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Soul Harvest: Chapter 50
Tina, are you still in the shower? Youll be a prune by the time you come out. Ellen said as she peeked her head in the bathroom.
Mom, Ill be out in a minute. Tina said in a raspy voice, trying to clear her throat.
Ellen pushed the door open and walked in, putting the seat down on the toilet to sit down. Are you alright, Tina?
Bette looked at Tina frantically, silently questioning Ellens actions. Fine, Im fine mom. Ill be out in a minute.
You know, honey, I wanted to talk to you about something.
Now mom, cant it wait til Im done?
No, your father will be here soon and so will Bette.
Finding the situation quite funny, Bette decided to spice things up a bit. Pushing her knee into Tina, she caused a slight gasp to escape her.
You sure youre ok?
Yes, mom. Tina glared at Bette. Just tell me whats up.
Its about that Bette woman. Bette raised an eyebrow and grazed a nipple with her finger. Im glad your father and I have met her.
Really? Tina was shocked at what she was hearing.
Dont sound so surprised. Sometimes your father and I need a little time to take everything in. Now that we see youre so happy, well, its hard to dismiss it. Ellen admitted.
Bette grinned wickedly, wondering what Ellen would think of her now as she silently seduced her little girl. Bette kissed Tinas nipple, nibbling on it as she felt her become wetter on her knee.
Im glad youre… thinking this, mom. Tina barely managed to get out.
I just wanted to say that, Tina. Thats all for now. Ellen stood up to poke her head in the shower and give Tina an encouraging glance.
Mom! Some privacy please? Tina begged and yelled at the same time, terrified, holding the shower curtain shut.
Since when are you so modest? Youve never been shy, Tina. Ellen pulled the shower curtain open to hand Tina a towel and give her a kiss on the cheek when she froze as she saw Bette, naked and in the shower with her daughter. All three stood there not moving.
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(83 votes, average: 4.16 out of 5)
A hoot – what’s next.
I choked on my cheerios, and kept on laughing till I had to finally give in and breathe! Fareast, I just caught up with every chapter, (reading most of them twice) and am simply amazed. Your stories create a wicked blend of innocence, humor and sincerity. I can’t believe I could keep away for so long, but what a great homecoming!!!
THAT’S WHAT I CALL A CLIFHANGER….
I dont get much the chance to leace a comment but am a faithful fan of your story I look everyday for updates and am totally hooked. U do a great Job THANK YOU. :D
LMFAO … great chapter!! … please dont leave us hanging :-)
Always excellent—this is so well written and incredibly nerve wrecking I can’t wait to see how they recover from this. Please keep up the excellent work! Thanks for sharing.
my jaw actually dropped at the end there, that was wet and wild. :) teehee. Great chapter, I can’t wait to read the next one.
Sooo close. damn, I don’t think they have a hallmark card for this type of situation.
post soon pls.. don’t leave us hanging…
great post fareast…real sorry for the blizzard…honestly…the last bit was hilarious…let’s see how ellen takes it all in…
LMFAO Don’t you hate being caught? OMG this sounded somewhat familiar. hehe. I literally have to go schase my jaw that’s rolling away before my cat sinks his teeth into it. Post soon. I wanna see if Tina gets the same reaction I did!!! 5 stars from me to you! (since our votes don’t count for much these days)
Ouch, that must have been bloody awkward..good job
That was so funny.Bette and Tina busted by Mom. Let she if mon reacted isquite are rather noisey, Love has seen Ellen face, god dont you hate to get busded. thanks so much for a funny chapter.
This gave me the best laugh! Great chapter – oh mom’s face! LOL
LMAO!!! That was a riot! Yeah… agreeing your daughter to go out with someone is one thing… walking into her going at it is another thing. You are just soo good doing these things.. love it!
great
hahaha…hilarious…
Oh that was so great! Funny as hell.
Woah, lol, caught…wet handed! Good one farest, great story.
LMFAO…this is awesome…what a laugh first thing in the morning….this is brilliant…….brilliant I say…..5 bright shining stars for you….oh…and thanx for the post on my fic….Your words of encouragement keep me going……continue soon…..I love it….
Wow! Please don’t leave us hanging for too long! This is great…hmm..what is Bette to do?
Oh Jesus Christ…*slaps her forehead*
too funny
Oh shit that was funny!