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Stained – Chapter 6
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"Oh Bette, how many times must I tell you to resist the pull of the grumpy lezzie we all know lives inside your head. Sarcasm just doesn’t become you." Alice sadly shook her head.
"I was under the impression you wanted me to tell you why I was late. I must have been mistaken, my bad." Bette said sweetly, knowing this was her only leverage against Alice.
"Alright, alright, I’ll shut up. Geez, the grumpy lezzie is gaining ground."
Bette decided to let that one go, since she was planning on finishing the story sometime tonight. "As I said, I bought him a new ice cream. Then David, – that’s the kid – Tina and I walked back to The Centre again.
Alice was trying very hard to keep her mouth shut and to also keep her head from exploding. She was, of course, failing miserably. "Aaaah, overload! There’s just too much to comment on!"
Bette thought of a calming image to keep her from biting Alice‘s head off… literally. If Buddhism and meditation and all could make the Tibetan monks bear Chinese occupation, it should certainly be able to prevent her from strangling Alice, shouldn’t it? Ah, a beautiful garden with beautiful flowers. What the hell? Was that shrub shaped like a giant penis? (Do any of you listen to The Planet Podcast by Elka & KC? Freakin’ hilarious!)
"I knew there was going to be a hot momma involved! Didn’t no it was going to be literally, though. And you named the kid? And what is The Centre? Sounds like an evil laboratory were they train children for some strange purpose like killing all the Belgians or something!" (No offence to any Belgians that might be reading :D)
Alice had managed to say all this without taking a single breath, so when she finished she took a deeeep breath and was once again silent. She looked quite pleased with herself.
"Are you done?" Bette asked. "To answer your…shall we call them questions? – I didn’t name the kid; they already come with a name. Tina is not David’s mother and The Centre is a non-profit organization helping out underprivileged kids. I suppose Tina works there."
"Hmmm, woman walking down the street with a kid that’s not hers, whom she has just bought an ice cream for and is taking to a place called The Centre… She wasn’t wearing a rain coat too, was she?" Alice was having a field day.
"Alice, will you shut the hell up for a minute? And do not even try to insert a grumpy lezzie comment." Bette warned.
Naturally, Alice didn’t listen. "So, quick summary: you bought the kid an ice cream to get into the pants of this Tina-woman. Must be one hell of a hottie for you not to yell at a jacket-spoiling kid! Usually just being a kid is enough to get yelled at by Bette Porter."
Bette sighed. The woman was just incorrigible! "Yes, I suppose if you translate all that from your wicked dialect to civilized English, that’s what happened."
Shane was the only one who noticed the uncertainty in Bette’s voice and recognized that her Yoda-powers were needed. "Could it be that you weren’t just nice to the kid because you want to sleep with Tina, but because you want her to really like you, meaning that she made you want to be a better person?"
It was the second time that day that Bette was speechless. She sometimes wondered if Shane could read minds. Her Yoda-powers went beyond that, though. Bette hadn’t even had a clue herself why she hadn’t been her usual, yelling self earlier that day. As soon as she heard Shane say the words, however, she realized her observation was spot on.
TBC…
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Just let Bette go and see David say hi to Tina and meet Eric.She will keep her word to David,that is the important thing right now. Tina will fall in love with Bette and send Eric on his way. before Bette will show any feeling for Tina. I think that Bette better start running,because Tina will be after her. thanks
well that is ti Shane is rigth! she talk a little but every word have a lot of power! and Alice well alice is a peculiar person but i wish one like her like a friend :D. i think Tina need to kick Erik out and try to find some time with Bette i like when Tina take the first steps! continue this is good
Damn Alice is so crazy and we have Yoda in the house!
Yeah, I think Tina is very serious about her love relationships. But when you meet someone meant to you, I guess you just lose the battle quickly.
Yes, you Dutch have been taking over just a little bit lately, so thanks for reducing the nederlands. I like to read other people’s comments and appreciate it when they are in English ;) And yes, whe definitely need some drama coming up. Otherwise Bette could just go to the centre, meet Tina, tell her she loves her, they kiss and your story is finished. How about making Eric fall for someone else and thus making himself obsolete? This guy is always so boring and obsessed with Tina. Send him on a business trip to The Hague, where he goes to koninginnenach, smokes too much pot and goes off with a sexy rock star. Then leave the girls to themselves. I’ll think about that twisted plot you wanted for our two favourite ladies. Thanks for writing.
why does Tina have to dump Eric, why can’t Eric dump her and that way when Bette comes to visit David(Really Tina) she can be there for her. Your Story and I love it…I am not a writer, I just love to read anything on B&T.
I think you should just go with what you think is right for your story. Nice podcast reference too. LMAO I don’t really remember that particular podcast though. Maybe I’ll listen to it later when I get home. I can’t speak for everyone, but I’d rather have a short chapter each day than have to wait days on end for a longer chapter. It’s just like eating. You wouldn’t go four days without food then eat like crazy, would you? You’d end up sick! Not saying that your writing would make us sick. Ehh, uhhhh, I’ll just go over here to my quiet corner before I really put my foot in my mouth and end up looking like an ass. *quietly creeps away*
YODA is in da house… LOL
the sooner you get eric out of the history…the better. Then let the drama be between B and T.
love yoda… go on pls… i love what u doing… good…go girl
Hmmm . . tough questions. . .on one hand it’s great seeing B&T get together fast but on the other hand, your story would have more drama if they waited. . .BUT I think Eric should hit the high road! Maybe Tina needs to be single for awhile. . .while dating. . .hmmm. . .sorry that was NO HELP whatsoever. . .whatever you decide please post again soon!
i think eric is too boring to stay, let him go and make the story for B&T…there’s enough drama to find just between them two..great dialog, funny
I am for a slow burn with Bette and Tina. Let them get to know each other better while the tension builds. I like asia’s comment about Eric dumping Tina. That way Tina will be free to talk to Bette. Bette can be the shoulder that Tina leans on. That is my vote.