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Stained – Chapter 15 part 2
"Damn it! How am I supposed to control myself when you can’t even do it? And you call yourself an actress!"
Again, tears were streaming down Tina’s cheeks, but it were tears of laughter this time.
"I’m sorry!" snorted Bette. "But no one calls me that except for my dad and even he can’t pull of a look like the one you just gave me."
"Well, what was I supposed to do? You were just gonna walk out without letting me finish!"
Their laughter slowly died away and it was quiet in the room again, except for the occasional chuckle that had fallen behind.
"Wait," Bette finally broke the silence, "why were we laughing? You just totally hurt my feelings…again, I might add."
Tina gave her a look. "No, Bette, you just hurt your own feelings! You have to stop drawing conclusions without even having heard what I have to say!"
"Oh," Bette uttered, "good point."
"Now," Tina said while taking Bette’s hand and leading her to the couch, "sit down, shut up and listen."
Bette never took orders from anyone, but she had no problem obeying Tina, who sat herself down next to Bette.
"I told you there was more. Eric and I broke up today. Well, he dumped me is more like it."
Bette’s face had lit up at those words.
"He dumped you?" she said excitedly.
Tina raised her eyebrows and Bette realized her reaction, although heartfelt, might not have been the politest one.
"Oh, oops. I mean," Bette corrected herself while putting on her funeral face and with a matching voice she said: "he dumped you? I’m so sorry."
Tina grinned at Bette’s little performance.
"No, you’re not. That’s alright, though. Neither am I."
Bette’s eyes shot up to meet Tina’s.
"You’re not sorry?"
"Of course not, how can you even think that!" Tina exclaimed.
This time Bette gave Tina a look.
"Yeah, okay. I might be the one to blame there…"
After a short pause Tina continued while a small smile appeared on her face.
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(63 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
1st brb
so adorable!! noc-t u rock!!
Fun and flirty. You sure you’re only 18? You write older, mos’ def.
Ok, I have a big smile on my face. Thanks for that update. It was very nice. Damn, this is just so sweet. =)
Tina in jeans and a bra. Mmmmmmmmm-mmmmmm. These 2 are so cute. That whole Elizabeth Porter thing was classic. lol Oh and about the “oh shit” thing after the kiss…I remember when a boyfriend of mine (yes I used to date men…shut up =p) proposed to me. I started laughing and crying and I said, “You shithead!” I ended up saying yes but well yeah that relationship has been over for 7 years. And if you read that useless mini-story, I’m impressed.
very fun!…
haha, I want to see Tina’s friends’ faces when they see Bette. There must be a lot of scream. =P
love it, tks!!!!!
loving this… i could see the drool cuming from bette’s mouth… and all of the readers… please continue
Awe how cute…young B&T in love, just precious and I love it!
I agree w/ Bette on this one. If Tina is going to run around half naked then she should expect Bette’s eyes to be fixated on her body 100%. Thanks for the update Noc! It was worth the wait :)
They are so funny! Liking this story a lot.
Dang I would be a little unsettled too if I saw Tina just in her jeans and bra. They are going to make such a cute couple. It is going to be classic when Tina walks in with Bette as her non date but date to the party. Thanks for the post but get back to us soon.
HMMMMMM a half naked Tina, how about Bette help dress Tina in the bedroom before the party???
I can’t to see what happens at the dinner party.Good JOb.
jeans and a bra…the visions am having. totally loving it, wish u’d post more often.
wakin up from jeans and bra visionphewi was so lookin fwd to an update on this story and am glad i did get one thanks for the post sweetumz
that was great! did someone say you were 18? wow, I’m impressed. I like the way these 2 are progressing. I can’t wait to see how Tina’s friends will react to Bette showing up. please post soon.
I dig this story – it’s ultra sweet.
3 pages longer is like 5 bette would make anybody forget their own name and when tina see’s bette’s rack she will forget how to breath
so sweer cute romantic… Everything TiBette should be… You are one talented writer… Sigh… And your mix of Romance and humor is just ‘all that!’ THANKS!
So glad when I checked you were back. Way to go on the grades by the way. Your only 18, OMG, so young. But the story is as sweet as ever. The bantering, “Elizabeth Porter”, hate that when my whole name is used. Tina in a bra and jeans, so not fair. Can’t wait for theparty, the earrings, and you know Bette’s going to take care of things concerning David and his mother.
Mmmmmmm …lovely images…must fall asleep now so I can dream of them!
Just jeans and a bra Ouch, hit my head on the top of the desk to clear my vision. Oh shit, I sound like a sailor now. kust thanks for that. thanks
this chapter was hilarious with all the misunderstandings, B&T are very cute together and i’m looking forward for b-day party as well
Ahh love this, they are so cute and sweet and funny, love them. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Sounds like this dinner might include dessert… ;-) Nice one, Noc
Wow what a great and funny post – I love this!!!!!
teasing Tina…yeah you got her down pat…so innocent and so cruel!!!!