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Something so right – chapter 71
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“It feels like it “
“That’s because its all so fresh and painful and may I add the lack of sleep doesn’t help”
“Okay – I get the message – I am going back to the apartment and fall into bed – except it will remind me of Bette – it will smell like her and her clothes will be everywhere.”
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Alice arrived at the gallery in mid afternoon – she was carrying two sandwiches. She had tried phoning Bette but the gallery owner wasn’t taking any calls- hence the personal visit.
Bette was sitting at her desk trying to make sense of a set of numbers that might have been in Sanskrit for all they meant to her.
“Afternoon Bette “
“I am busy “ Bette said not looking up
“You are always free for me “
“Matter of opinion “
“Come on Bette – food “
“I am not hungry “ Bette replied
“You look terrible “ Alice approached Bette’s desk and took a good look at the gallery owner
“In fact I will go as far as to say that you look like shit warmed up “
“Flattery “ Bette replied finally looking up – Alice waved the sandwich in front of her
“Chicken salad “ she said
“Thanks “
Bette got up and went across to her drinks tray – she poured herself a whiskey and poured a another for Alice.
“Its only 2pm “
“So “
“How many have you had ?”
“This is my second “
“Not wise “
“Alice- you are not my mother “
“Bette – I have come to see how you are “
Bette sat down and sipped her drink
“I am fine “
“You are lying – you haven’t slept in ages and you have been crying”
“I am okay “
“You don’t have to pretend with me “
Bette’s mobile sounded and she ignored it
“Any reason you aren’t answering it ?”
“Its from Tina “
“So – speak to her “
“Its been ringing for the last 30 minutes every five minutes or so “
“Is she leaving you a message ?”
“I don’t know “
“Bette – she might have changed her mind – you should see what she has to say “
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love the drama in your stories because i know you will fix it :) i liked that tina walked away but not before her declaration of love. glad that alice redeemed herself too. can’t wait for the next chapter!
Aaaaargh, Ally! You are more frustrating than Bette! I’m hoping you’ll continue updating this one and not be so mean as to leave us hanging…. probably too much to ask, huh? By the way, you are spot on about Season 6… Ilene’s Masturbatory Opus!
What the?? Drma Queen! Drama Diva! Drama Empress! You are killing me here!!!
Yes you are the best drama queen that I ever saw. Wow but you have a way to fix things and return them back as they were. Maybe Bette will see now that all this crap that she was saying won’t matter and only being with Tins does matter after all and not getting her own way. I hope she is OK though, I would hate to see her badly hurt, and then the asshole acting like Bette would die with remorse. Thanks Ally, post soon please, and have a wonderful day. Love
Drama Drama I hope you will not leave us hanging to long
Both are stubborn,but forcing Tina to get married is not the answer. To me that is sorta like blackmail. Let them live together for a couple of yrs and if the want children then get married. If I was told to marry me or go. I would run like hell. I might break my heart but go I would. thanks
You definelty are the drama queen! Please may Tina be aliright, and maybe this will make them both see some sense and talk! PPS
You are a big Drama Queen and wouldn’t have you any other way Ally. Bette and Tina are both backing each other on a different corner. A now a fire, you have to make Tina okay or Bette will not forgive herself.
Yes, pls post again soon. I have been addicted to this saga.
Drama queen, drama queen but I know you will fix this. But I would have though that you will get Bette in an accident. I do not like that Bette is the one how will gave in. It must be Tina. She must be the one and marry Bette. PPS
The drama queen strikes again, you can’t leave us wondering what is going to happen, please let Tee be okay and don’t let Bette drive especially after the whiskey she has consumed, otherwise they may have them side by side in the hospital. Please post again soon.
You little drama queen, you. I did not know how you were going to get our girls out of this one. I’m a rabid Tibetter, but as I was reading this all I could think was “Run, Tina run”. Hopefully Tina will be okay and Bette will realize what she could have last and chill out a little. Great update!
I’ve one word in my mind : AWESOME. Drama, drama, drama! Tina’s in the hospital now. I love Bette’s stuborness. Excellent!
Drama-rama! Great chapter. I can’t wait to see how this plays out.
Yes you are a drama queen!! How could we forget? I was sort of hoping it would have been Bette in the accident and Tina would be the one to have to give in, but I think this will work. Don’t keep us waiting long, we need to know that Tina will be ok! PPS
great update! i really like it, dramaqueen! wow good way to bring them back together, when bette sees tina in that hospital bed, she will come to terms.. thank you, thank you, thank you. PPS
Drama, drama, and more drama! What mess have they gotten them selves into now? Please don’t let anything happen to Tina. Bette needs to get there right away. BTW…where the heck is Finn? PPS
Drama, drama, and more drama! What mess have they gotten them selves into now? Please don’t let anything happen to Tina. Bette needs to get there right away. BTW…where the heck is Finn? PPS
drama queen, you? no way.. you are just exagerating *rolleyes*. Geeez woman.. this tummy bug is making you become like IC!! haha (kidding my queen, kidding). I honestly think Bette is being a little too much egocentric (maybe is the wiskey and the lack of sleep).. but I think she should meet Tina half way (at least listen her fears and try to compromise on something not by blackmailing her but by talking and understanding eachothers points of view). Hope she is okay and they solve this soon. Have a good sunday. And please.. update soon?
drama queen is an understatement. Tina should not give in to Bette’s ultimatums….Bette should get of her high horse and understand where Tina is coming from. Bette’s ignorance is so childish (not in a cute way) that it’s annoying!!!
