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    Something so right – chapter six

    “Don’t believe you “

    Tina handed Bette the paper that was a print out of their two carts – numbers 6 and 12. Bette read the different lap times

     

    “Fluke “

     

    She was grinning at Tina who was chuckling

     

    “Bad loser “ Tina replied

     

    “Fluke “ Bette repeated

     

    “Come on – I am the superior driver -just admit it “

     

    “Never “

     

    “Bad loser “ Tina repeated.

     

    “Come on – I am really hungry “

     

    “Okay – lets freshen up first “

     

    Both collected their bags and headed to the bathroom. Bette combed her hair out – Tina emerged from a cubicle and stood next to her while she brushed her hair

     

    “I had a great time – thanks Tina “

     

    Tina looked at Bette – when Bette smiled Tina just melted with how stunning she looked. The smile was simply beautiful.

     

    “You are very beautiful “ Tina said quietly

     

    Bette looked at Tina in the mirror

     

    “So are you “ she replied “ and you just have walked into my life when I was so stale. Thank you “

     

    “You don’t wish you were in Liquid ?”

     

    Bette shook her head “No – this has been a blast – I thought you were crazy when you told me what we were doing but its been terrific “

     

    “And you owe me £50 but I will let you off “

    “You will ?”

    “Yeah “

    “I don’t want to be let off “

     

    “Well we could carry it over for something else – you could suggest what we do next time “

    Bette considered “ I would have to think about it “

    “That’s fine “

     

    Bette took hold of Tina’s hand and they looked at each other

     

    “I am glad that you’re my girlfriend “

     

    Tina swallowed “ So am I “

     

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    Tina drove them to a fish restaurant that had a fantastic view of the sea. They were shown to a table that overlooked the sea. The sun was just setting as they sat down and regarded the menu. Bette was very impressed with Tina’s choice of restaurant and with the ease at which she had held out the chair for Bette to sit down.

    Comments

    1. I love this Tina, she really knows how to have fun!! go karts are cool, seafood yuck,lol… but the company is great!!! love how bette is so understanding and patience! nice update!!!!!!:)

    2. What’s a hypermarket and where is Bette supposed to get a 50 pound note? OK, so Tina’s up to a one-armed hug. After 2 weeks. I’m not so sure that I really believe Tina when she keeps saying how sure she is and how right it feels.

    3. I am enjoying this story. They are good together. I hope Helena or Alice don’t ruin it for them.I was quite the opposite of Tina in this story but then again some people need to ease into it.

    4. Wow that was brilliant I can’t wait for their first kiss it’s so exciting, come on now Ally don’t be long post another chapter soon, best of luck Hun Have a nice day.

    5. Beautiful story Ally. They’re getting to know each other at a nice pace. They are building a friendship and trust before they become lovers. You write so well Ally and I know that I’m going to be on pins and needles until your next post. Great job!

    6. Go karts? Seafood? Sweet date. I like how Bette is being really patient..and letting Tina go at her own pace. Tina should tell Dana though.. because she would be understanding and you have to start somewhere. PPS.

    7. HEy Ally, Many, many htansk for that beautiful and touching date. The walk along the beach was wonderful. I loved how the “Come here” joined the lexicon of Bette and Tina’s life and love together. More please. As always it has been a great pleasure to sit back and read your great words. Much gratitude to you. From Your Loyal Fan.

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