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Split — Ch. 16
california – yes bathrooms are great..haha
Amazed – well hey, i dont mind if you imagine her as Brody, cuz she’s damn hot! And i’m glad you think my writing of Shane/Carmen is hot…lets me know i’m doing my job right. and thank YOU for leaving a wonderful comment ;)
ShAiN – Jealousy is great, isn’t it? hahaha
CFone – haha, sorry for scarying you with Shane’s reaction to Diane. but you know how Shane is…she’s very protective. Some of that will show again in this chapter.
Opus for the Liberal
Shane slouched against the wall of the airport bathroom, next to the door. She had her arm cradling Carmens luggage, and smirked as women would file in and out through the bathroom and give a glance at her. Yet her attentive eye hovered over to Carmen, who was doing the same before entering a stall, catching these strangers check Shane out. Shane raised her eyebrow, puzzled why Carmen has not done her business yet in the bathroom. Although it was, in fact, quite clear that Carmen did not like these girls drooling over her. Therefore, to soothe that bulge in Carmens throat, Shane flashed a sheepish grin with a cute chuckle. She pushes herself off the wall once it was just the two of them in the bathroom and trudges her way towards the stall that Carmen still did not enter.
Carmen eyed the androgynous figure that held on to her belongings, and concluded, Youd make a very cute caddy, did you know that?
You dont look like a person whos a fan of golf, she muttered under her breath, and her eyes gazed over.
Im not, she breathily said, her words faintly heard, but her luscious lips formed the words gracefully before growing into a flashing smile. The simple action amazed Shane. She admired how her soft words made her yearn for a fuller toneas if Carmen was doing this to her on purpose.
How does she do it? Shane thought. A tease that I would not mind to being the victim of. She knows she has power, and uses it at all the right times. And Im supposed to be the ***** quote unquote Temptress Tamer. Id be fired from not doing my job correctly. Haha, oh ***** me. While the notions went on through Shanes coffee-driven mind, she held her eye contact.
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And by the way, I really liked you`re poetry…You`re talanted Crimsy:)
Great update. I really loved the way Shane said “is that a problem with you” to Diane. She want’s to givw it a try with Carmen and fight for her and also protect her from Diane who I think and bad intention. Need a fix soon.
Aww…Jade and Tab!Yes…they fit:) You really left me with a true concert-feeling!The only thing I miss now, is a beer in my hand. Thank you for another brilliant chapter! ~Grins and goes off searching the house for beer~
AHHHHHHH :), TAB AND JADE!!, AHHHH