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    Split — Ch. 9

    m_rave – read this chapter and youll see if she does.

    CFone – Yes, Shane did handle the situation quite nicely, and YES youre dead center on the Tab issue”good observation on your part. But thats all Im gonna say right now

    JanetMG – Im glad youre still reading, and digging it too? Thats even better.

    Amazed – Fantastic to know that you love it. As for Shane going back to her bed, and her Carmen [hahahaha, not sure if Shane should claim her yet] just read this chapter

    Katie – Sorry for the line killing you lol, I think I may revive you with this chapter =)



    Opportunity

    She leaned against the door of her room, Why havent I left to sleep on the couch yet she sighed, fighting back the temptation to doze off. Yes, shes glad shes finally back at home after such a long night, but with so much on her mind”it was nearly impossible to just close her eyes. And there is a beauty sleeping in her bed, a bed only a few steps away a few steps away to pull those sheets off and warm that body with her own. Yet, she just stood there. Frozen in her spot, but warm all over. Yearning to let all shes held inside out, but lacked the power to even begin the process. She doesnt even know what that process is. A few questions lurked her mind, Why did she choose to sleep in my bedwhy is she still here

    Her arms hugged the blanket closer to her body, as she slowly began to walk over to the bed. The creaks beneath her feet were thankfully muffled against the carpet. She softly threw the blanket to the floor, and kneeled at the side of the bed, opposite to where Carmen slept. She stealthily placed her arms on the bed and rested her head on top of it. Watching curiously, as this goddess before her faintly took in breath after breath”putting Shane in a trance. Such a simple pattern tamed her consciousnessand well she did notice that she was only in bra and underwear. Suddenly, those breaths stopped and Carmen spoke, I know youre there

    Shane chuckled, I know Im here too Haha, how long did it take you to notice?

    Her eyes opened slightly and she smiled, I havent been asleep at all.

    Oh really And why not?

    Because she sat up and patted the bed”making Shane look up at her, You never left the roomand I could feel your eyes on me.

    The prowler pulls herself up onto the bed and sits against the headboard, Uhwell, it was a tough night for me Carmens ears perked, noticing that this may be a moment where Shane may finally open up”well it cant hurt to be optimistic, And, I guess seeing someone with their head on straight is just sorelieving, you know? To go from chaos, to seeing a woman on an island keeping her cool”figuratively speaking its just, ***** grand.

    Carmen bit her lip, nodding her head to the words that Shane spoke candidly, Hey well, we all have climactic experiencesand all the falling action after it.

    Shane smirked, Youve been hanging around Jenny too much.

    Well youre the one who started the metaphors”

    ***** you.

    She put on a smug expression and scooted closer to Shane, her lips brushed against her ear, Ive been waiting all night

    Shane matched her guise and turned her head to catch her soft lips in an intense yet slow and fervent kiss. Carmens hand grabbed onto Shanes neck, she could feel her pulse pound against her hand as their tongues grazed each other in hunger. Shane shifted her hips to straddle Carmen without breaking lip contact. Carmens hand traveled down to unbutton Shanes jeans, and suddenly, their foreheads pressed together, the kiss was finally broken as to gasp for needed air. The blue eyes connected with brown, even though the room was dark enough that eye color wasnt necessary. Together they pulled Shanes jeans down her hips, and Shane supported her whole body on one foot and hand as she brought it further down her leg to kick it off. She stretched her neck to kiss Carmens warm lips again, but she teased and pulled away to calm Shane with her hands at her hips.

    She laughed softly as she towered over Carmen, who lay beneath her and between her legs. Carmen leaned in and pulled Shanes shirt up slightly, her lips finding contact with her lower stomach. Shane took her shirt off in a blink of an eye. All thats left is Shane in her underwear, and Carmen in a bra and panties. But this was soon solved, as Shane pulled Carmen up to her face, only staring into each others eyes for a moment before the attraction between their lips was unbearably craving for the other while Shane unhooked her bra. Shanes kisses moved down to her neck, and then back up to her ear, I think there may be more than one climax tonight The ***** giggle Carmen gave Shane drove her crazy. She carefully moved her hair off of her shoulder and out of her way as she kissed the lovely swell behind Carmens ear, which resulted in a shiver and moan from Carmen.

    Carmens hands journeyed down between Shanes skin and her underwear to find that she wasnt the only one who was wet Carmen pushed Shane down onto her back, leaning down to bite the waistband of Shanes briefs as a tease, but ended up just pulling it down with the use of her hands. She kissed up her thighs slowly, Shanes scent down their putting her into a spell set to please. Shanes whole body jerked at the instant Carmen set contact with her wet and throbbing *****. The reaction only encouraged to let her tongue roll against Shane, whose hips began to roll with the rhythm. ***** was the only word audible word Shane could create once the fingers begun to thrust into her as well.

    She leaned her head back, and gripped the sheets as Carmen pleased her in such an toe-curling teasing manner”building Shanes ***** with such licks and thrusts almost to the point of climax, yet once she sensed it, she purposely slowed her pace, making Shane cry out. Carmens hands gripped Shanes bucking hips to slow their urgency. ***** Carmenahhh Shane cried.

    Carmen stopped and smiled, she crawled up Shanes body, How bad do you need this she said in her most seductive voice before leaning down to kiss her.

    Shane kissed her back hard and then pulled her back, Im gonna fuckingexplodewhy must you be a ***** tease?

    Again, the goddess leaned down to kiss her, softly this time, I want you to beg.

    She thrust her fingers in her hard, making Shane whimper, Ah, please CarmenI need this

    This was enough for Carmen; she wanted to give it to Shane just as much as she needed it for herself. Her fingers thrust harder while Shane ground her hips to the rhythm. Shane grabbed onto Carmens neck as she moaned heatedly into her shoulder. As the thrusts accelerated, Shanes pulse followed; the beat pounding at the core of her throat as well as in her chest. The blood rushed, everything was on fire, as Carmen with her plunging fingers pushed Shane to bliss. Slowly the momentum of the thrusts came to a stop. Leaving only the sound of Shane gasping for air while still holding on to her, which made Carmen feel much accomplished. Shane let go of Carmens neck and fell back against the bed, *****

    Mmm wowyou needed that, Carmen smiled and then placed another quick kiss on Shanes lips.


    Shanes eyes blinked open, and noticed that she dozed off to Carmens soothing breaths. Her heart raced, Holy ***** it was a ***** DREAM! She sighed and crawled into the bed.

    Her movement woke Carmen, Shane?

    Yeah

    You okay?

    Shane thought for a moment as she lay beside her, Uhyeah she leaned down and kissed her bare shoulder, Just go back to sleepdont mind me okay?

    Carmen mumbled an, Okay, before nodding back off to her own dream.

    Shane rested her head on the palms of her hands as she looked up at the ceiling, mentally kicking herself, and then looking back over at Carmen. I cant believe it was a ***** dream

    Comments

    1. Wow..didden`t see that coming. This was an exilent chapter Crimsy. Fucking hot…too bad it was only a dream. I surtanly hope it will happend again..:) Keep up the good work girl! You`re brilliant

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