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Something so right – chapter seven
“I am house trained and fairly well behaved “
“I know that – I think that she will focus on the fact that you – by your own admission – are a “ player “ “
“Does it bother you – I know that we joke about it but I would hate if it bothered you or that you thought I was just out to get you into bed “
Tina put her hand on Bette’s
“It does in a way but I know that its just that – a reputation “
“Which I deserve – but – well Tina – I am dating you and that makes a lot of difference”
“How ? “
“Because I don’t date very much – yes I sleep with women – you know that about me but for me to have a girlfriend is something that I don’t do “
“I am flattered “
Bette looked at Tina
“I really like you Tina and if I am worried about anything its that my reputation will put you off “
“All I know is that you are a player – you could have had any woman you wanted when we were in Liquid – I guess you get that all the time – which I am not surprised about because you are so beautiful. But – Bette – you are fantastic with me – kind and gentle and so sweet. I don’t see that you are the monster that you say that you are”
“I have made women cry “
Tina laughed
“What did you do — steal their dinner money ?”
“Try and be serious “
“Why should I — I am enjoying teasing you “
“I take things too seriously “
“Yes you do – you need to have some fun “
“With you I have fun “
“I have fun with you — Bette – I am a big girl. I know that you are a sexual predator but all I see when I am with you is that you and I get on really well and – well we seem to be falling for each other “
Bette nodded “ I know that I am “
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Bette is in love with Tina so she will wait as long as it takes for Tina to be ready. I have a feeling movie night is going to turn into first kiss night :) and I hope Helena and Alice don’t make it to difficult for the couple to move forward in thier relationship. If we don’t hear from you before then Merry Christmas and hope to read a new post soon.
That was awesome and love it! Please post more, thanks!
this is such a sweet story. I love that they are taking their time developing their relationship. Love Bette like this. Merry Christmas Ally
The kiss, the kiss, I’m still waiting for the kiss…….maybe that will be my Christmas present. Have a great Christmas Ally!
… and I am falling for this story with every chapter that you post… Thank you for a heart warmingly great chapter Ally. Please post again real soon.
This is such a great story, I find myself looking for new posts everydays and getting giddy when I find one…thanks so much for your time and devotion to this tale!
This story is so wonderful – it has it all the friendships and the romance and the tension. “Predatory” lesbian meets her dream woman and dream woman learns she is a lesbian – Yes! Happy New Year Ally thanks for sharing your writing talent and gift for story telling with us – Your stories have so so much love in them.
I love this ff. Merry Christmas :)
How delicious. If you have another chapter or two in you for today that would be wonderful. You sure know how to draw out the sexual tension.
Bette has a bleeding reputation? I didn’t know she was a hemophiliac. This one must be set a bit in the past, nowadays we make sexual predators register with the authorities. No wonder Tina is hesitating. Sounds like the movies and popcorn date could be a first for them both. Bette brings a date to her place and maybe, just maybe Tina gets past 1st base. Liked the ‘twigged’ bit, hadn’t heard that one before.
This was a teriffic chapter AllyE, and the player is well and truly smitten with the gorgeous blonde. The player is about to be tamed and will love it as well. A great big Texas wish for Happy Holidays to you and yours. PPS
As always a great Chapter. I love this Beginning Story. Merry Christmas to you.
This is cool Ally…a nice steady development to their relationship. Controlled and sensitive Bette….I like that. Great chapter, can’t wait for your next update!
Get them toghether FAST!!!! You are too good!
Ok the pace of this relationship is exciting and at the same time frustrating. I love how you’re letting Tina dictate the pace. Hope Bette can truly hold on. PPS Merry Christmas!!
Love how bette is taking her time with tina, also her openness about about her past. the conversation with shane and bette was awesome…:)
funnyone, your killing me. needed a laugh. i love twister. finally caught up. its been interesting lately. thx.
very…nice…post soon ally…have a great holiday too…
Awww, how sweet!! I love how Bette and Tina are with one another, taking their time yet falling head over heels with each other!
extremely intensely wonderful…more
Hey Ally, I’m loving this story and that bette is falling so hard for Tina. Great that Bette was able to open up to shane and share all of that happiness about her budding relationship. What’s more fun than sharing the big news when you’re in a new relationship and really connecting w/ someone. PPS!