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    Something so right – chapter 51

     

    “I know that – can’t you help Niall – I don’t see why some bullshit story about my past should be the reason Sarah is being so hard on me “

     

    “I am trying to talk sense into her. I have to tell you that when she came back from your room she was pretty damn mad “

     

    Bette smiled “I can see that Tina and Sarah are similar “

     

    “Don’t tell Tina that – she doesn’t like to be told that she is acting like her mother “

     

    “Niall ?”

     

    “Bette ?”

     

    “In the end is Sarah going to come round ?”

     

    Niall blew out a smoke ring.

     

    “Yes. You may disapprove of Sarah’s life choices but don’t for a second under estimate how much she loves all three of our children. In the end Sarah will relent – but the more Tina puts her under pressure – the longer it is going to take “

     

    Bette chuckled “ And Willow is like Tina who in turn is like Sarah “

     

    “Pretty much so – I love the women in my life – but there are times when I am much more at peace in my poly tunnels “

     

    Bette laughed “You do seem cursed by beauty “

     

    Niall shook his head “I can close my eyes and see Sarah the way she was when I first met her and – it was like being injected with a drug that filled you full of bright Technicolor experiences. One day Willow will have the same effect on someone and Tina did that to you “

     

    Bette nodded “She did “

     

    “Do you like brandy ?”

     

    “Love it – why ?”

     

    “Stay there – I’ll go and get one of my best cognacs and a couple of glasses – God knows how long a freaking game of football goes on “

     

    “Hours “ Bette agreed

     

    In a few minutes Bette was lounging back sipping an excellent cognac – she looked at Niall

     

    “I couldn’t share Tina – I just couldn’t do it. The thought of someone else touching her “

     

    She shuddered at the very thought

    Comments

    1. I was thinking the same thing as pandamel. Maybe Bette will get a vhance to see a picture of this Brenda then she will at least knowif she had anything to do with her in the first place. Thanks for posting.

    2. Yikes, if Tina’s dad is a Yankees fan and Melvin is a Red Sox fan… don’t ever introduce them. Blood bath. Loved the chapter and cannot wait to see what happens with Sarah.

    3. Bette is right whatever works for tina’s parents. tina shouldn’t be so judgemental and her mom should not be so judgemental based on rumors. open marriage is tricky situation doesn’t work for everyone, sorta like what shane was saying in the camp fire scene. excellent update ally. love the heart to heart with tina’s dad and bette…:)PPS

    4. Glad that Bette is there for Tina. It must have been hard for Tina growing up with that and not understanding it, but apparently the open marriage works for her parents. I have confidence you will work this all out. Thanks for posting!

    5. Interesting chapter. I think its one thing for consenting adults to decide to have an open marriage. But to do it when you have children, in a small Southern town, it must have been fairly humiliating for the children. Considering where Tina is from it would have totally been part of the gossip mill..and not looked kindly on. So, I could see where that would be very upsetting for a child. I mean I don’t care what adults decide to do but sometimes those decisions have ramifications on other people in their lives that need to be acknowledged. Looking forward to more.

    6. Wow!!! That is really an open marriage. Very radical. What happens when that sex turns into affection and love? To have a decade-long affair? Has to be more than sex, right?

    7. Methinks this is foreshadowing of the issue of fidelity in Bette and Tina’s relationship down the road. Am I right? I couldn’t have an open marriage myself. PPS

    8. I agree with pandamel and hope that Sarah over hears how Bette is there for Tina and able to help her through this without being judgemental. Bette is so right, rather than trying to judge her parents lives, Tina needs to simply try to live her owns. Maybe this is part of the reason Willow wants to go away to school. Maybe she needs a breather.

    9. What a revelation on Thanksgiving Day, open marriages are not for everyone and if they can make it work, more power to them. There are too many things rolling around out there today to have an open marriage, some you can’t get rid of, it’s too risky and dangerous. Happy that Bette makes Tina know that she understands and it’s not something they will ever do. Sarah should lighten up, those that live in glass houses can not afford to throw stones. Thanks for the chapter AllyE.

    10. Wow Ally, great Niall/Bette and then Bette/Tina discussion about open marriages. I have never understood them myself, but if it works for two people that’s the main thing. However, even if it works for them, it doesn’t always work for their children as we saw with Tina. Wonderful story!

    11. Just what is Tina’s problem that she is so utterly close minded? Because she was embarassed by her parents when she was a teenager? EVERYBODY is embarassed by their parents when they’re teenagers! And as for Bette, I think her issue with Mel wasn’t his infidelity (although it may well have been for his wives), but that his treatment of her ranged from the cold and distant to the outright hostile. But then, Bette and Tina wouldn’t be the first ‘liberals’ I’ve encountered who were rigidly prejudiced. Was it really Bette’s business to inform Tina that her fears of her mother having a new stud were true? And was that a good way of getting Tina to calm down? Maybe Niall should have a heart to heart with Tina on the back porch like he did with Bette.

    12. I’m not a fan of open marriages, but if this one has worked for Mom and Dad. That’s well and good. It however doesn’t seem to go so well for the children. They have a loving family, but not without its troubles. Bette, because of her background, seems to accept it better than most. Love this story!!! Keep it coming.

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