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Something so right – chapter 92
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me"
"Oh – Bette – Bette – that is so perfect "
"I called her the next day half expecting her to give me the brush off
but we had lunch and talked and found that we got on really well. "
Tina squeezed Bette’s hand – Elizabeth was right – looking back it was a
really romantic start to a relationship.
"I was hooked on her " Bette said " I’d never met anyone like her – she
was smart and beautiful and she teased me. I’d also never meet a woman
who could out run me and I found out very quickly that Tina is a superb
athlete. It sounds silly but that really sealed things . I am a graduate
of an Ivy League University, I went to a prestigious high school and got
very high sat marks, I usually won any sport I played – things in that
area have always been easy for me. I got arrogantly used to having
everything my own way – then Tina came along and she ran me into the
ground the first time we raced on the beach – she made me hurt in ways
that I hadn’t since high school. She’s smart and beautiful and she’s my
equal in every way " Bette looked at Tina " I think its impossible
for me to love her any more than I do – but every morning I wake up and
I find that I do love her more"
Elizabeth rubbed tears from her eyes
"Oh that is so lovely. Have you always been so romantic ?"
"No " Bette said "Well – in a way I have – I always wanted to do the
things that I have for Tina but I was Ms Ultra Cool Lesbian lothario who
didn’t do flowers and chocolates and weekends away. Meeting Tina freed
me up – I know that Ti credits me with guiding her through coming out –
well she gave me the security and the love for me to be soppy. The last
2 years that Tina’s been my girlfriend have been the best 2 years of my
life. "
"Wow " Hannah said finally looking at Elizabeth " You told me that they
worshipped one another and you were not wrong "
Elizabeth smiled "Well I don’t take credit for what a remarkable woman
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awwwwwch bette u have a big problem…
Bette you are sleeping on the couch for the rest of the week. I’m glad Tina got up and went to get some fresh air, or Bette would be removing food from her face. Tornado Tina, I’d hate to be Bette right now. Awesome post.
Houston we have a problem
Oh, yeah-Finn. Whatever happened to him? Maybe Tina should go on Oprah to get this business with her parents off her chest, sort of like Mackenzie Phillips did, although her story was WAY creepier. That, or maybe some therapy, cause Tina hasn’t moved forward even a fraction of an inch.
Yikes….that was kinda a big foot in the mouth moment for Bette. I guess she’s so nervous about being with her mother and her partner that she’s not thinking straight. Please update soon…..I hate to see these two at odds with each other. :(
tina doesnt need to be mad at bette. shes being way to prickly. thx
Ah yes, Jillian Michaels. If only Jillian would carry you to the tub then lovingly bathe you and soothe your aches away…
I know Tina is mad at Bette, but she needs to get over it. I know the truth hurts. Tina needs to get over it and deal with what she is feeling or her and Bette might not have a future. Thanks Ally PPS
We blurt things like this out accidentally sometimes. I hope so a door-slamming evening after Tina forgives her. :o)
something lingers in bette’s subconcious – why else blurt such a sensitive thing at that moment. some things take time to heal & tina isnt there yet – which bette already knows but seemed to forget just then. tina handled that well, considering. interesting talk ahead, thanks ally & post soon :-)
Its always gonna be a sensitive topic, and Bette groveling will be much of a read.
Bette…what the hell were you thinking??? After all she had been through with Tina how could she have just let that fly right out of her mouth like that. Anyway, I agree, she can’t take it back, so grovel, grovel, grovel! Fantastic update Ally, can’t wait until you update again to hear what Bette says to Tina.
ooooooooooooo Bette how do you fix that?
I think B is very aware that her comment was a huge foot in mouth situation & was flummoxed, thus silent, as to what to do (I definitely been there & done that)….but I don’t think either Elizabeth, and especially not Hannah, have built enough of a relationship w/ B to speak “coolly” towards her….while T may be feeling embarrassed cuz of HER issues w/ her parents’ open marriage, I think B felt 1000 times worse at having her proposal publicly rejected – just my humble opinion.
I wonder why Bette is so thick-skinned around this subject when she already knows how sensitive Tina is about her parents open marriage? It seems to me to be so out of character for Bette to not mind her mouth BUT on this particular subject she’s a dunce who should be sent to the corner. She just ruined a perfect evening after T tried so hard to make it perfect for her by dressing right, getting home from work even, saying the right things, being totally and sensitively supportive—I dunno, u r a good writer becuz I feel so irritated with Bette right now that if she was within reach I’d slap her down. Whew!!! I got it out anyway!!!! Thx. Plz post soon.
Hey AllyE, Another wonderfully written chapter for this brilliant story. You expressed the tense nervousness that Bette was feeling. As well as Tina’s attempts to put her girlfriend at ease before the dinner.The meal itself was jittery to start and then started to progress sweetly. Everyone was beginning to relax and open up. Interesting discussions were being debated until Bette blurted out the truth of Tina’s parents’ open marriage. Bette knows that she has hurt Tina in the most unimaginable manner. Hannah and Elizabeth can see these gals are meant to be and quite rightly kicked Bette into touch when Tina left the table. This is now a critical stage of Bette and Tina’s relationship as Bette needs to apologize and make things right. IT has happened so Bette must prove to Tina that she was wrong and is willingly to do whatever it takes to make things right between them again. I can’t wait to read how it all unfolds. The emotive nature of your storytelling brings me dead center to the action and feelings. Much appreciated and intrigued. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh dear! Bette Bette Bette! Great update. Thank you!
Perfect pitch.
Uh oh Bette in trouble and hope she not sleep in the couch or dog’s house lol, but hope Tina will calm down and let Bette apologize and make up to her. Please post more, thanks!
Maybe Bette just needs a little thump to the forehead… not a slap down, just a thump. I’m hoping Bette doesn’t feel the need for an encore and bring up the whole proposal debacle.