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Stained – Chapter 1
David loved going to The Centre. He was a very shy boy, but over the last weeks he had learned to open up a little. At The Centre he got to play with other children and do things he would otherwise never have the chance to do. The boy simply adored Tina and it was a mutual feeling. That’s why Tina hadn’t minded at all when Gloria had called her to ask if it was alright if she were to pick up David a couple of hours later so she could work an extra shift at the diner.
They had made paintings and collages out of seashells that day with the group and when the other children were collected from the beach by their parents, Tina had taken David for an ice cream.
Tina looked over at David again. She had almost caught up with him. He was standing in the middle of the pavement with his ice cream in his hand. When he saw Tina looking at him, he raised his hand to wave at her. Unfortunately, clumsy as a five-year-old can be, he was not raising his free hand, but the one with the ice cream in it. Most people were walking around him. However, at the very moment David was using his ice cream to wave at Tina, a woman was walking right past him while talking on her cell phone.
As if in slow-motion, Tina saw what was happening, but she was still too far away to be able to prevent it. David’s arm went up to greet her and as a result of it, he smacked his ice cream right onto the white jacket of the passing woman.
"Shit, shit, shit!" Tina mumbled and hurried over to the scene of the crime. The woman looked very classy. She wore a white tailored suit with a soft pink tank top underneath the jacket of her suit. The formerly white jacket of her suit… The very expensive looking formerly white jacket of her suit… On her very nicely manicured feet she wore strappy black sandals. The suit clung to all the right places and complemented her amazing figure. She had legs that just didn’t stop. Her hair was worn down, allowing her dark curls to dance whenever she moved her head. Her soft skin had an amazing mocha complexion. Her eyes were concealed behind 70′s cop/porn star glasses. However, what most drew Tina’s attention were her soft, full lips.
‘Wait, her lips? Focus Tina! Expensive suit of amazing looking… NO… of pissed looking woman ruined!’
Tina quickly stumbled over to David and began rambling apologies with a mortified expression on her face. "Oh my God, I’m so sorry! I hope it isn’t ruined. Shit, maybe…" She suddenly stopped dead in her tracks.
Tina had thought the woman looked familiar, but with those sunglasses on she hadn’t recognized her right away. ‘Well, fuck me, this is definitely not good. Shit, David, of all the people in Los Angeles did you really have to spoil the thousand dollar suit of The Great Bette Porter?’
TBC…
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(50 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
never sick always entertained
Loved it & no never could get sick of B&T beginings
ABSOLUTELY NOT!!!!!! True tibetters NEVER get sick of new stories…in fact we NEED them…so pls continue….
No way man.. never sick of tibette beginnings! agreed with honda90… WE NEED THEM! Yay, so please post soon.
i’m never sick of B&T beginnings, i love them and i love Notting Hill, s please continue
I never tire of B & T stories as long as they’re well written and have a little spark. Please continue.
ooolalalala……post a longer chappy…..gotta have lots to keep us happy till the next chappy…….lol…….
great start and I don’t think I will ever be tired of B & T beginnings. post when you can
Too short. Post soon.
Yippeeee, a Bette and Tina story. I love these. They help me to survive the every day world. This is going to be a good story. Please, Please continue. By the way that was a very good movie. Thanks for the story.
TIRED OF B&T BEGINNINGSLMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHELL NO! never, ever, not me, I can read Tibette for hrs upon hrs .. Yeah this was just tooooo SHORT, off to a gd start, but make it longer, you know how we are wen it comes to our fav girls ehehe
i cant’ wait for the next please keep going!
Ahh love B&T beginning and this is nice start and like it. OK post soon please, thanks!
more now and longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sick of them… SICK OF THEM? Have you gone momentarily insane? We’ll never get sick of B+T beginnings, especially not if they’re so nicely introduced! PlEASE CONTINUE!
Yay! I have comments! Thnx so much. Ok, sorry, will stop the happy dance now, since there was actually a reason I’m commenting on my own story. Luckily it hasn’t posted as one sentence, but I’d like to make the dialogue italic to avoid confusion. Anyone know how to do that? Thnx!
Love it so far. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen, so more please!!!!
Ok that was too short, I lie it so far. The Great Bette Porter, hmm.
ROFL about the Ziff comment above … can’t imagine anyone getting tired of BT beginnings … this was great. must go back to beginning and ensure you did NOT write that the next post would be six weeks from now. i must be dreaming.
ps. Any chance on you bing dutch? The med-school thing in your authorscomments reminds me of me a few years ago LOL
I was sitting here trying to remember how Notting Hill went. Actually right now what I recall most is the whole Horse and Hound fiasco. lol I want to yell, “That was too short!” but I know from experience that you can write your butt off and no matter how much you feel you have written, it’s still just too short. Anyway, if the general public here is sick of B&T beginnings, then my name is Elizabeth Ziff, aka ezgirl.
I have to agree with the others… I never get sick of BT beginnings and it was deffinetly too short. But I loved it anyway so go on.
No way we’re gonna get sick of B&T begins ;) post soon moreeeeee!! :D Please? hehe
Well..what can I say?..a great start…and of course more..please post soon…
It tells us that… when you have a car, don’t walk! lol. Just joking. Interesting start. Please do continue.
hey another b and t story. no sweetie we will never tire of them as long as they are well written. good start. i hope bette isn’t too hard on tina.
All BT beginnings are welcomed in my book. And this one is great so far. I hope you’re planning on posting often lol. And the next one being posted today..??? Well anyway. Great start. Keep it up.
hmmm… so tina knows bette… i like this… please continue … and like the others said… we never get tired of bette and tina beginnings…
I love Bette and Tina beginning. We do need a lot of them. We all know how it did begin. I like it when you and others test the water with different ones. So Tina knows Bette or knows of her. thanks
Oh this is fun. I look forward to reading more. Thanks.