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    Something so right chapter 93

    Bette laughed – they snuggled down together and very soon they were fast asleep.

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    Bette had been out of the office at meetings all day – it was after 5 when she got back to the office. James met her looking grave

    “You need to call Tina “

    “What’s up ?”

    “She’s been trying to ring you all day – getting increasingly frantic “

    “God – what’s wrong – did she give any clues ?”
    “No – and she tore me off because your phone wasn’t ringing “

    Bette pulled her mobile out of her bag and cursed

    “Damn thing is switched off – I usually switch it to silent – hell “

    Bette turned on her phone and waited a few seconds

    “12 missed calls – all from Tina “ Bette reported to James

    “She’s been increasingly desperate – I really didn’t have the number of the hotel you were meeting at “

    Bette went into her office as she hit the speed dial to call Tina. The phone just kept ringing and went to voicemail. Slightly worried and puzzled Bette sat down and logged onto her emails. About ten minutes later the door opened and Tina came in – right away Bette could see that Tina was upset. Bette jumped up and ran across

    “What’s happened ? are you okay ? “

    Tina shook her head

    Bette took hold of Tina by the shoulders and pulled her close

    “Babe “

    “You remember last night – the conversation we had – about my parents open marriage ?”

    “Yes “

    Bette didn’t think she was still in Tina’s bad books – they had sorted out the problem.

    Tina looked close to tears

    “Tina “

    “My mother rang this morning “

    “Yeah “

    “My father has walked out on her “

    “WHAT ! “

    “He’s left her – apparently he walked out on Friday night – she expected it was just because they had rowed about the farm but he didn’t come back. He hasn’t been to work since and she’s going crazy “

    “Hell – they both said that they would never walk out on the other “

    “Well he’s broken the rule – he’s walked out – she doesn’t know where the hell he is and she’s going crazy “

    Comments

    1. Ally, I have been waiting to see how long Tina’s dad was going to put up with the open marrige. I do hope he is OK. Glad Bette took charge. Thank you Ally PPS Hope you have some fun on your week off.

    2. That was really generous of Tina to let Bette out of the doghouse for simply speaking a truth that Tina has failed to do the work required to not freak out about the mere mention. Considering that Tina is still stuck, I wonder what good she’s going to do back home. Hopefully she won’t make the situation worse. And poor Bette being ‘plagued’ by Elizabeth who had the GALL, the NERVE to go see her run the race. Terrible woman. And then she DARED apologize! What is WRONG with that woman?

    3. Well, maybe this is just the situation that will “unstick” Tina and her aversion to her parent’s relationship. It was certainly timely as it took the heat off Bette and how she blurted it out at dinner. I guess it’s true that it is an ill wind that blows no one some good! Keep writing them Ally…they are awesome.

    4. Great chapter. Always wondered when all that “openess” was going to backfire. So now Ms. “Open Busypants” knows how it feels to be betrayed. Payback is hell, isn’t it? Can hardly wait AllyE. Thanks for posting and have a great week off. Just indulge yourself.

    5. Hello Ally, What a wonderful, bright and sunny day it has turned out to be. You have posted more of your fabulous fan fictions and I am in hog heaven.The effects of Bette’s stupid comment were slowly forgiven. Good to have the gals talk through this hiccup. These things with happen and both know it was wrong and particularly insensitive on Bette’s part.I never sleep on an arguement. You need to thrash it through before sleeping.Then the revelation from Tina’s parents. Good to see Bette take charge, comfort Tina and sort out Finn and Willow as well.Ally, you constantly challenge and amaze me with your wit and writing. Thank you so very much.Your Loyal Fan.

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