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Something so right – chapter 74
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“I worried that it was divine retribution for acting like an ass “
“We had a row -yes it was a big one on a serious subject but we were never going to split up. I love you – its really simple. I love you and intend to spend my life loving you “
Bette stroked Tina’s face
“I really thought it was what you wanted -to be married “
“We are both at fault – we should have talked all of this through before it became an issue” Tina yawned “God I am tired “
“We will talk when we are both up to it – which is not now “
“Bette “
“Yeah “
“Take off your pyjamas for me “
Bette raised an eyebrow and smiled “ Neither of us could raise the strength “
“I just want to hold you “
“And you need me to be naked for that ? “
“Pretty much “
Bette got up and very slowly she undressed. Tina lent back in her pillows and smiled at the tonic that seeing Bette’s beautiful body revealed in front of her. When Bette finally stood before her naked Tina cast the cover aside – she was naked as well
“No pyjamas ?”
“They can be an over-rated piece of clothing – I sleep better when we are both naked “
“That’s usually because we have had a LOT of sex “
“Its because there is no better feeling than your body against mine “
Bette climbed into bed and let her body sink into it
“Ohh – that is nice – that is so good “
“I have missed this “
“Me too “
Tina rolled across and Bette put her arm around her as Tina lay with her head on Bette’s chest. Several minutes went by
with both of them lost in their own thoughts. Tina was beyond tired – having Bette holding her was a wonderful feeling.
It was ironic that the fire had saved them a lot of pain – she had no doubt that without it the row would have gone one and on with neither willing to back down
For Bette just lying naked with Tina was so utterly normal that she was confused as to why it felt so alien. Maybe it was because it had been a few days, maybe because of the fire and maybe because Bette was facing the fact that Tina didn’t want to become her wife. Bette had always dreamt of meeting the right woman and marrying her – a wife that she would idolise and protect and cherish. Tina was more wonderful in EVERY WAY than her fantasy woman. However the payback was that Tina was too feisty, too independent and above all – too much her own woman to need marriage.
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Love Tina’s ass can look at that all day. Ok great chptr looking forwrd to more
I love this version of Bette and Tina finding out about one another’s needs and trying to live with the differences – why oh why can’t aren’t you the one who wrote the final season. You are so right about what was worth watching this last episode Tina’s ass, Angie’s face and Bette’s look of love when she kissed Tina at the airport. And that’s about all. Thanks for your alternative it makes this season more bearable.
purrfect!!!
Loved the update AllyE. Tina and Bette really need to mature a bit more before they think of marriage and talk a LOT about things. They are of two different minds because of circumstances beyond their control. They each need reassurance that their love will never waiver for any reason and a marriage certificate is not really necessary to ensure that. People fall out of love all the time marriage or not. Hopefully Tina will speak with her mother the next day when she calls and ask her not to come to LA, their presence is not needed. And that her health will improve more without the aggravation of her mother’s presence. Because they will not be able to be in a room together without taking offense to something the other will say. Great post AllyE. Have a good weekend. Post when you can.
These two really need to get a grip!!! Both are insecure and immature!!! Grrrr!!! LOL :)
Great update Ally! Tina definitely gets some smooth points for the no pyjamas in bed ploy. PPS!
What is that quote..an update by any name would still be as sweet!
You are such a wonderful writer. So much passion and love.
i hope these two find some middle ground soon. thanks for the update, ally! looking forward to the L Wing tom :)
Great chapter, I hope Tina’s mom doesn’t come and start trouble that makes T have a setback in her recovery. PS
This Ma Kennard doesn’t leave people alone?? God help Tina. What a wonderful chapter Ally, I loved the fact that they have the place for themselves, they can rest and spoil each other, and do what they want. I am so looking forward for the next chapter. Have a great night. Love
I think it’s sad that they wouldn’t let Tina’s mother talk to her, despite everything. Even tired, she could have said hello and let her mother hear her voice. If Ma isn’t too cool with Bette, it really is Tina’s problem not being able to accept her mother for who she is that is the real stumbling block. It’s not like she abused Tina, it’s just that her parents’ lifestyle makes Tina uncomfortable. And T & B get all upset that Ma doesn’t accept their relationship! But Ma never kicked them off the farm, Tina left in a huff. Tina really does need to grow up. She reconciled with Bette in the aftermath of the fire, she could have done the same with her mother. And I’m not sure if Bette was protecting Tina so much as enabling her.
Hehehehe, Ally you funny girl – where were you with your thought – I think in LWord-land by Tinas cute ass as you mentioned LOL. Where is my L Wing dose.
My apologies – i had just finished writing LWing 251 and thats my excuse ! Thanks to funnyone for emailing me to inform me of my error. i will post lwing tomorrow !! sorry again – klutz am i.
Ally… haha.. I guess you are getting old woman.. you posted a Something so right chap by the name of L wing. Damn.. you got me all happy to see a new chap of L-wing (not that I don’t get happy to see one from SSR too) and I got so confused with Tina at the hospital.. Come on my queen.. you can’t leave me all hoping now.. post the L wing chap too?? please??
Not a problem… I’ll take a ‘Something So Right’ chapter any way I can get it ;-)
I thought that was an L Wing and then it wasn’t but it is all good because it was an Ally post. Thanks Woman…pps
OK these two are so not ready for marriage yet, but how about a long engagement this way Tina get stime and Bette gets the reassurance she feels she needs? PPS:)
i think bette has the right idea of keeping everything in tina’s life pretty much calm, but tina should at least talk to her mom when she feels better.tina needs to at least be respectful of her mom’s choices, just her mom needs to to her choices. these two are so not ready for marriage yet! :)PPS
That was great!