Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 13, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Something so right – chapter 77

    Something so right

     

    Chapter 77

     

    Bette looked down with fondness at Tina. After having lunch at the beach they had come home and Tina had promptly fallen asleep on the sofa. Bette had changed the bedding, put on a load of washing and was sitting reading. Tina’s health was concerning her but the conversation at the beach where Tina had asked if she would wear her ring had given her a high that she didn’t think she would come back down from in a hurry. Bette stroked Tina’s hair – the blonde didn’t move which made Bette smile again – she had never meet anyone whose sleep was as deep as Tina’s – and being ill was making that sleep even more intense.

     

    Bette was just considering getting a thin duvet to cover Tina up when the phone rang.

     

     

    She reached it quickly and went into the kitchen to answer it – she didn’t think voices would disturb Tina but she didn’t want to take any chances.

     

    “Bette – its Helena “

     

    “Hey Helena “

     

     

    “I just wanted to know how Tina got on at the hospital. I didn’t like to say anything at the café but she looks bad “

     

     

    “She has an infection – she didn’t tell me that she woke up this morning feeling ghastly. The doctor almost admitted her but she promised to rest more and not to lie when I ask her how she is feeling”

     

     

    “Is she going to be okay ?”

     

     

    “I hope so – she just needs to rest – she’s not superwoman “

     

     

    “Good luck trying to convincing her “

     

     

    “No – I think this thing this morning scared her – she knows that she is only going to get well by taking it easy – she needs longer away from work. Her blood pressure was up as well “

     

     

    “Not helped by Alice” Helena said

     

     

    “Tina told me that Alice had a go at her – I am going to have to tell Alice to back off “

     

     

    “Alice was ranting when the two of you left – I got into an argument with her “

    Page 1 of 9123Next ›Last »

    Comments

    1. Finally they are able to really talk and understand one another. I am looking forward to your version of Season 6, because IC’s version is just too awful. I know you will make it all better!

    2. Thanks for the great update to this story.. I really like it! I TOTALLY agree about ep 7..it had some of that great energy to it ..and Tibettes dance..WELL!!!! Last episode Sunday…are we treally being left with no more Tibette love scenes…AGH!! SO HAPPY to know you have S6 covered…somethin to look forward to..thanks

    3. That was a good, must-needed talk for those two. It’s nice to see that Tina feels bad about the power comment. Glad they are moving forward. Thanks for posting! And I look forward to your version of Season 6. The real one has me very disappointed.

    4. I have been waiting for this chapter to appear forever,(well it felt like forever, LOL). I am excited that they are talking. I hope Tina gets well soon, I don’t want Bette to explore because of lack of intimacy. Post soon, please.

    5. AllyE thanks for posting and I am so excited that you will doing your version of S6 which will be a darn sight better than that of IC. The one thing that bothered me about the episode on this past Sunday nght was that they did not show enough of Tina and Bette dancing, why in hell’s name would they cut away from them. they showed us almost all of jodi’s scene and I would never want to see that one, nor Shane and Jenny. Rant over. Really liked this update, talking is doing them a world of good but one thing Tina has failed to tell Bette is how her chest was hurting so badly when they had cuddled and hugged. Hope she tells her. Post when you can.

    6. Let’s get Tina better! I am soooo ready for your version of season 6! IC needs to be drop-kicked off the planet for how she’s turned a wonderful show into something not to be proud of!

    7. Boy, Bette and Helena are such good friends in this story! I say Bette and Tina need a little R & R in Bermuda. The air there would be much cleaner and better for Tina’s lungs. They need a little alone time away from all their friends for awhile. Great update Ally!

    8. The two of them just holding each other in bed is so sweet. but let’s get real, if I’m naked in bed w/ either of these ladies I don’t think a papel army could keep my hands to myself. Tina just needs to pop a B12 vitamin and let Bette take her over the edge. Great update Ally! Hope you post the next chapter soon :)

    9. Sweet! Can’t wait to read your season six! What will we do without the show ? Who cares the really question is what would we every do without Ally’s stories? Best to you always.

    Leave a Reply