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Soul Mates – Chapter 7
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Bette shut her eyes tightly, tears rolled down her cheeks as she opened her mouth and welcomed Tina’s warm tongue. She felt herself being pushed back into the wall as Tina kissed her more and more fiercely. She wrapped her arms around Tina’s waist, slipping them around to grip her back tightly and possessively with her fingers splayed to touch as much of the blonde as she could. She angled her head from the left to the right and fed Tina kiss after kiss, nipping and sucking on the soft lips as she tried to satiate their desires.
It would be the last time she and Tina would kiss so Bette wanted to make sure she remembered it forever though she knew that it would be unforgettable even if it was as plain as an air kiss.
When she felt Tina desperately tugging at her opened button up shirt, Bette decided it was time to let the blonde go. She grabbed onto Tina’s arms and reluctantly pulled her lips away. They were both breathless and Bette couldn’t help but notice Tina’s red and swollen lips, the outcome of all her kisses. Tina looked up to her with lust in her eyes, some confusion but eventually her own libido got the better of her as she leaned in to resume the kissing.
Bette leaned her head back and further away from those sweet lips. Tina’s eyebrows lowered as she tried again but was rejected a second time. After that she simply looked at Bette and waited for an explanation.
"Go home, Tina" Bette said simply but damn if those three little words didn’t break her inside.
Tina looked at Bette for a long while, wanting to say something but she didn’t have the energy to do so. She had been rejected numerous times and wasn’t sure she could handle another. Here she was practically throwing herself at a woman she loved, willing to leave her life in New York behind to be with Bette and it didn’t mean anything.
Tina clenched her jaw tightly and slowly backed up, feeling Bette’s grip loosening and tried to ignore the tingling she felt when Bette’s slender fingers grazed her skin. She had never felt so unwanted before, not even when she and Bette had broken up all those years ago. She felt stupid to try and make things work when it clearly wasn’t what Bette wanted. If it was then she wouldn’t be forcing Tina to leave.
The blonde felt dizzy, the tears had begun to well up in her eyes and she wanted no more than to run out the house and away from the emotionless gaze of the brunette standing in front of her . . so that’s what she did. She turned around and left the house, got in her car and sped off, completely oblivious to the crying brunette standing on the porch.
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Should’ve driven to that secluded area and proceeded with Plan A Bette. The secret for some good drama is bad decision making. Great story telling Liah, loving it 😍 thank you 😘
Wow! That was some chapter! My heart is still beating furiously in my chest. Humans sure know how to complicate life and love. Just goes to show you that you have to love your self first before you can love another. Ugh! Bette…
My heart feels like it’s being squeezed.
Loving this story. Looking forward to your next post.
Can’t say you didn’t warn us. Tina, dear, remember that Bette has been drowning her sorrows and might not have a grip on her words and thoughts right now? Good update, but dang, that’s two in a row that make the happy ending look a little remote. Next?
(OK, really, what’s with the backslashes?!?! What does this comment thingy have against the use of contractions?!)
Damn Katherine and her interfering, which still never seems to end. A lot of this heartache seems to stem from both Tina and Bette’s inability to tell each other what they’re feeling. Bette at least admitted that she’s still in love with her apparently soon-to-be ex-wife… Tina couldn’t even let Bette know she’s not her “backup” choice. Oh well. Maybe Tina will find her missing backbone when she gets back to New York. Thanks for posting. :)
Hi! This is now my third comment… and all I’m gonna say, is that I borrowed the movie S.H.A. from a friend at work, and um… watched (endured) it. And… all I can say, is that you’ve taken a movie that was… not so great (dreadful… REALLY dreadful) and made a really cohesive, engaging story out of it. I vastly, VASTLY prefer your version. Even if Tina is currently annoying me. ;P Seriously, keep up the good work. I look for this every day and I’ll be sorry to see it end. Cheers! :D
Ur breakn my heart here. Plz fix it. Love ur story. Pps
Just caught up with this. Have to say sweet home.alabama is also one of my favourite films and am loving your twist on it… Thanks for the update
OK, I’m back for a third comment, too – although my second doesn’t really count, since it was a gripe about technical issues :-). To be honest, I had to kind of skim the story the first time, so now I can add: CRIKEY, Tina, get a grip. Minutes ago you were calling her your ex-wife, and now you’re stunned that she is (reluctantly) asking you to leave? Sheesh. I’d say Bette deserves better, but of course I want a happy Tibette ending. So I will just trust that Tina has some self-revelations coming. ;-) (You know you’re writing an engaging story when we’re all hollerin’ at the characters like this.)
Great update although a bit sad. I agree totally with jp22 on both her comments. However, I think Bette should have told Tina what she was feeling and why and Tina should have told Bette that she was not second choice and she should have told helena at the park that she was not going to marry her and gave the ring back. Tina never should have mentioned the ex-factor in front of Bette, that was just the wrong move entirely. Can hardly wait to see how you fix this can of worms. And katherine needs to keep her damned mouth shut it is not her life. Thanks for posting.
Argh!! 2 mules!! Two beautiful stubborn mules!!! Great update Liah! Powerful chapter to portray their states, and boy! I can only say that they are simply 2 mules!! If only they are more open and communicate openly. Argh!! :-( so frustated! … So when is the next one!? :-D PPVS??? :-)
That was such a sad update and so heart breaking. You’ll make it better i know. Thank you for this story.
Ok upset at the outcome of that chapter I hope the next one will be more pleasant. Because I can’t take much heartbreak and neither can Bette or Tina. I am confused at the fact Helena still wants to marry Tina. Seems so far fetched to her earlier behaviour.
Please fix this,sooo sad.Thank you for the update,great story.
I just re-read the chapter, and the way Tina has acted is just so frustrating! Bette might have been a bit stoic, but how many times is Tina going to hurt her without explaining her actions? Tina’s pretty damned selfish. Bette’s been trying to conquer the world to get Tina back? Bette deserves a lot better than what Tina’s given her so far. This will be another time Tina has left without a second glance back. I hope the happy ending is something Tina really earns, because she has an absolute *shitload* of making up to do. Argh! Right, rant over. :P …Um, pps! Lol
Looking foreward to how you going to clean up this mess. I really needed some minutes before I could type this comment.
Oh come on! You’re killing me here!!! Ahhh PPS! Lol