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    Something so right — chapter 46

     

    Tina climbed out of the car and looked at her father who got out of the car and looked at his daughter

     

    “Its going to be okay “ he said softly “ She just adores you “

     

    Tina nodded “ They are either going to get on like a house on fire or there will be sparks “ Tina commented about Bette and her mother

     

     

    “Your mother and I just want you to be happy “

     

     

    “I am “

     

     

    “She will see that – trust me babe “

     

     

    Bette climbed out of the car and looked around – she saw a couple of barns to the left of the house. She took a deep breathe of air

     

    “The air smells great “

     

     

    “Its clean “ Tina said “ You don’t get this in downtown LA “

     

    “I can see that “

     

    “I’ll get your bags once we have got you into the house “ Niall said “ Go on in Bette “

    Bette looked at her lover and grinned

     

    “You ready babe ?”

     

    “No but as we are standing outside and I am starving – come on Porter “

     

    Tina took Bette by the hand and they walked towards the house. Bette saw the chairs on the porch and imagined a few romantic evenings sitting outside with Tina – it wasn’t as cold as she had expected it to be. Tina pulled open the swing door and opened the main door of her family home . Bette took in as much as she could – the huge staircase and polished wood floors appealed to her eye and there were little touches that made it a home – there was a ginger cat asleep at the top of the stairs – the cat opened his eyes and looked at the visitors – in seconds he was on his way down the stairs

     

    “That is Tom “ Tina explained “Jerry is around somewhere – probably asleep on someone’s bed.

    You do like cats don’t you Bette ?”

     

    “Sure – I love how elegant they are “

     

     

    “Sarah “ Niall shouted “ Come and see how starved your oldest daughter is looking “

    Comments

    1. Tina and her Mom are going to have to have the mother-daughter chat soon so things can have a chance of being friendly. I look forward to the meeting of the siblings.

    2. What the hell’s an aga? I don’t blame Sarah a bit. A mother should not be too easily won over. Even so, I’m sure Bette will do so by the end of the visit. If Finn and Willow have already had a chance at the bathroom, can Bette get a little shower action?

    3. WOW bette’s meets mom wonder what tina’s mom needs to talk to her about? i can see these enjoying themselves on the farm, can’t wait tina’s siblings meet bette. :)PPS awesome ally

    4. Funnyone – i can understand most of your questions but an aga ! its a giant oven/stove powered by logs or coal/coke. not everyone cooks solely with the microwave like some people of my close aquaintance !! xx

    5. Don’t take that tone with me Emmerson! I’ve been in quite a few American kitchens, even in older, traditional homes (one or two on farms) and not one of them had a device called an aga. And I can’t help it if I was raised by wolves.

    6. Wonderful chapter. As funnyone remarked, Moms are supposed to be discerning b/c no one is good enough for their baby girls although Bette is a perfect 10+ on a scale of 1 to 10. Bette is just amazingly delicious. I’m pretty good around a kitchen but never heard of an “aga”. Is it short for another word? PPS b/c I love your writing.

    7. Yeah, Tina and her Mom should talk…let’s not forget Niall had that opportunity when he was in LA with Tina. Sarah has just met Bette, so there would be some hesitation…that would be natural. Maybe Sarah and Bette will have a discussion before they leave just like Bette and Niall had one. Great job again Ally!

    8. I like Tina’s mom despite her being tough but it is how most mothers are, she doesn’t want her daughter to get hurt or not to be sure about what is she doing. You are incredible Ally and I totally missed you and your regular posts. Thank you Hun for this lovely chapter and post soonLove

    9. Man, the Mom is kinda bitchy so far. I’m totally down with the fact she shouldn’t be won over in a few minutes by anyone.. but it seems like some of the problem is that Tina’s with a woman. Hopefully I’m wrong and she is just shocked by the fact they are moving quickly.

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