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    Something so right chapters 87+88

    Story written on October 4, 2009 by allyemmerson.
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    Words: 10784
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=74349
    Author Notes:

    i wrote it 3 months ago – just read it – oh yeah – there’s some Kit in it

    “No – she was still in bed – just reading and relaxing”

    “I had some making up to do “ Elizabeth admitted “ I was supposed to go somewhere with Hannah “

    “I’m sorry “

    “Don’t worry – I had totally forgotten about it -maybe in all the excitement of seeing you and finding out about you. Hannah did understand after I had done some penance “

    “What was your penance ?”

    “Washing up and cooking several meals – I want to hire our own cook but she won’t let me “

    “Do you have a big house ?”

    “Yes – 10 bedrooms “

    “Two of you in a ten bedroom house – wow “

    “There is only the two of us now and again- more often than not there is more than just Hannah and I “

    “Her family “

    “We have a son “

    Bette raised an eyebrow

    “Sorry – we adopted a little boy when we got together – he was nine and had lived all his life in orphanages and care homes and he hadn’t had much of a chance. So we were looking to find a child to fit into our lives and we adopted him – he’s called David and he’s at University at the moment – you will like him Bette – he’s 6ft plus and handsome and we both adore him “

    “Wow “ Bette said at yet another revelation thrown her way

    “I know I should have told you about him sooner”

    “it’s a lot to take in – that I have a mother and that you have a family of your own”

    “It doesn’t take away from the fact that you are my daughter”

    “And how does David feel about me ?”

    “He knows that I have a daughter and that I was looking for you. He is due home in a couple of weekends – I was hoping that maybe you and Tina would come to dinner and meet Hannah and David “

    Bette could feel herself getting cold feet – how would this boy react to Bette’s sudden appearance – maybe he would assume that she was after some of Elizabeth’s money. It would look suspicious to him and Bette wasn’t sure she was up to facing Elizabeth’s family. She tried to suppress her feelings and concentrated on the woman who was her mother.

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    4. wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ally is back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i miss this story so so so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont leave us again

    5. At first I waited patiently for your next post, but over the last weeks I started getting restless that something had happened for you not to post anymore. You can’t believe how I have missed your posts.

    6. Kit is back in the picture. Elizabeth seems to unsettle Bette…….. I am beginning to have my concerns. I hope Big Bette doesn’t hurt little Bette, or Tina will be ripping Big Bette a new ASS. Great update. I have missed you and your stories. Please don’t go away for so long.

    11. Finally! It was time for Tee to meet Kit. Can’t believe it took you 88 chapters LOL. This woman keeps showing up with new info.. I can understand why Bette feels dizzy and ready to run away from her. Thanks for the updates, and again.. don’t take to much to post :D. (Hey mate, where are the L wings you promised?)

    13. “Hell’s teeth”? Don’t think I ever heard that one before. So Elizabeth is going too fast (how dare she invite Bette and Tina over to meet the rest of the family!), yet new revelations from her are greated with the suspicion that she’s hiding things. I got to say Bette is striking me as a touch paranoid in this (Tina too, after getting all huffy about not being met for the shopping excursion). There’s nothing wrong with Bette talking to Kit, but she really needs to go to the source for her information, namely Elizabeth. And then Melving, that old dick.

    14. Thanks so much for the update. This is one of my all time favorite fanfic stories. I just love the way you have written Tina with her strength of character and warm heart.

    16. Well, Bette seems so beaten down…I hope that her Mother is for real and Bette finds some peace. I couldn’t believe it Ally…updates on both your stories…JACKPOT!

    20. Just outrageously estatic that you updated SSR. Love it Ally,and you have unposted chaps, oh my.. and while you at it..any chance for TLW and L&P ;) Thanks

    24. I hope telling us you have that many unposted chapters is an indication that you will be posting them. Because it would be awfully mean of you otherwise ;) Thanks for the post, Ally!

    25. It SOOOOOOOOOOO NICE to see that you are back. I can’t and can believe you ended the chapter like that (Drama Queen). I can’t believe B&T have not thought about a D&A test. It would be soooooo easy to get a sample of Elizabeth, being a coffee snob just get it from her cup. It’s GREAT to see Kit in this story. PPS:o).

    26. Hey Ally, Back agian to share the wonder or your writing. Thanks you for returning with your inimitable style and flair for fiction. Bette has been through so much in this drama as her mother returns. This has forced Bette to face so many of her fears; betrayal, abandonment, self-worth. It was good to find out that Tina was so mad yet as soon as she saw her lover, Tina’s tenderness took hold and she comforted her partner. Now meeting Kit is a major step forward in unifying this relationship. Still am impatient to read more so please post soon. Complete gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.

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