LOL! Good one Ally! I was feeling all smug as I read page 1 – all playing out as I though it should. And yet – I knew page 3 would hold more high drama. You just can’t help yourself, can you? LOL. PPS.
I had to smile when I read your note. I understand why Tina can’t simply say “Yes”. It would be the worst start for both. It has to come from heart. I will just wait and see how both compromise (it they do, but I’m pretty certain).
Nope I’m old fashioned, if getting married is a real option, get married, don’t play house. They are already living together and Tina has planned her life to include Bette and kids. If you are that far down the road, you need to either get married or lay out a plan as what you want/need in order to get there. If Tina never wants to marry Bette it is realistic of Bette to decide to move on. This is one of those deal breaker issues that should have come up much earlier in the relationship before even moving in together.
It seems rational to live together for a couple of years and then reconsider marriage. Of course, now Bette will run to her side and be apologetic. She ‘ll wring her hands and ask what did she do? If they had been together, this wouldn’t have happened. Does it always take a crisis before one realizes loss? Great story. PPS.
James is wise…he’s just wise! And yes ally, you are the dram queen, but we still love ya! ;-)
I just don’t see how you want to spend your life with someone AND bring kids into the equation w/o getting married IF marriage is a legitimate option. Call me old fashioned, but I don’t get Tina’s rationale. If there were logistial issues (let me finish my degree, financial hurdle to overcome, previous relationship to resolve, etc.)
Way to go Helena…Pigheaded Porter…
uh oh !! You cant leaave us like that !! We need to know that Tee will be ok and her and Bette will make things right… pps really soon – like tonight maybe !?! xxx
wow I knew you would come up with something to bring our girls together. Maybe they will look at this as something they could have lost..of course assuming TK is alright.
your not kidding with all the drama!! i don’t want tina to give in, but they need to come to an understanding and it is far too soon for them to get married just yet. i hope tina is okay and not seriously injuried! :)PPS
maybe this is exactly what they need to get them out of their unwillingness to compromise. Nothing like having to see the one you love in the hospital to make you remember what is really important! Can’t wait for the next chapter! Nothing wrong with drama – life’s full of it. PPS !
I still believe that Tina should not give in…Bette needs to calm down..hopefully having almost lost Tina, she will come to realize that.
I totally agree with Helena on this one. Get your effing arse on the hospital, Porter! Thanks for the chap, ally! Awesome as usual. :)
Please post as soon as you can, you can’t leave us tibette hangin’ there!
Welp, danger/near-death certainly trumps such questions as whose stubborn idea of commitment means more. If the idea of a more permanent loss doesn’t bring them round, then I don’t think anything will. I hope the next post is soon. Thanks for the chapter.
AllyE, the drama queen is back in full force. This is a hard one. They love each other to pieces but the ultimatum has to go and it is so unfair of Bette to do so. She knows how Tina feels about her parents marriage and knew that would color how she felt about marriage or at least she should have. She should not place their lives on this ultimatum because Tina is just as stubborn as she and will not give in. Maybe this fire accident will change both their minds and make them back down, especially Bette. Knowing you, you already have it worked out, please just get them back together. Hopefully Tina is just sufering from a little smoke inhalation and nothing more serious.Please put them back together AllyE. Hope you are feeling better. Post when you can.
love the hook. i hope tina is going to be alright. move porter’s arse. bloody stubborn girl – can’t blame her though. Can see why she would want to marry Tina so earnestly.
Can we call you “The Queen” of all drama queens? Hope these two stubborn women get it together. pps
Well, the universe has its own way of forcing issues
OMG. ALLY, what the hell! I hope ur writing right now!
WOOHOO!! This is GOOD Drama! Now I hope she comes to her senses!!
OH BETTE SAVED BY THE FIRE…HMMM..ONE WAY 2 MAKE HER COME TO HER SENSES ALTHO I REALLY APPRECIATED ALICE’S ARGUMENTS…FOR ONCE SHE MADE SENSE!!! oH,gosh, sorry abt capitaLS. EXCELLENT CHAPTER. THX
Damn Ally…that was some really good writing!!!! Oh Bette…she just has to take everything to the extreme…but she loves Tina and seemingly fate has intervened into this impasse. Bette will now crumble when faced with the real loss of Tina…and Tina will have her way of no marriage. Ally…that really was an exceptional chapter of palpable dialogue!
Hope Tina will be ok!