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Everything in Tina’s life was falling into place and she was prepared for anything that life was going to throw at her because she was going to be with Bette, the woman she loved.
She was ready…, for everything…, everything except for Bette’s reaction that is…
Tina stood still…, unable to move, unable to breathe.
She had excitedly told Bette the news…, expecting for Bette to be as happy as she was…, she thought Bette felt the same way…
How wrong she was…, There was no reply, no words in response to her news…
Not until Tina regained her shocked composure and was able to whisper a few words.
"I…, um…, I thought you would be happy…, I thought this is what we have both been waiting for…"
"I’m sorry Tina…, I don’t know what to say…, I’m just not sure…, we…"
Stunned at the reply Tina responded, trying hard to keep the instant tears at bay as she spoke, "you know what Bette…, forget it…, this is obviously an…, inconvenience for you." She turned around and began gathering her belongings together, "you know, it’s not like I’m asking to move in with you…, I’m just moving to the same city. I thought we had gotten past any ‘commitment’ issues."
Reaching the door she stopped, with her back to Bette she added. "I’m not sure we can get through this Bette…, we made it work living on different coasts because we wanted it to…, and now…, I don’t think we can continue like this…"
Bette looked on at Tina in silence.
"Goodbye Bette." Tina gave her final words on the situation and was gone before Bette was even able to blink.
**
Bette spent all night looking for Tina. She had called her until her voicemail couldn’t receive another message. She had well and truly screwed this up and she knew it.
Tina’s news had stunned her in ways she couldn’t even begin to explain. She was happy…, no, she was overjoyed with the information, yet her own reaction took her by complete surprise. In fact, she was stunned into silence.
Was it her fear of commitment that had finally gotten in the way of her own happiness? Had she stupidly hurt the one woman she has ever truly loved?
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You did great mate, fab one off story. Hopefully this will get the cogs turning on your other story. You are better than you think!! Oh and did I see some ‘Adoring Eyes’ in there?! ;o)
“you don’t give yourself enough credit”, black ;) wonderful one off. we’re waiting eagerly either for the next chapter of TST or another one off!
Perfect title for this one!
Hey there my friend! I was surprised to get the Crackberry message that you had posted, but it was well worth the wait and I loved it. There are certainly times where one-off stories get the juices flowing, and I hope that is the case for your other story, because I am eagerly anticipating your return to it (no pressure….yet). Great job Hun and keep it up!
Now who could possibly look into those beautiful brown eyes and say, no? Tina obviously made the right choice. Such a heart-warming and cleverly written one-out! I hope we see another one soon – and I have to add my voice to the others requesting another chapter of TST — I’m really missing that story!
this was great…i wouldn’t mind getting another one off from you ;)
pretty good one off…you have it in you just type it on the screen. ..
It was beautiful.. you definitely don’t give yourself enough credit black! :) Was simply lovely and great title. Hope this gets your juices revving for TST or another one off… I’m not complaining :D. Thank you!
This was wonderful. Thanks so much.
That was excellent, I hope it got the juices flowing so we can read something else from you soon.
That was just AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful story! So full of emotions – and a happy ending! Thank you! I sure would love to read more stories like this!
Wow! Quite a story!
aw! so great so much love! waaaaaay better than anything S6 has to offer! thank you
Just like Jo and Gumby have done with their stories, I am left speechless. Gumby thank you for encouraging Black. You did well. I would love to see more of this story if you so desire.
That was an excellent story and I hope it served its purpose for you. Could it possibly be expanded for a few chapters. The way it was left could be the end or the start of something wonderful. Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for sharing a lovely, moving and heart warming story.
That was excellent, thank you for sharing it with us readers. Now, more please.
That was wonderful and love it, love the happy ending and thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, glad to catch up with your stories and love it all, thanks!
Hey buddy! Sooo sorry for making it so late. I have been meaning to read your story for days, but never seemed to find the right time. I’m glad I did, and I want to tell you that this is a great great great chapter! You did it! And formidably (even if that word doesn’t exist.)! Seriously, I’m thrilled by how wonderful your writing is and by how bold you are, setting yourself those challenges that make you outdo yourself every time… Bravo! I loved this piece and I really hope you’ll get over this writer’s block and deliver us an update of TST very soon! Thanks, PPS and talk soon elsewhere… ;) K