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Something so right – chapter 41
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“Are any of these her exes ?” Helena asked Tina
“I don’t think so – I went on the people that Alice and Shane said she was closest to “
Helena laughed
“What ?”
She gestured to where Bette was coming back from the bathroom
“She looks well gone “
“She’s fine – just a bit merry. We have a few glasses of wine with our food but she’s been drinking all sorts of things – she is going to be out of it later “
“When are you going to ask her to change her address ?”
“I was going to do it when she wakes up in the morning but it might be when she sobers up. I don’t want her too ill tomorrow- I have other plans for her. Including a picnic up the coast where we first kissed “
“Where did you first kiss ?”
“On the beach – about 15 kms up the coast. Kit did us a picnic and we were stuffed full of food. It was really special “
“You knew then that you loved her ?”
Tina nodded “ I did. I knew that she felt the same but she had so many problems coming out and saying it . I knew that was going to be a struggle for her “
“When did she say the magic three words ?”
“After we had become lovers – again we went for a walk on the beach. We watched the sun rising – it was a beautiful Hawaiian morning – on the way back that was when she said it. We both cried “
“She doesn’t seem to struggle to say it now “
“She doesn’t. She just needed the confidence to come out of her shell. She needed to trust her heart to a woman who wouldn’t betray her “
“I can see that you are good for her – what about the other way round ?”
“I get more from her than she knows “
Helena raised an eyebrow
“Like she understands me and she is kind and gentle and we connect in so many ways. The other night we played cards “
“Strip poker ?”
“No but it’s a thought. Bette is special and she is so right for me “
“As long as you are sure “
“I am – I want to spend my life with Bette Porter “
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The party was in full flow – people were mixing and Bette was loving being the centre of attention. What meant the most to her was that Tina had done this amazing thing just for her. Bette just couldn’t believe how lucky she was. She decided to step outside to get some fresh air – she knew that she was drunk and she was desperately trying to sober herself up. She lent against a wall and let out a long sigh – life was great
“Hey – you okay ?”
Bette opened her eyes and saw a pretty waitress
“I am fine – a little drunk “
“You have a lot of friends “
“I know its just amazing – it’s a great birthday -its not until tomorrow and I get to wake up with my girlfriend “
“She is a very lucky woman “
The waitress moved closer to Bette and touched her face. Bette looked at her in puzzlement
“What ?”
“You are a beautiful woman and I have seen you in the clubs “
“Yeah “
“You ever want anyone new – give me a call “
Bette looked at her – before she could react the waitress leant closer and kissed Bette on the lips.
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Damn. I had been looking forward to reading about this birthday so much. Bette better push her off..and tell her in no uncertain terms she is in a happy relationship. Then, tell Tina. No way I want Tina not trusting Bette. Or, Bette not trusting herself.
Hell no…..Bette you better tell her to f*** off. Ally, glad your back!!
Tina is going to go nuclear
uh-oh.. Helena would make sure the poor waitress get fired for crossing the line.
I smell blood on the pavement.
no funnyone, not on the pavement, the barroom floor!!! thx
wow. I kinda hope tina saw that, it will be drama, drama, drama. And then they can have makeup sex. Ally your too good. cant wait for the next installment.
OMG drama in the making!! the waitress better run…:)PPS
Oh God! Trouble for Bette & it’s not even her fault. Can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS!!
Now that was a perfectly lovely chapter up until the end. Why … Bette better sober up quickly and find Tina. Thanks for posting.
Hope that Tina does see it when Bette slaps that bitch across the room or better yet have Tina drag her ass outta there! Please don’t let this ruin them moving in together! PPS
No way! no way! She better sober up
That kiss should sober Bette up real quick. Oh my, Bette had better knock the hell out of the waitress and immediately Tina. She can’t feel guilty over this, it wasn’t her fault. But she must tell Tina pronto. You must be feeling much better AllyE, drama, drama, drama.
NO NO FIX IT FIX IT!
Why the drama? Why?
$hit Ally! Don’t start trouble!
ally, you bad girl. I guess some drama was in order especially since it’s you. I trust that they will weather this storm as well. Please don’t let Tina kill the poor waitress!
Damn, I knew the drama was coming but I hope Bette just knocks her on her ass and goes back in to Tina.
gee oh man Ally, Welcome back first of all & the last 2 chapters are great. I gotta go read the L-wing and hope to come back and find out that Bette’s not in to much hot water. Please fix before I come back. Please. Thank you, Md
I am confident that Bette will push her away, and says that she loves what she has. I just hope that she doesn’t fall on her face or butt when she pushes her LOL PPS :o).
Your readers get quite violent, at least verbally. LOL. You’re definitely the drama queen. PPS.
Oh shit that bitch better run fast or Tina come and kick her asslol. Drama coming!
UH-OH, I hope Tina doesn’t see it and misunderstand. And Bette had better put this little biotch in her place.
Oh no!!!! disaster strikes…drama rama…WELCOME BACK!!!!!
A little bit of drama hmmm…….
Uh-oh, I hope Tina didn’t see that or that she or Bette won’t overreact. I hope this won’t plant any seed of doubt or distrust on Tina or Bette’s mind. Alice or Helena should knock down that waitress at once. Thanks for the quick follow-up, ally! :>
Oh-Oh.Someone’s in trouble :p
You are bad!