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Tina answered while releasing a nervous laugh.
“Oh Bette, I don’t know …How about bigger, better breasts, tighter, smaller ass…I don’t know Bette there’s just so many perfect young bodies just waiting to pounce on Miss Sex personified, ‘Sex on legs’, Bette Porter.”
“C’mon, T, I think you’re exagerating just a bit now.”
Tina looked seriously at Bette and spoke quietly.
“Okay, Bette, here goes, some real honesty, my dark place. You ready? Inside while I smiled and laughed the little voice in my head was saying. ‘Who do you think you are Kinnard, you think you’ll be enough for her…you couldn’t even keep boring old Joe in line.’…”
Tina paused and looked intensely at Bette.
“I just feel so out of my league, Bette…”
Bette was shaken by Tina’s intense emotion, but she knew she had to come up with something good. She gently put her hands on Tina’s arms and looked directly into her eyes.
“First of all…there is nothing boring about your ex, second of all, there isn’t a doubt in my mind that if you really wanted to keep Joe in line, you would have and you know it.”
Bette paused, took a breath and continued.
“Tina listen to me. Out of my league? Are you out of your mind? You wanna talk about out of one’s league. Do you have any idea, how it feels to be the one walking into a room with you. Sweetie, if I’m Marylyn Monroe, than you my dear, are Grace Kelly and I for one, would much rather sleep with Grace Kelly than Marilyn Monroe. You have a one night stand with Marilyn Monroe, but Grace Kelly, you love, you worship, you build a life with her.”
Bette paused and took a deep breath before she continued.
“T, I don’t want to be Marilyn anymore, it’s lonely and shallow. I want to be a real live woman who is loved and who knows how to love the way someone like you deserves to be loved.”
Tina cried and laughed as she melted into Bette.
Bette grabbed onto Tina as tight as she could.
“T, I love you so much, I really want this to be forever.”
“I love you, Bette, so much.”
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What a great story I just caught up with it and started to read this yesterday….Bravo….
Great story – even with 15 pages I hated to come to the end!
The party seems pretty calm with only a couple of situations so far. Bette and Tina can’t seem to find time to enjoy the others body.
Just caught up with this story – freaking wonderful! PPS!
Great Chapter. Still my favorite current story. I will be sad to see it end. There is always room to start over. ISN’T THERE?
…and the award for Best Mom on the Planet goes to Mrs. Wilson. Wow some party. Maybe after the party B&T could slip away to a luxurious Bed and breakfast for some quality alone time. HintHint….
Excellent update. Love it and what a great party. Thank you for this story :)
Keep writing, you are doing very well. Briliant update
Wow, very cute and funny at the same time. Thanks for sharing this with us.
haaaaha what a party hey!!! Great mother Tina is. PPVS
I don’t know if I would have been as calm as Bette being interrupted the way they were. I loved talaula and tante_augustine’s comments. Very funny ladies. But they were right it was a cute and funny chapter. PPS
Hello D&A , Many thanks for another great post. It was so funny to have Bette and Tina so in need and then interrupted at every turn by these pesky kids. I can totally understand their frustration. There was such good humor at the party even with the couple of hiccups. I do hoe Bette and Tina get some loving time in the New Year. Just adoring this delicious drama. Much appreciation from A Fan.
Great chapter.
Eventually the kids’ party will be over, and B&T can ring in the New Year with a party of their own. Such a sweet chapter. Great update, DnA. Thanks :)
That was so sweet. Those teenagers are a pesky bunch. These two are in serious need of some alone time….
What a funny and sweet chapter!!!! I do feel sorry for Bette and Tina. I just hope Ellie knows how lucky she is. Thank you
If they had balls , they would be blue by now. :-)
I feel bad for them, damn college kids New Years Eve parties! If I had been the one with Tina, Justin would have bled to death, and that girl would have drowned in a pool of her own puke LOL. One track mind LOL. Thanks for the post Dazed.
Such an entertaining chapter. I laughed the whole way through! Those two need a little midnight lovin’.
Great chapter but I felt so sorry for them being interrupted at the wrong moments. But that’s kids for you, some you can leave alone and some you can’t. Maybe when the urchins go to sleep and the rest of them leave our girls can have their own celebration if they are not too tired. They were too cute earlier when Bette told her they were being watched. I actually thought Bette was kidding her. They are so much in love. Just lovely.