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“Mom…what’s wrong.”
Tina bowed her head and tried to compose herself but the tears flowed. She wrapped her arms around her daughter and pulled her in tightly to her and spoke through soft sobs.
“Oh Ellie, I’m so sorry. I’m so sorry.”
Joe’s voice arrived before he did.
“Hey El, where’s that bread?”
He arrived in the kitchen and saw his two girls obviously upset and stopped in his tracks.
Ellie looked at him and her eyes begged him for help.
“Dad, what’s going on? I came in here and mom can barely speak, what’s going on?”
Joe walked toward Ellie and Tina and took Ellie into a gentle hug.
“El, let me talk to your mom for a minute. Why don’t you go and sit in the sitting room? We’ll bring dessert out in a minute and talk. Just give us one minute. Okay?”
Ellie looked at her father, skeptically, but glad for the calm that he’d brought into the room. Tina gave her a weak smile and added.
“Sweetie, just give us a minute. We’ll be right out. Okay.”
Ellie looked at her parents, was about to speak but instead nodded and went back into the dining room and sat down. She looked down and saw that her hands were shaking.
In the kitchen Joe walked up to Tina and put his arms around her.
“Tina we’ve talked this through like a hundred times, it’s going to be okay. I promise. We’ll do this right I promise.”
Tina sobbed into his shoulder.
“Joe, I feel like I’m being so selfish. How can I just tell her that her family isn’t here anymore? How can I hurt her like that?”
Joe looked down at the woman he had always loved and despite his own pain, knew that he owed her, knew that he had to be strong for her at this moment.
“Tina, we will always be a family… Always. We will always be here for her. That’s why we’re making sure we do this right. No matter what, she will always come first. You have always seen to that. You have always made sure that no matter what, I have always lived up to that. That is a fact I am very certain of. Look she’s probably scared to death out there. We have to tell her. If she’s upset we’ll deal with it. Tina, we can do this.”
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This was really well written chapter. I can just imagine the pain all three of them would have experienced having that conversation. The truth can be so painful to expose. (yet sometimes can be so healing once it’s out) Now on to the next level. I hope that Ellie is able to handle it with compassion. But that would also depend on how Tina raised her. Did she raise her to be tolerate and acceptting? From what you have shown of Tina in this story I think that Ellie will take it well but will have a few challegdes acceptting the changes in her family dynamics. Thanks for such a wonderful story :) Looking forward to your next chapter.
Since a third party was mentioned it would be natural for Ellie to ask who this person is. Tina will have to tell her something. It’s best to get it all out. Why reopen a wound later? Bleed once :)
I also wanted to say :) that was very big of Joe. I don’t think most men would not expose themselves like that. I think that he took responiblity for himself and his actions. And really showed Tina how much he loves her by supporting her and not letting her take all the blame for their marriage ending.
As you can tell I really, realy, realy love this story. Really :)
Now Tina has to tell Ellie that she is in love with a woman named Bette Porter, hopefully she won’t flip out about that part of the equation. PPS
Love your story too. Would have commented earlier but have been playing catch-up!
You outdid yourself w/this chapter. I felt as if I was there. PPVS.
A difficult chapter very well done. We’ll see now how Ellie will react after the shock has worn off.
Great update. Now I wonder what Ellie will do when Tina tells her about Bette. Great story. Thank you :)
omg this story has me so hooked please give me more
That was an incredible chapter. What is Ellie going to think of Bette?? Will Tina tell her????? I cannot wait until the next post.
That was really well handled. Now she just has to tell Ellie who it is she’s in love with. Great chapter, D&A. Thanks
Very emotional and Joe was strong and honst. I love the fact that he took is part of responsability. How Ellie will react when she will know that Her mother is in love with Bette Porter???? PPVS
Amazing Chapter!!! Now will Tina tell Ellie about Bette right away or give her a little time? Thank you PPS
That was a very emotional chapter for Tina and Ellie. Now is not the time to tell Ellie about Bette. Tina needs to be 1000% sure that this is what she wants and Ellie needs to get used to the idea that her parents are divorcing and that all is well despite the divorce. I think after Ellie has been able to digest and accept the divorce and all its ramifications and Tina feels comfortable with Bette, then they can tell her about Bette but not before because they would just be asking for trouble. The divorce is enough for her to hear and accept at this point. That was a great chapter and you handled it very well, if only life were like that. Thanks for posting.
Wow, that was a lot for Ellie to take in. She’s going to need to adjust to the fact that her parents are getting divorced, her father cheated and her mother is in love with someone else. I wonder if Tina will tell her about Bette now or wait a bit…maybe she won’t have a choice if Ellie starts asking questions. Please post soon….I’m nervous…
So powerful! Thank you for that beautifully structured interaction between emotionally mature people. If it were more like my disfunctional family there would have been yelling and violence before half of the talking was finished. Keep on writing. I look forward to everything you create.
Great update! You have managed to make very human characters, they sound real. None of them is totally good or totally bad, they just try their best, with their weakness. That’s something I love in your story. PPS.
oh btw ellie, another ‘blow’, i’m in-love with a woman!!!! roll my eyes-good luck T