writing! It always cheers me up. I’m looking forward to the black-tie event.
They’ll be the belles of the ball. But Ally, what’s an E number?
They are so cute together!!! you write them so well… i can’t wait til eric finds out about the promotion and when tina walks in the black tie event holding bette’s hand …:)
Damn that was hot and sweet of B&T. Can’t wait to see B&T walk in black tie together and holding hand, they gonna be hot and sexy. Please post soon, thanks!
beautiful as always. thanks ally.