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Tina clicked another link and another page popped up.
"Tsk tsk. Baby you should disable pop-ups. Those suckers might have viruses."
Tina just waited for the page to load. When it did, the page was filled with black text on a plain white background. Tina silently directed Bette to read with a slight incline of her head.
"Erm, okay. Let’s see. When Julianne Met Gracie: Cops Gone Wild. Um." Bette spared a glance at Tina who redirected her back to the monitor with a pointed look.
"You want me to read this? May I have a chair?"
Tina gave up her chair and opted to take Bette’s place on the floor. She rested her head on Bette’s knee and waited while Bette read through the page.
Bette read the story and realized that it utilized characters from the tv show. Bette’s eyes widened about halfway through when she realized that the female lead characters were apparently gay in this story and that they were together. Very together, with some light bondage thrown in.
Bette started feeling hot under the collar and cleared her throat. Tina glanced up and Bette smiled down at her weakly. "Um, the author’s real imaginative."
"Really?" Tina spoke for the first time in an hour.
"Uh, yeah. Very, very, imaginative. I would never have thought an erlenmeyer flask could be used in such a way!" Bette shifted uncomfortably in her seat. She was feeling hot and her own imagine was a little bit lubricated. Images were slipping and sliding around in her head and ideas were fairly gliding out of her brain. Ideas she was considering trying out with Tina. Bette’s smile bloomed when she realized that Tina must have wanted her to read the story because she wanted to try out some of the things written there!
"T, I wouldn’t be averse to being tied to a laboratory bench with a jumper cable, but I think we should wait a while before trying out the other lab instruments…"
Tina started laughing. She didn’t stop even as she gently nudged Bette aside to take hold of the mouse. She quickly scrolled to the bottom of the page and indicated the name of the author. Her laughter slowly died down as she nodded Bette to read the name.
"JuCie4Eva_tk. Hm. Interesting name, huh?"
Tina seemed to lose patience and resorted to pointing something on screen with her finger. It was the author’s email address.
"t.portard@gayhoo.com" Bette read aloud. She did a double take. "Tina?! You wrote this story?"
Tina nodded and smiled shyly. "Did you like it?"
"Um." Bette remembered her therapist telling her that Tina needed to have healthy interests other than Bette. Was writing hardcore porn a healthy interest? Bette wondered.
"I loved it!" Bette gushed in more ways than one.
Tina’s face broke out into a radiant grin. "Really? I wasn’t sure it was any good. Some of the scenes seemed a bit unrealistic."
"Oh, no. They’re very realistic. In fact, they’re practically true to life! Except we haven’t, I mean, they haven’t gotten around to enacting those scenes yet."
Tina’s smile turned wicked. "Oh, so you think they’re realistic, huh? But I kinda think some of those positions are impossible to achieve. I had to use a little creative license." Tina stood up and pulled Bette along.
"I think you need to have a fact checker." Bette drew her palms up Tina’s body, from the slight convexity of her buttocks to the curve of her shoulders.
"A beta could do that. A beta is like an all-around story editor for fan fiction." Tina spoke softly and close to Bette’s lips.
"Yeah." Bette said breathily, "You need to beta your story."
"Wanna beta now?" Tina brushed her lips against Bette’s jaw.
"Oh hell yeah…"
The End
Notes:
The tv show alluded to within this story is fictional and not based on any existing tv shows on the tube today.
The Science of Stories: An Introduction to Narrative Psychology by Janos Lazlo is available on Amazon.
The Definitive Book of Body Language by Barbara Pease and Allan Pease is also available on Amazon.
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Loved it!!!!! I’m not afraid to beg….more please!
i’m sick, at home, saw your story, feeling much better now…thanks LOL
lamentamini, i was thinking Cagney and Lacey too LOL
WE NEED MORE!
Love it. Thank you more please!
That was great and please post more, thanks!
That was so charming and so well written.Thanks. More, please
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. More, more, more, please. Thanks for posting.
BTW, would you please customize my new cell phone? Seriously.
sure! What unit do u have? If its a symbian (smartphone OS), i am now an expert. I can make your phone into a sextoy, seriously. Oops, methinks that’s TMI :)
My new phone looks looks sexy and *knows* it does, but when you get it alone… it comes over all shy and doesn’t know how to perform. We’ve only been together a week, though. We have the rest of its life (probably the end of my current contract), to figure it out and make each other happy. As for the story, I quite like Tina’s other interests… I thought for a minute though that what Tina had been doing was chatting to her professor again. This was way better. Although I’m wondering just *how* that erlenmeyer flask was being used in the story… I have my ideas. Nice post, 7. thanks :)
I loved it! Can’t wait for more. PPS
“Uh, yeah. Very, very, imaginative. I would never have thought an erlenmeyer flask could be used in such a way!” OMG OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Sorry, but my first thought was “1 guy, 1 jar.” I haven’t seen it but based on reaction videos, it’s not pretty. Ow.
Okay please tell me I wasn’t the only one who thought of Cagney & Lacey. ;)
hilarious-bette on her knees-and then getting all hot and bothered…how does she stay out of Tina’s universe? Dr Morga might not have it right!!
loved it… i had a feeling tina was the author… ok i hope you have a few more in there…pps
Ah, it’s always a true JOY to see your name on the posted chapters’ list, even if it’s not as often as your fans would hope : the author of I Fall Behind is simply unforgettable and, yes, I always was a huge fan of your talent. So, many many thanks for giving us this new gem of yours ! Take good care of you, I wish you all the best. ^_^
Hello 7PM, Wow wee More of your delightful and decadent drama. I just love how this whole story played out.Bette was acting within the limits of their renewed relationship. Tina was having fun outside of her connection with Bette.An now Bette has some ideas of what Tina would like to try in the privacy of their home.A little bonage sounds like a wonderful plan and I know you will continue this theme soon.A definite crowd pleaser. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.