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Stained – Chapter 14
Bette was using all the energy she had in her to imagine Tina in front of her. Alright, so it might not be the most professional acting technique around but it worked, damn it! And it does take a skilled actress to transform a scruffy bearded blue-eyed youngster into the hazel-eyed princess of her dreams. When they had finally reached the end of the scene, Bette felt emotionally drained. She had used every emotion she had been feeling herself and fed it to her character. She knew the scene had turned out phenomenal, but she was also slightly worried for her own emotional well-being. The feelings she had tucked away deep inside of herself were now floating around on the surface.
‘Why hasn’t Tina called me? She could have at least sent me a note. I fucking bared my soul – well, to me it felt like it – and she just plain ignores me, damn it! I did write that I would give her space if she needed it, but she could have let me know… something. Anything! And why do I even fucking care about her? Straight and bloody fucking taken!’
A loud applause awoke her from her inner rant. She looked around a little disoriented, like someone who has just woken up from a deep sleep, and realized the entire cast and crew were applauding her.
"My god, Bette! That was absolutely amazing! I knew you could do it." The director had come over to congratulate her on such an excellent performance.
Bette gave him a faint smile. "Thank you. Do you mind if I go home now? I’m kind of exhausted."
"No, no… not at all. God knows you deserve some rest after that."
Bette smiled at the rest of the cast and crew and told Jake, who was still applauding: "That better be for yourself, too, because you were incredible."
"Only because you were kind enough to take me along for the ride. I expect to be thanked in your Oscar speech, though."
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(56 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
yay i am first…lol i really like this story seeing betty being the vulnerable one puttin herself outther and leavin the ball in tinas courtpls post soon:)
Noooooo!!! Don’t leave us hanging now! Great story.
Excellent story and depth of emotion from such a young’un!. Keep it coming. Do well on your exams. They are really important for your future. Sorry to sound like a Mom.LOL.
I was ready to knock the crap out of the ad on the 2nd page for taking up so much room. Anyway, let’s hope Tina is alright. Even better, what if she’s right behind Bette? Fofofo… ;)
Great chapter, although a bit too much suspense for leaving us for so long. I don’t know how we are going to cope while you do your exams but I suppose we’ll have to. May your exams go ridiculously well and leave you elated and buzzing with excess creative energy that needs to be channelled into writing more chapters! Seriously I hope they go well and enjoy your celebrations but please don’t injure your typing fingers! Thanks again for writing.
i hope tina is fine…does alice has more than one “I did Bette Porter” shirt? because i wold like to have one
please don’t leave us hanging to long… what a place to stop… love this story…
C’est le milieu de la nuit ici, je ne trouvais pas le sommeil… maintenant je vais faire de beaux reves… J’adore ton histoire!
I hate math but that counts if I leave several comments? :)Please post soon
I love this story….please don’t leave us hanging for too long. I’m sure you can a fit another chapter in soon. :)
I thought for sure the director was going to say, “Sorry, we didn’t have film in the camera. Can we take that again?”…Nice cliffie. Very nice cliffie!
Well, it was about time that Tina called. But I should have known that something happened to her. Now, you tell us that you are leaving us for awhile. You are totally bumming me out with that kind of talk. Can’t you just tell your instructors that you have a story to right. Oh well, I know how teachers are (I should know, but it is only PE). They think that their subject is the most important thing besides breathing. Now, I will be dreaming until you return to us. Have fun.
glad to c ur post1
You can’t leave us hangin, More more, more.
Noc – love you for your wonderful story and all, but that was just mean…
I’m enjoying this b/t tale. I hope we will be seeing them get together soon. Thanks for writing.
Oh man. Cliffhanger! Well good luck on the tests, have fun on vacation, oh yeah “Happy Birthday”. I’ll still be here waiting when you get back. Thanks for taking the time.
this stoy is amazing!!!!! don’t leave us hanging!!! Good luck on your exams, and Happy B day! please post SOON!!
What a cliffy, you can’t leave us like that LOL…..you capture the girls emotions so well, I’m really impressed by your writing – especially when thinking about your age, I would never have guessed for 17 :o)) Good luck with the exams, if it goes as great as your writing, then you’ve nothing to worry about!!!! Post when you can, I’m dying to hear the rest off their conversation….
You so cannot just leave us hanging like this. I mean okay, you have final exams those are important, but so is the blood pressure level for some of us. Please don’t let anything be wrong with Tina, except maybe she broke up with Eric, that would be good.
Good chapter. Poor Bette and what happen to Tina now!
Love this story – but exams come first! Both my kids are in exam mode at the moment too – so I do sympathise. Have a great time in Portugal and will be waiting impatiently for your next chapter.
Another good chapter.I can’t wait for the next chapter..like U can’t wait for my QTL stories =)
You have final and going away on a trip. so please post before you get to busy. Thanks
Goodluck with your exams. That wasn’t the best place to leave us hanging and for 3 weeks. Thanks
Noc Baby, Hey I know you need to do your exams but don’t leave us like this! Hanging for the next 3 weeks, och! Please do one more chapter. Have a great time in Portual and Happy Birthday! :)
Good luck on your exams! LOL! Geweldig hoofdstuk! en wat een einde om ons te laten hangen voor zo lang! LOL Slim hoor! LMAO
dying here
Is the drama coming up now? I really can’t wait to see. Hope your exams are going well and you can post more chapters soon. Thanks for your great story!