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    Something so right – chapter 92

    She meant it – Tina was wearing a black cocktail dress that really
    showed off her blonde hair and fair skin, high heels showed off her slim
    calves – all in all the impression was very favourable to Bette. She
    stood up

    "You look gorgeous"

    "I would never let you down "

    "I know that – I just still feel bad after we lied to her so blatantly
    on Sunday "

     

    "I lied – you two just nodded " Tina reminded her.

    "She was really decent about it " Bette said switching the TV off and
    taking the car keys.

    "She was – come on then "

    The restaurant located in one of the most highly rated hotels within a
    15km radius of Bette and Tina’s home. Bette handed her car keys over so
    the valet could park her car and they went inside. Tina took hold of
    Bette’s hand – they exchanged glances.

    "Its going to be okay " Tina said. All the same she knew that this was
    the first time they had meet Elizabeth’s partner and it was the first
    time they had meet up since the not successful encounter after the 10km
    race – she wanted it to go well for Bette’s sake. This mattered to her
    so it mattered to Tina.

    "Bette ! Tina ! "

    Elizabeth saw them as soon as they entered the restaurant. She looked a
    million dollars wearing a blue dress and pearls that were as real as
    they were expensive and walked across to greet them.

    "Hello " Bette said smiling

    "Hi "

    "I am really looking forward to tonight "

    Tina looked across at Hannah who had just stood up. She was tall with
    greying dark hair, she was well tanned and was a handsome woman. Her
    clothes were also expensive and even from the distance Tina was away
    from her she could see the size of the rock on her finger.

    "Come over – Hannah is dying to meet you "

    Bette was holding onto Tina’s hand as they walked the few feet to their
    table.

    "Hannah darling this is Bette and Tina "

    "Hello " the accent was east coast. Bette shook her hand and smiled

    "I am pleased to meet you "

    "Tina – hello "

     

    After the handshakes and introductions they sat down, Bette was next to
    Tina which allowed her to keep her hand against Tina’s leg –
    occasionally brushing against her hand.

    Comments

    1. Bette you are sleeping on the couch for the rest of the week. I’m glad Tina got up and went to get some fresh air, or Bette would be removing food from her face. Tornado Tina, I’d hate to be Bette right now. Awesome post.

    2. Oh, yeah-Finn. Whatever happened to him? Maybe Tina should go on Oprah to get this business with her parents off her chest, sort of like Mackenzie Phillips did, although her story was WAY creepier. That, or maybe some therapy, cause Tina hasn’t moved forward even a fraction of an inch.

    3. Yikes….that was kinda a big foot in the mouth moment for Bette. I guess she’s so nervous about being with her mother and her partner that she’s not thinking straight. Please update soon…..I hate to see these two at odds with each other. :(

    4. I know Tina is mad at Bette, but she needs to get over it. I know the truth hurts. Tina needs to get over it and deal with what she is feeling or her and Bette might not have a future. Thanks Ally PPS

    5. something lingers in bette’s subconcious – why else blurt such a sensitive thing at that moment. some things take time to heal & tina isnt there yet – which bette already knows but seemed to forget just then. tina handled that well, considering. interesting talk ahead, thanks ally & post soon :-)

    6. Bette…what the hell were you thinking??? After all she had been through with Tina how could she have just let that fly right out of her mouth like that. Anyway, I agree, she can’t take it back, so grovel, grovel, grovel! Fantastic update Ally, can’t wait until you update again to hear what Bette says to Tina.

    7. I think B is very aware that her comment was a huge foot in mouth situation & was flummoxed, thus silent, as to what to do (I definitely been there & done that)….but I don’t think either Elizabeth, and especially not Hannah, have built enough of a relationship w/ B to speak “coolly” towards her….while T may be feeling embarrassed cuz of HER issues w/ her parents’ open marriage, I think B felt 1000 times worse at having her proposal publicly rejected – just my humble opinion.

    8. I wonder why Bette is so thick-skinned around this subject when she already knows how sensitive Tina is about her parents open marriage? It seems to me to be so out of character for Bette to not mind her mouth BUT on this particular subject she’s a dunce who should be sent to the corner. She just ruined a perfect evening after T tried so hard to make it perfect for her by dressing right, getting home from work even, saying the right things, being totally and sensitively supportive—I dunno, u r a good writer becuz I feel so irritated with Bette right now that if she was within reach I’d slap her down. Whew!!! I got it out anyway!!!! Thx. Plz post soon.

    9. Hey AllyE, Another wonderfully written chapter for this brilliant story. You expressed the tense nervousness that Bette was feeling. As well as Tina’s attempts to put her girlfriend at ease before the dinner.The meal itself was jittery to start and then started to progress sweetly. Everyone was beginning to relax and open up. Interesting discussions were being debated until Bette blurted out the truth of Tina’s parents’ open marriage. Bette knows that she has hurt Tina in the most unimaginable manner. Hannah and Elizabeth can see these gals are meant to be and quite rightly kicked Bette into touch when Tina left the table. This is now a critical stage of Bette and Tina’s relationship as Bette needs to apologize and make things right. IT has happened so Bette must prove to Tina that she was wrong and is willingly to do whatever it takes to make things right between them again. I can’t wait to read how it all unfolds. The emotive nature of your storytelling brings me dead center to the action and feelings. Much appreciated and intrigued. Your Loyal Fan.

    10. Uh oh Bette in trouble and hope she not sleep in the couch or dog’s house lol, but hope Tina will calm down and let Bette apologize and make up to her. Please post more, thanks!

    11. Maybe Bette just needs a little thump to the forehead… not a slap down, just a thump. I’m hoping Bette doesn’t feel the need for an encore and bring up the whole proposal debacle.

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