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    Something so right – chapter six

     

    “And I want you = now eat that food before I eat it – this halibut is wonderful Tina”

     

    They chatted through dinner – Bette discovered that they liked a lot of the same movies – even when it came to bad ones. Tina paid for dinner and they left – satisfied with the food and the company

     

    “Fancy a walk on the beach ?” Bette asked

     

    “Love one “

     

    Bette jumped down onto the sand and watched as Tina joined her. Even though it was just getting dark the beach still had a few people walking along – most seemed to either be lovers or single people exercising their dogs. Bette was deep in thought – Tina was everything she had ever dreamed existed in a woman – she was beautiful and funny and more than capable of looking after herself – it was a combination that was becoming an addictive cocktail for her.

     

     

    “What are you doing tomorrow night – I hoped we might spend some time together “

     

    “Got some papers to go through at home but that should only be three or four hours – apart from that I am free “

    “Helena not around ?”

     

    “Helena flew to New York about two hours ago to see her mother Peggy “

     

     

    Bette nodded “So no one else to play with ?”

    “Just you” Tina replied “No woman to be a legend to ?”

     

    “Just you” Bette shot back

     

     

    “Do you like disaster movies ?”

     

    “Depends on whether they are bad or good “

     

    “I have heard this one is fairly cheesy “

     

    “The best sort “

     

    “Its called Twister – Helen Hunt is in it “

     

    “Oh – I do like Helen Hunt “

     

    “I saw a trailer and its Helen Hunt in a white tee-shirt “

     

    “Even better “

     

    “Fancy that tomorrow night ?”

     

    “I would love nothing more than to tell you why Helen Hunt is sexy “

     

    Bette looked at Tina

     

     

    “Can I hold your hand ?”

     

     

    Tina nodded “ Yes “

     

    Bette reached out her hand and took hold of Tina’s hand. For a few seconds Tina was anxious but she relaxed

    Comments

    1. I love this Tina, she really knows how to have fun!! go karts are cool, seafood yuck,lol… but the company is great!!! love how bette is so understanding and patience! nice update!!!!!!:)

    2. What’s a hypermarket and where is Bette supposed to get a 50 pound note? OK, so Tina’s up to a one-armed hug. After 2 weeks. I’m not so sure that I really believe Tina when she keeps saying how sure she is and how right it feels.

    3. I am enjoying this story. They are good together. I hope Helena or Alice don’t ruin it for them.I was quite the opposite of Tina in this story but then again some people need to ease into it.

    4. Wow that was brilliant I can’t wait for their first kiss it’s so exciting, come on now Ally don’t be long post another chapter soon, best of luck Hun Have a nice day.

    5. Beautiful story Ally. They’re getting to know each other at a nice pace. They are building a friendship and trust before they become lovers. You write so well Ally and I know that I’m going to be on pins and needles until your next post. Great job!

    6. Go karts? Seafood? Sweet date. I like how Bette is being really patient..and letting Tina go at her own pace. Tina should tell Dana though.. because she would be understanding and you have to start somewhere. PPS.

    7. HEy Ally, Many, many htansk for that beautiful and touching date. The walk along the beach was wonderful. I loved how the “Come here” joined the lexicon of Bette and Tina’s life and love together. More please. As always it has been a great pleasure to sit back and read your great words. Much gratitude to you. From Your Loyal Fan.

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