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Something so right — chapter 37
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“Tina- its more complicated than that “
“I know – will you just take your coffee into my bedroom “
“Okay “ Bette poured herself more coffee and walked across to Tina
“I love you and whatever happens I am here for you “
Tina kissed Bette “ I know – this way he gets to meet you as well “
“Its too early for all of this “
“I know – I love you Bette “
Bette kissed Tina and looked deep into her eyes – the blonde was nervous but seemed in control. Bette picked up her briefcase and went into Tina’s bedroom and closed the door. Tina went to the front door and unlocked it. Just as she pulled back the final lock she heard the knock. Taking a deep breathe Tina opened the door
“Dad “
“Hello pumpkin”
Tina’s father was tall- well over 6ft 2 with blonde hair and a smile that he has passed onto his daughter. Tina hugged him tightly -it had been a long time since she had seen her father and she missed him and her mother.
“Dad – you always did like getting me out of bed “
“Couldn’t be helped I am afraid – let me look at you “
“I don’t look at my best at this time in the morning “
“You look beautiful as you always have”
“Come in “
Tina took his bag and her father stepped inside. Tina looked at him as he looked around the apartment. Tina could see all the clues that would lead any amateur detective to work out the existence of one Bette Porter. When he didn’t spot any of the clues that screamed out to Tina she closed the door and put his bag – which was a battered old suitcase down
“Do you want a coffee and some breakfast ?”
“Yes please – airline food is truly horrible stuff “
“It is “
“I asked the girl if the egg was organic and she didn’t know “
“I don’t imagine that it was “
“Neither do I “
“Coffee and toast “ Tina offered
Her father raised an eyebrow at Tina
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Well, that took all the worry out of telling her Dad…she didn’t have time to think about it. Now all we have to worry about is Mom…hopefully Niall knows her well enough to know she’ss be O.K. with it too. Can’t wait for your next update Ally. Beautiful story!
AllyE that was a wonderful update. So happy that the unexpected meeting with Tina’s father has gone so well and certainly hope it goes as well with her mother. Tina’s father seems to be a very open minded man or at least he has an understanding of the very real world in which we live. Hope this connection with Mr. Kennard works for Bette because she needs a positive and loving man in her life that she can talk to and relate as a loving father should treat his daughter. Post when you can.
So glad Tina’s dad was so open minded about her situation. Looks like Bette got some good points for her beauty, poise, and also her intelligence. Now dad can pave the way with T’s mom. Great to hear we’ll be getting a chapter of L Wing soon. Sorry I haven’t commented in a while my internet was down for a while.
So enjoyable. A pleasure and a treat to read.
hey there Ally! thanks for your congrats about my exams! I really try my best! This story can’t get any better.. wow.. everytime I read a new chapter I love it more! How do you do it, girl?? Hope you are having a nice sunday. ‘talk’ to you soon! PPS!!! Caro
Good chapter Ally, thank God Tina’s father turned out to be so cool, I wish her mother would be a nice one too, I can’t wait to read The L wing I have missed it so much.Thank you Al have a great day.
Great, as always!
Will Mama Kennard be as open minded as the dad??? Like that Bette is on her best behavior. thanks
Hey AllyE, Thank you for showing that parents can be wondeful and accepting too. Tina’s Dad was a great example of a father loving his daugther completely. Anything or anyone that makes Tina feel this good is okay by him. Awesome!!! More please. Many thanks for your wonderful writing. Your Loyal Fan.
hi, im sorry. im a bit loopy. what a niall??? how do you say that. ;) thx.
Wow hoo, Bette passed the first part of “Meet the Parents” with flying colors.
So great! I love how supportive Tina’s Dad is and how he put Bette to the test a bit. Can’t wait to read more!
Yeah, glad to know the first part of the “meet the parents” rite of passage went well. How cool are Tina’s parents? Organic farmers. Wow. And Niall really seems like open-minded, a loving father and very principled man. He reminds me of Tina’s dad in “The L Wing”. Thanks, Ally, and PPS! :>
Well, that went well. But I was kind of sorry that Bette WASN’T hiding in the closet. Pops could have some fun busting them.
That was awesome and like Tina’s father, and hope Tina’s mom like her father too. Please post soon, thanks!
nice…happy dad likes bette…now lets meet mom…pps…and L Wing too…
A BIG whew Ally. Hope the mother has the same reaction
tina’s dad is great with bette and all! nice update! :)
Ally, please please please tell me that when we go back home we are gonna get Tina’s real name. Some really hippie name like Rain Moon Child or something totally Earthy like that. In each chapter I look forward to that and the build up is killing me!!! Lovely chap, Sweetie. PEACE.
Ally, Thank you for all your help and support. I’m grateful to have you as a friend. L xx
Yippee! Tuna’s dad is awesome. He took everything in stride. But who can blame him; just one look at Bette Porter ANC that was all the convincing he needed. Thanks for the early morning update. Should I expect another one this afternoon (LOL). PPS! :-)
Aww, I loved this part. I hope we get more Bette bonding with Tina’s father. Considering how awful her own father is because she is gay.. it would be nice if being with Tina was another way to heal those wounds. PPS.